Year 7 students read and respond to "Trash" by Andy Mulligan, developing their reading skills through the Patterned Partner Reading strategy. Collaboratively, they explore the novel's setting, characterisation and themes such as the cycle of poverty. They also write an expository essay.This novel study is recommended for students in year 7 or 8.
Reading strategies, Writing, Poverty, Crime, Mystery, Technology.
Year 8 Achievement Standard
Receptive modes (listening, reading and viewing)
By the end of Year 8, students understand how the selection of text structures is influenced by the selection of language mode and how this varies for different purposes and audiences. Students explain how language features, images and vocabulary are used to represent different ideas and issues in texts.
Students interpret texts, questioning the reliability of sources of ideas and information. They select evidence from the text to show how events, situations and people can be represented from different viewpoints. They listen for and identify different emphases in texts, using that understanding to elaborate upon discussions.
Productive modes (speaking, writing and creating)
Students understand how the selection of language features can be used for particular purposes and effects. They explain the effectiveness of language choices they use to influence the audience. Through combining ideas, images and language features from other texts, students show how ideas can be expressed in new ways.
Students create texts for different purposes, selecting language to influence audience response. They make presentations and contribute actively to class and group discussions, using language patterns for effect. When creating and editing texts to create specific effects, they take into account intended purposes and the needs and interests of audiences. They demonstrate understanding of grammar, select vocabulary for effect and use accurate spelling and punctuation.
In this Learning Module you are going to read and respond to the novel 'Trash' by Andy Mulligan. Through discussion in class, in your reading groups and online, you will analyse the novel. Your final assessment will be an essay.
Focus Questions
Our main inquiry focus is: Can doing something wrong be right?
We will also focus on the following questions:
What is the novel about?
How are the characters developed?
How does the author present the information?
Learning Intention: To draw on your background knowledge as you imagine the worst place in the world to live.
Comment: Imagine the worst place in the world you could live. In your response explain the following:
What it so awful about it?
Why do you think you would not like it?
Do you think others would feel the same as you? Why/why not?
Read your peers' responses. Comment on at least 2 other students' comments, explaining why you would/wouldn't like living there. Start with @Name, inserting the student's name so they know you are commenting on them.
This learning module was designed using the Learning by Design framework (Kalantzis and Cope) which is based on Multiliteracies theory.
Experiencing the known is valuing the prior knowledge of students. It builds upon their background knowledge of the topic.
This learning module uses Pattern Partnered Reading - Critical Literacy Enhancing Students Comprehension of Text, McLaughlin and DeVoogd (2004).
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literacy: Creating Texts
Use a range of software, including word processing programs, to confidently create, edit and publish written and multimodal texts (ACELY1728)
Australian Curriculum: General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Imagine possibilities and connect ideas (Level 5)
Thinking about thinking (metacognition) (Level 5)
Transfer knowledge into new contexts (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To imagine the living conditions of the characters in the novel.
What would it be like to live in a dump? Using the Y-Chart, imagine what it would be like to live on a rubbish dump. What would it look like, feel like and smell like?
Comment: Share some of your ideas about what the strongest sense would be for you. Read and respond to at least 2 other students, explaining why you agree or disagree with them.
In this 'experiencing the known' activity, students use the Y Chart to think about the question, using a variety of senses. This activity is designed to encourage students to think about the physical environment, how it feels and smells as well as what it looks like.
Y Chart
Analysing the obvious features of something. An extension of the Y chart is the X chart which includes Thinks Like or Tastes Like as well as Sounds Like, Smells Like and Looks Like.
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To understand why people are forced to live in rubbish dumps.
Comment: After viewing, respond below. How do you feel? Share your thoughts in the comment box. Read and respond to at least 2 other students, building on their ideas about why people are forced to live in rubbish dumps.
Then, Using the 5 whys strategy, think about the people in the clip. Ask 5 questions that start with 'why' about their lives.
For example:
In this 'experiencing the new' activity, students view and respond to a text. This input is designed to broaden their experiences and knowledge.
The clip can be quite confronting so it is important to allow the students to respond openly to the clip; you may like to do this initially in a circle time discussion. After the students have shared their feelings and thoughts, they respond using the Five whys teaching strategy. Using open-ended questions enables students to bring their own knowledge and experiences to the text.
Five Whys
The 5 Whys is a simple problem-solving technique that helps you probe for information and get to the root of a problem quickly. Based on a Japanese philosophy, the 5 Whys strategy is about thinking long-term and looking both ahead and behind, not just in the present. This can be done in twos or threes with the third person being a silent observer. One person takes the role of questioner and the other answers the questions. The questions and answers can be recorded for further discussion and or a final reflection. Very often, the answer to the first “why” will prompt another “why” and the answer to the second “why” will prompt the third “why” and so on. It can show the role of questions beginning with “why” and deepen thinking.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Pose questions (Level 5)
Identify and clarify information and ideas (Level 5)
Thinking about thinking (metacognition) (Level 5)
Personal and Social Capability
Appreciate diverse perspectives (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To understand some of the challenges in the setting of the novel.
Watch the BBC documentary 'Toughest place to be a bus driver'.
Challenges | Explain how these challenges are depicted (shown) in the documentary |
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Create an Update in Scholar where you write one PEC paragraph about 'The Toughest Place to be a Bus Driver'. Your paragraph should cover the following points:
In this 'experiencing the new' activity, students view and respond to the BBC documentary 'The Toughest Place to be a Bus Driver'. This film is set in the Philippines, which is the setting of the novel. This activity will help give students knowledge about the setting of the novel.
As they watch the film, ask them to fill in a retrieval chart. This will enable students to bring their own knowledge and experiences to the text.
Key areas to focus on:
Throughout the viewing you may need to stop and explain important points or vocabulary.
These include:
Following the film, allow the students to individually reflect on the program through a journal reflection and class discussion.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Creating texts
Use a range of software, including word processing programs, to confidently create, edit and publish written and multimodal texts (ACELY1728)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Identify and clarify information and ideas (Level 5)
Personal and Social Capability
Appreciate diverse perspectives (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: Use evidence provided to predict what you think the novel will be about.
Look at the front cover. Think about the colours used in the image. Read the blurb on the front cover.
Make a prediction, what do you think the novel is about?
Comment: Share your prediction. Read and respond to 3 other students, using evidence from the novel to explain why you agree or disagree with their prediction.
Watch the trailer without the sound on.
Using the Voice Memos app on your electronic device record a soundtrack and a voice over for what you think the narrator might be saying about the book throughout the unit.
Create an Update where you upload your voice memo, sharing it with the class. Listen to at least 2 other students' voice overs and give feedback on their strengths and ideas for improving them.
Predicting is an important reading strategy. First Steps - Reading Resource Book states that:
Predicting helps readers to activate their prior knowledge about a topic, so they begin to combine what they know with the new material in the text. Predictions are based on clues in the text such as pictures, illustrations, subtitles and plot. Clues for predictions will also come from readers’ prior knowledge about the author, text form or content. Students should be able to justify the source of their predictions. Readers can be encouraged to make personal predictions before and during reading. During reading, effective readers adjust and refine their earlier predictions as new information is gathered and new connections are made. Predictions are usually related to events, actions or outcomes and will be either confirmed or rejected once the text has been read. Students can also use predicting to identify unknown words either before or after decoding. These types of predictions are usually based on the context clues; students need to determine whether the word makes sense in the text.
In the voice over activity encourage students to think about the timing; having them try to verbalise their prediction will help students bring in their prior knowledge and experiences.
Example of a student's prediction (2015)
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Creating literature
Experiment with text structures and language features and their effects in creating literary texts, for example, using rhythm, sound effects, monologue, layout, navigation and colour (ACELT1805)
Literacy: Interacting with others
Plan, rehearse and deliver presentations, selecting and sequencing appropriate content and multimodal elements to promote a point of view or enable a new way of seeing (ACELY1720)
Literacy: Creating texts
Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive texts, selecting aspects of subject matter and particular language, visual, and audio features to convey information and ideas (ACELY1725)
Use a range of software, including word processing programs, to confidently create, edit and publish written and multimodal texts (ACELY1728)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Identify and clarify information (Level 5)
Think about thinking (metacognition) (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To understand narrative structure by reading and responding to chapter 1.
Read chapter 1 as a class.
After reading share your thoughts with your partner.
In pairs, decide what part of the narrative structure you just read.
Remember that the narrative structure is:
Comment: Share which part of the narrative structure chapter 1 was. Use evidence from the novel to support your ideas. Read one other student's comment and state why you agree or disagree with them, using evidence from the novel to support your opinion.
Create a concept map that shows what the boys search for in the rubbish dump. As an extension, you can create an Update and add your concept map (take a photo and upload it). Look at other students' concept maps and comment on them.
In this 'conceptualising by naming' activity, students work in groups to identify the narrative structure, using evidence to support their ideas.
They then name the things the boys look for when they are searching the rubbish dump. This simple activity will help assess what the students have understood as they read.
Students can use a variety of apps to create the concept map, however, we've found that this activity works best on paper. While the students are creating their concept map, the teacher (with guidance from the students) should create a concept map on the classroom wall. Students will add to this concept map throughout the unit. Also students may photograph their concept maps and post them in an Update in Scholar.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To understand what money can buy by reading and responding to chapter 2.
Read chapter 2. Highlighting/making notes as we read.
After reading chat with a partner about what you just read.
Then with your partner, work out: How much is eleven hundred (11 000) pesos? Using the internet convert 11 000 Phillipine Pesos (PHP) in Australian Dollars (AUD).
Use examples from the novel to find what the boys could buy with their money.
Amount in PESOS | What they can buy | Amount in DOLLARS | What you can buy |
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Refer back to your concept map. What is important about the bag? Use a different colour to expand on your concept map. Theorise what the items could have been used for, why the owner may have them or what they boys may use them for.
Highlight this quote in the book (the last bit of chapter 2).
Comment: What does the quote mean to you? Explain your answer. Read and respond to at least 2 other students, commenting on ideas that extend your understanding of the quote.
This 'conceptualising by naming' activity allows students to understand the value of the money found; this will help them increase their own knowledge and make sense of the amount and what this meant to the children.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Personal and Social Capability
Appreciate diverse perspectives (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To analyse your own questions to ensure they require critical thinking.
Read chapter 3. Highlight and make at least 3 notes as you read.
Take a screen shot of your quote and notes like we have. Create an update sharing these quotes. Give it a title, Part 1 - Chapter 3 (Quotes).
Write 3 fat questions.
Using the Bloom's Taxonomy sheet, decide what type of questions you have asked.
Add your questions to the line.
Share with your partner.
Comment: Share at least one of your fat questions. Then answer at least two other questions.
In this 'conceptualising by naming' activity, students read and make notes. Making notes is an important strategy that students need to learn. Making notes can help to increase students' understanding of the story, make connections and improve their predictions. Students can read the text, making notes as they read or they can read and then skim the text, adding their notes. Students should take a screenshot of each note sharing these in an Update.
After reading and sharing their quotes, the students write 3 fat questions. Fat questions need more than a yes or no answer. After writing their questions, using the Bloom's Taxonomy guide, they add them to the Bloom's Taxonomy line. The types of questions will help give you more data about the students. Students should be moving to interpretative questions.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Pose questions (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To identify and infer big ideas in the novel through sketches based on chapter 4.
Read chapter 4. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Take screenshots of your quotes and notes uploading them to your own Update in Scholar.
Read - Pause - Sketch
Sketch an idea from the section of text your just read. It might show the character Rat, where he lives or the three boys talking together. However, it must also represent an important idea or theme in the novel such as the need for secrecy or whether doing something wrong can be right.
Add quotes around the image that support your ideas.
Take a photo of your sketch and share it in an Update. View and respond to at least 3 other students. In your responses to other students, comment on an important idea from the novel that you can see is represented in the image. If there is not one, perhaps you can suggest one.
Drawing the images is a great way to assess students' comprehension levels, in this 'conceptualizing by naming' activity, you are asking students to read and visualise what they're read. Getting the students to add quotes around their image can also support their reading and help them to question what they are visualisng versus what was written. Creating an Update in Community enables the students to add an image to their post and share them with their peers. If it is difficult for students to scan and post their images, they could be displayed around the room instead; students could then walk around and discuss them with a partner, identifying similarities and differences.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and each sketches an idea from that page of text. Then the partners share and discuss their drawings. (A blackline master that contains multiple sketching spaces facilitates this process.) This continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To comprehend the deeper meaning of the novel by reading and responding to chapters 5 and 6.
Read chapters 5 and 6. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Connect
Reflect on chapters 5 and 6. Post an update - write at least one paragraph. Use the double entry journal guide to help scaffold your paragraph.
From the text | From your mind |
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Read - Pause - Summarise
Comment: Write one PEC paragraph summarising what has happened in chapters 5 and 6. Read other students' paragraphs and comment on one that you think is good, explaining why.
Look back at chapter 6. Write 2 fat questions, sharing with your table. Categorise your question on the Bloom's Line. Answer 1-2 questions at your table.
By this stage students should be reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back and read and respond to other students' answers.
This type of journal consists of two parts. On the left hand side, students record interesting parts or facts from the text, excursion, film, demonstration, experiment or talk. On the right hand side they record their responses and reactions. Variations include: Author’s main points/Question you want to ask; Literal/Inferential statements; Facts/Inferences; In the text/My connections.
Read - Pause - Make Connections
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause to make and share text-self, text-text, or text-world connections. When using this pattern, students can use connection stems, such as 'This reminds me of ...', 'I remember an experience I had like that,' 'I remember another book I read about this.'
Read - Pause-Retell or Read -Pause-Summarise
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and the listening partner retells what happened on that page (narrative text) or summarises (information text). This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and Creative Thinking
Pose questions (Level 5)
Think about thinking (metacognition) (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to make a prediction about what will happen next.
Read chapter 1. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Comment: Write a one paragraph prediction based on what you have read of the story so far. You might like to address the following questions:
What do you think the boys were looking at on Father Juilliard's computer?
What could Gabriel Olondriz be in prison for?
What do you think will happen next?
Read at least one other student's prediction that you liked, explaining what evidence made you think it was a good prediction.
Students should continue to work more independently and in pairs. Students who finish early are encouraged to revisit other students' work later to read and respond.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To connect to the text by reading and responding to chapter 2.
Read chapter 2. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Reflect and Discuss
Comment: What did you think of the events in the chapter? Were you surprised by what happened? How would you have reacted to a situation like this? What would Raphael do now? Write a PEC paragraph response.
Students should continue to make notes as they read, sharing these in an update on Scholar. Students who finish early should be encouraged to read and respond to other students' notes, discussing the different quotes that were highlighted and the notes they created.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause. Each asks the other a question about the section of the text just read, to which the other partner responds. This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Ethical Understanding
Consider points of view (Level 5)
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and Australia's engagement with Asia
Learning Intention: To understand how the words create tension in the novel.
How did the author create tension? Complete the retrieval chart below.
Technique | Example | Effect |
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Short sentences |
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Repetition |
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Italicised thoughts | ||
Dialogue | ||
Metaphor | ||
Strong final sentences |
Plot the tension in the novel. Add dot points to show the event in the novel when the tension increases.
Comment: Summarise your findings and answer the question, how did the author create tension? Read and respond to at least 3 other students, building on and adding to their ideas where possible.
Chapter 2 of part 2 details an intense police interrogation. Choose a section of text from the interrogation and have students analyse the mode, field and tenor using a retrieval chart. This allows them to reflect on the author's choice of words and use of descriptive langauge to maintain and build tension.
Analyse a text by identifying its features and their effects. Consider the features of linguistic, visual, audio, spatial and gestural modes.
To help support all students, we chose to differentiate the retrieval chart. There are three different levels and a blank one below.
Possible Answers
Technique | Example | Effect |
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Short sentences |
What could anyone do? Rat had the envelope. Rat had the ID. Time passed. Nobody looked up. I was put in a chair. I shook my head. Everyone's happy. I did not find a bag. I found money. I nodded. I could not speak. Valuable or trash? My legs got stronger. |
Makes it more intense and more scary. Makes you read it quicker and makes you more interested. |
Repetition |
"Where is the bag? "Yes sir, yes sir "I haven't done anything". "I'm sorry. I'm sorry." |
Makes reader concerned. Makes reader feel the emotions that he is feeling. |
Italicised thoughts |
What plans do they have for me? |
It makes it easy to find. Stands out. Inside his head. |
Dialogue |
'You can read, can you? said the man in the suit. 'This piece of shit can read?' 'Yes, sir, I can read!' 'How's that? Huh?' He stood opposite me, leaned in and lifted my face. I could smell his cigarettes and his sweat. 'Who taught trash like you to read? What's your name?' 'Raphael, sir - ' 'Who taught you to read?' 'Gardo, and my auntie.' 'What kind of bill? What address?' 'I didn't see, I didn't look.' 'How much money?' 'Eleven hundred.' 'Exactly eleven hundred? How many notes?' 'One five, six ones.' 'Where are they now?' 'I gave them to my auntie. I kept one for myself. 'What about the bag?' 'No bag, sir.' |
Makes it more intense. Makes the reader ignore the other stuff and focus on the two talking. Feels like rapid-fire questions which increases the tension. Moves quickly. |
Metaphor |
'This piece of shit can read?' '... breadwinner, ...' 'You are a piece of garbage.' |
To show the audience that the police officer thinks Raphael is worthless.
Shock value |
Strong final sentences | My legs got stronger. I knew then that I could run forever. | Gives the reader hope. Raphael has been made stronger due to this experience. |
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Language: Language for interaction
Understand how accents, styles of speech and idioms express and create personal and social identities (ACELA1529)
Language: Expressing and developing ideas
Investigate vocabulary typical of extended and more academic texts and the role of abstract nouns, classification, description and generalisation in building specialised knowledge through language(ACELA1537)
Literacy: Texts in context
Show how ideas and points of view in texts are conveyed through the use of vocabulary, including idiomatic expressions, objective and subjective language, and that these can change according to context (ACELY1698)
Learning Intention: To infer what is happening in the story based on clues, mysteries and facts.
Read chapter 3 and 4. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Write down 8 clues, mysteries, facts or pieces of information that you know about the story. After recording your own facts, find out what your peers know and add those facts.
Facts I know | Facts that my peers know |
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Add what you know about the mystery to your concept map. Remember to add:
Comment: What fact do you think will be very important in solving the mystery? Comment on other students' opinions, explaining why you agree or disagree with them.
This 'analyzing critically' activity allows students to share their ideas but also supports the students, valuing what each student knows and helps them make connections that they may not have yet made.
Give One/Get One allows struggling students to gather new knowledge and information about a content topic. Since students share information and question each other, all students in the classroom—regardless of ability levels—can reap positive rewards from this strategy. The strategy can be used during the study of a lesson to reinforce key concepts or as a review after completing a unit of study
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Imagine possibilities and connect ideas (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To look closely at the word and sentence level to help you comprehend the novel.
Read chapter 1 and 2. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Bookmark
Comment:
Read other students' comments and comment on one that interests you. Explain why.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally, pausing periodically to complete bookmarks noting the most interesting information: something that confused them, a vocabulary word they think the whole class should talk about, or an illustration, graphic, or map that helped them to understand what they read.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To capture the big ideas/themes in chapters 3 and 4 of the novel through an image.
Read chapter 3 and 4. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Sketch.
Sketch Colva, Colva Prison interior, Sister Olivia walking through the cell. Take a photo of your sketch. Upload it to an Update in Scholar. Explain what you have included and the ideas that are represented. Comment and respond to at least 2 other students, explaining why you like their sketch.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and each sketches an idea from that page of text. Then the partners share and discuss their drawings. (A blackline master that contains multiple sketching spaces facilitates this process.) This continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to summarise chapters 5 and 6.
Read chapter 5 and 6. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Discuss
Add to your concept map. What new details about the mystery have we learnt? Add quotes to help support your ideas. Remember to add page numbers to all your quotes.
Comment: Share one important idea from your discussion. Then comment on 1-2 students' comments, noting any new ideas that you learnt.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause. Each asks the other a question about the section of the text just read, to which the other partner responds. This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To define what corruption is and understand how it works.
View the following videos on corruption.
In a class discussion, share what you found interesting about the videos.
View the image that appeared in the second video. Locate the Philippines.
As a class, discuss what corrupt events have occurred in novel.
Comment: Share your definition of corruption and an example of corruption (this can be from the novel or real life). Comment on a definition that you think is good, adding to it if you can.
This 'experiencing the new' activity is really important. If a student is absent from school, ensure that they are able to catch up and learn about what corruption is. Making links within the novel as well as in the real world should support students' understanding.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Ethical understanding
Explore rights and responsibilities (Level 5)
Analyse rights and responsibilities in relation to the duties of a responsible citizen
Consider points of view (Level 5)
Draw conclusions from a range of points of view associated with challenging ethical dilemmas
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to make a prediction about what will happen in chapters 7 and 8.
Read chapters 7 and 8. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Predict
Comment: Write a PEC paragraph prediction based on what you have read so far. Include:
Read at least one other student's prediction that you liked, explaining what evidence made you think it was a good prediction.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners begin by making predictions based on the cover and title of the book. Next, they take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause to confirm or revise their predictions and make new predictions about the next page. This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to summarise chapter 9.
Read chapter 9. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Retell/Summarise
Comment: Write 4 dot points retelling what the boys have found out in chapter 9.
Add information to your concept map.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Read - Pause - Retell/Summarise
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and the listening partner retells what happened on that page (narrative text) or summarises (information text). This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722
Learning Intention: To infer deeper meaning of the novel in chapter 10.
Read chapter 10. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Analyse
With a partner, discuss: Gordo, Rat and Raphael lied to Sister Olivia. What happened to her as a result of their lies? Do you think this was right? Can doing something wrong be right?
Comment: Explain what you think Olivia means when she writes this at the end of chapter 10? Read 1-2 other students' explanations and comment on whether you agree or not and why.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Read-Pause-Analyse
Australian Curriculum Content Description
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Ethical Understanding
Consider points of view (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To analyse the big ideas/theme
Read chapters 1, 2 and 3. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Analyse
Comment: In these chapters the boys break the law. Think again about the main inquiry question of this learning module: Can doing something wrong be right? What do you think of this? Are the boys' crimes justified? Provide reasons for your opinion. Then comment on another student's comment, explaining why you agree or disagree with them.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Ethical Understanding
Consider points of view (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To identify and infer big ideas/themes in the novel through sketches based on chapter 4.
Read chapter 4. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Sketch
Sketch an idea from the section of the text just completed. Take a photo of your sketch and upload it in an Update in Scholar. Discuss what you tried to show in your drawing, adding quotes from the text. Respond to at least 2 other students' drawings, identifying the big ideas/themes that you can see in their sketches.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and each sketches an idea from that page of text. Then the partners share and discuss their drawings. (A blackline master that contains multiple sketching spaces facilitates this process.) This continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To comprehend chapters 5 and 6 by making connections between them and your own experiences.
Read chapters 5 and 6. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Make Connections
Comment: Reflect on chapters 5 and 6. Write a paragraph, beginning with one of the following:
This reminds me of ...
I remember and experience I had like that ... (explain)
This reminds me of another book/movie I read/I saw ... (explain)
As I read this I was feeling/thinking ...
Then read other students' comments and comment on one that you liked or agreed with, explaining why.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Read - Pause - Make Connections
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause to make and share text-self, text-text, or text-world connections. When using this pattern, students can use connection stems, such as 'This reminds me of ...', 'I remember an experience I had like that,' 'I remember another book I read about this.'
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Learning Intention: To comprehend chapter 7 of the novel by summarising it.
Read chapter 7. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Summarise
Discuss the following with your pair/group.
Who was Fredrico Gonz and what did he do?
List 2 main points from the 'Star Extra'?
List 2 main points from the 'Inquirer'
List 2 main points from the 'Daily Star'
List 2 main points from the 'University Voice'
Which newspaper liked Zapanta the most? Why do you think this?
Which newspaper like him the least? Why?
Comment: Why is this chapter important? Share some ideas from your discussion. Then read other students' comments and identify one or two that gave you some new ideas.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and the listening partner retells what happened on that page (narrative text) or summarises (information text). This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722
Learning Intention: To understand the importance of context in the novel, particularly the importance of the 'Day of the Dead'.
Read the following information:
All souls day in the Philippines
In the Philippines, All Souls' Day is known as Araw ng mga Patay (literally meaning Day of the Dead). November 1st and 2nd are two of the most important days in the Filipino calendar. Those two days represent a celebration that has close ties to the Catholic Church and the Spanish occupation. The day of November 1st is All Saints Day and November 2nd is All Souls Day. These two days are marked for the remembrance of relatives that have passed on and the celebration of their lived. During the day families take time to pray for the souls od the deceased and pay their respects. After all the hard work the family members eat a picnic style meal in the cemetery which is closer to a feast than a meal. There are usually people playing games, telling stories, and lots of kids around. The atmosphere is anything but somber since this a celebration of the dead.
In the US, people ask you "What are you gonna be for Halloween?" But in the Philippines, people ask you "What time should we meet at the cemetery?
Although there are some who actually celebrate Halloween in the Philippines by partying or getting dressed up in a costume, most people simply do so by staying at the cemetery for a few hours, or maybe even the whole day/night. And this goes on from the 31st of October, where people start visiting relatives who have passed away and cleaning their tombs, and goes all the way to 2ND of November, or more commonly known as All Saints’ Day. I think this is mainly because most Filipino families are Catholics and have been colonized by the Spaniards for over 300 hundred years, therefore this tradition is almost similar to the Mexican concept of the Day of the Dead.
And during this time, families get to spend time together that it's kind of a clan reunion. The mood is usually happy and light, and it's more of a positive idea of remembering relatives who have passed away.
Watch the video:
Comment: What is one fact you know about the Day of the Dead? Read through other students' facts and keep adding more. Try not to repeat what other students add. Then comment on why the Day of the Dead is important in the novel.
This 'experiencing the new' activity helps the students understand the novel better. Students who have a better understanding of the Day of the Dead will be able to make better connections and meaning of the novel.
When students add their comments, get them all to write a fact in the comment box and then they press "Add comment" at the same time. A list of facts will appear. Select refresh to keep updating the page. Students read through and see if they can add more facts. This collaborative "competitive" activity can engage students and promote reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural Understanding
Develop respect for cultural diversity
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and its diversity
OI.1 The peoples and countries of Asia are diverse in ethnic background, traditions, cultures, belief systems and religions
Learning Intention: To identify and infer big ideas in the novel through sketches based on Part 5: chapters 1 and 2.
Read chapters 1 and 2. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Sketch
Divide your page into 6 boxes. Sketch 6 ideas/themes or scenes from chapter 1 and 2. Take a photo and upload your image to an Update that you create in Scholar. Respond to at least 2 other students.
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Comment: Look at other students' sketches. Comment on ones that you think are effective, explaining why.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause and each sketches an idea from that page of text. Then the partners share and discuss their drawings. (A blackline master that contains multiple sketching spaces facilitates this process.) This continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural Understanding
Australian Curriculum Cross-Curricular Priorities
Asia and its diversity
OI.1 The peoples and countries of Asia are diverse in ethnic background, traditions, cultures, belief systems and religions
OI.2 Interrelationships between humans and the diverse environments in Asia shape the region and have global implications.
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to make a prediction about what will happen in Part 5: chapters 3 and 4.
Read chapter 3 and 4. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Read - Pause - Predict and Discuss
Comment: What would have happened to Pia Dante if they didn't find her? What do you think will happen next? Read other students' predictions and comment on ones that you think are interesting, giving reasons for your opinion.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Partners take turns reading a page silently or orally. After reading each page, they pause. Each asks the other a question about the section of the text just read, to which the other partner responds. This process continues throughout the reading.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Interpreting, analysing, evaluating
Use prior knowledge and text processing strategies to interpret a range of types of texts (ACELY1722)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
imagine and describe the feelings and motivations of people in challenging situations
Learning Intention: To creatively consider different points of view.
Read chapter 5. Highlight/make notes as you read.
Comment: Imagine .......... Write at least one paragraph describing what Behala dumpsite would have looked like the following morning. You could choose to write from the point of view of one of the residents. Read other students' paragraphs and comment on one you like, explaining why you think it is a good paragraph.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Personal and Social Capability
Appreciate diverse perspectives (Level 5)
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To understand the deeper meaning of the novel.
Read chapter 6 and the Appendix . Highlight/make notes as you read.
Comment: Reflect on the focus question: Can doing something wrong be right? Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your response. Then comment on 1-2 other students' responses, explaining why you agree or disagree with them.
Students continue reading more independently, working on the activities in pairs. Students who finish early can come back to read and respond to other students' answers.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Literature and context
Identify and explore ideas and viewpoints about events, issues and characters represented in texts drawn from different historical, social and cultural contexts (ACELT1619)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Ethical Understanding
Consider points of view (Level 5)
draw conclusions from a range of points of view associated with challenging ethical dilemmas
Intercultural Understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To use evidence from the novel to support your ideas on your concept map.
Complete your concept map, ensuring all connections are made. Ensure that you have quotes to support your ideas.
Comment: Share one new connection you made on your concept map. Read other students' comments and comment on ones that you connected with in some way.
Students should have been adding to their concept map throughout the novel. The concept map should be completed in this activity; ensure students have added quotes where possible. This concept map helps demonstrate students' knowledge of the novel and allows the teacher to differentiate and support students who may not have made all the connections.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Creating literature
Literature: Responding to literature
Learning Intention: To discuss and analyse the repetition of certain words in the novel.
Using the search function in iBooks, search the novel for the word "seed".When and where does it appear? What does it mean by seed? After discussing and analysing, add this information to your concept map.
Do the same for the phrase "It is accomplished". Add this information to your concept map.
Comment: Share what you found about the word "seed" or the phrase "It is accomplished".
Provide individual support to students who require help with using the search function in iBooks. The religious symbolism may also need scaffolding through whole class discussion or by the teacher adding comments to the online discussion.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To develop vocabulary to describe characters.
In pairs you will be assigned one of the main characters. Brainstorm a list of adjectives that describe the character. Use a thesaurus to help brainstorm more words. Use a green texta to write the positive words and a red texta to write the negative words. Cut them up and place in an envelope. Your teacher will then swap the envelopes around.
In your original pair, read open up your envelope and sort through the words. Using the words available, try to work out which character you have.
Comment: Do you agree or disagree with the words you received to describe your character? Add some examples to support your point. Read and respond to at least 2 other students.
Nail that character can be completed in a variety of ways. You might like to adapt this to suit your class.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Intercultural understanding
Empathise with others (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To understand the importance of quotes to support your ideas in your writing.
Your teacher is going to show you how use quotes correctly in your writing. In a PEC paragraph you:
Read the following example showing a quote about Raphael's bravery.
Gardo and Rat both think that Raphael is very brave for surviving the police interrogation. Gardo reflects on this when writes to Sister Olivia “what Raphael went through in the police station… Sister I do not know how he went through that. I thought he was soft before that, just a little boy who would break, but I was wrong.” (p. 103). This shows that Gardo admired Raphael for his courage.
Highlight the 4 parts as described in the dot points above.
Read another example which shows how Gardo feels about Raphael.
Gardo is like a big brother to Raphael. He is strong and protective, never leaving Raphael’s side. The two go through everything together. Such as when Raphael is arrested, Gardo feels it too, “Gardo was right with me at once, and he was talking fast, saying, “What are you doing? What has he done?” (p. 56). This tells the reader just how much Gardo cares about Raphael and through out the whole book Gardo continues to display his caring nature.
Highlight the 4 parts as described in the dot points above.
Comment: Choose one of the following quotes and write your own practice paragraph; share it on Scholar. Comment on 1-2 paragraphs that you think are well written. Explain why.
“The kid was sitting up, just in his shorts, gazing at me with frightened eyes and his big broken teeth sticking out of his mouth.” (p.22, Rat).
“Gardo got his arm around me but someone pushed him off… He was screaming at me. trying to get to me,and a policeman grabbed him by the neck and threw him off.” (p.56, Gardo).
“I was a trash boy since I was old enough to move without help and pick things up. That was what - three years old, and I was sorting.” (p.5, Raphael).
This activity may need more or less scaffolding, depending on the students' ability. Allow students to experiment first, then after they have completed their PEC, work with small groups or individual students to help improve their writing. More focus and emphasis should be made here as the formative feedback will have a bigger impact and this will reflect in their essay.
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Creating literature
Experiment with text structures and language features and their effects in creating literary texts, for example, using rhythm, sound effects, monologue, layout, navigation and colour (ACELT1805)
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Creating texts
Edit for meaning by removing repetition, refining ideas, reordering sentences and adding or substituting words for impact (ACELY1726)
Learning Intention: Describe what an 'A' grade essay includes.
Brainstorm everything you think an 'A' grade essay includes on a post it note. Think about:
As a class, place your post it notes into the following columns.
Content: Stating and supporting ideas | Structure and organisation | Language features |
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Your teacher will sort the post its and record them for you. This will be used to help write your essay.
Comment: What do you think is the most important part of the essay? Share your ideas. Read and respond to 2 - 3 other students.
In this 'conceptualising by naming' activity, students draw on their prior knowledge of essay writing and label what they think should be assessed in the essay. This allows students to develop a stronger understanding of the essay structure and what they will be assessed on. Where possible, the rubric should be edited to use the language the students use in this activity.
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and creative thinking
Thinking about thinking (metacognition) (Level 5)
Learning Intention: To understand how to plan and write your essay.
Pick one of the following essay questions. Extend yourself; do not pick the easiest one.
After choosing your essay question, brainstorm your ideas.
After brainstorming, organise your points. There are many different ways you can do this. Pick one that works best for you.
Below are some examples:
Using your brainstorm, think about the logical order you can put these ideas in. Think about what is important. Make sure your points relate back to the essay topic/question. This step is really important; it saves you time when you go to write and also ensures that you have an essay that sticks to the point and follows a logical order/sequence.
This quote cheat sheet could help support you.
Insert Quote Cheat Sheet
Read the assignment sheet and CQ rubric and/or Rubric in Scholar. Ensure you understand what is being asked of you.
Insert essay question and CQ Rubric
Start the project. After typing your first draft submit it for peer feedback. Read and give feedback to at least 2 other students. Ensure the feedback is relevant and helpful.
Students should be encouraged to seek feedback from their peers and the teacher throughout the planning process.
Project Rubric
Australian Curriculum Content Descriptions
Literature: Responding to literature
Reflect on ideas and opinions about characters, settings and events in literary texts, identifying areas of agreement and difference with others and justifying a point of view (ACELT1620)
Literacy: Creating texts
Edit for meaning by removing repetition, refining ideas, reordering sentences and adding or substituting words for impact (ACELY1726)
Use a range of software, including word processing programs, to confidently create, edit and publish written and multimodal texts (ACELY1728)
Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive texts, selecting aspects of subject matter and particular language, visual, and audio features to convey information and ideas (ACELY1725)
Australian Curriculum General Capabilities
Critical and creative thinking
Organise and process information (Level 5)
Title: (Source); Figure 1: Photo by Prue Gill; Figure 2: Y-Chart (Source); Figure 2a: Photo by Prue Gill; Figure 3: Five Whys created by Prue Gill; Figure 3a: Photo by Prue Gill; Figure 4: By User: (WT-shared) Thorsten at wts wikivoyage, CC BY-SA 4.0-3.0-2.5-2.0-1.0 (Source); Figure 5: (Source); Figure 5a: Student work 2015; Figure 6: By Marcello Casal Jr./Agência Brasil - http://www.agenciabrasil.gov.br/media/imagens/2008/02/20/1325MC0175.jpg /view/normal, CC BY 2.5 br (Source), Figure 6a: Created by Prue Gill; Figure 7: Created by Prue Gill; Figure 8: Created by Prue Gill; Figure 8a and 8b: Bloom's Taxonomy (Source); Figure 9: Student work 2015 - Prue Gill; Figure 10: By Ventus - Own work, CC BY-SA 3.0 (Source); Fig. 11: Image by Garry Knight (Source); Figure 12: Created by Prue Gill; Figure 13: Plot Line Graph (Source); Figure 14: lightingvortex (Source); Figure 15: Pixabay (Source); Figure. 16: Student work 2015 - Prue Gill; Figure 17: Pixabay (Source); Figure 18: (Source); Figure. 19: Anticipate - Blue Diamond Gallery (Source); Fig. 20: Pixabay magnifying glass (Source); Figure 21: Created by Prue Gill; Figure 22: Martin Luther King quote (Source); Figure 23: Map (Source); Figure 24: By Mike Gonzalez (TheCoffee) - CC BY-SA 3.0 (Source); Figure 25: (Source); Figures 26a, b and c: Day of the Dead (Source); Figure 27 (Source); Figure 28: Philippines Manila Makati Catholic Cemetery 2013-5 by sojason.com (Source); Figure 29: Trash (Source); Figure 30: Fishing boat by Franz madrid at en.wikipedia - Own work, CC0 (Source); Figure 31: Trash (2014) By Source, Fair use (Source); Figure 32: Cross (Source); Figure 33: ed-davad (Source); Figure 34: ed-davad (Source); Figure 35: (Source); Figure 36: Created by Rachael Radvanyi.
Other Resources
First Steps: Reading Resource Book. Department of WA 2013
Patterned Partner Reading (McLaughlin & Allen, 2002)
MyRead - Strategies for teaching reading in the middle years
New Learning Online: Learning by Design - The Knowledge Processes
Australian Curriculum: Year 7 English