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Reflective Writing and Soul Surfer

Learning Module

This learning module is written for 6th-grade language arts, but it could be adapted to fit any middle-grade language arts class.

For the past two years, I have been teaching 6th-grade language arts, and I have kicked the last two years off with our memoir unit. During this unit, we read Soul Surfer,  an autobiography written by Bethany Hamilton. We use this autobiography as a memoir text for students as they are writing their own memoirs. 

I choose to begin the school year this way because I think it is really beneficial for students to start by writing about themselves. It is a great way for me to get to know them and what is important to them, but it is also a time for them to reflect on their life thus far. 

This unit is a four-week unit. We will take 3 and 1/2 weeks to read the book (2 class meetings a week), and as we read the book, we do different activities that help gear students up for writing their own memoirs. During the last two weeks, we draft, edit, and perfect our memoirs. 

1a. Bethany Hamilton

For the Student

I always like to kick off the school year by reading Soul Surfer by Bethany Hamilton. This book is Bethany's autobiography (which means it is written by Bethany herself), and it is a story of determination, strength, and faith. During this unit, you will read Bethany's story, and you will write an autobiographical memoir of your own. 

Before you begin reading, you will get to know Bethany a bit better by watching the video of her below and do a bit of reflecting. 

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Comment: In the comment section below, give at least one similarity between you and Bethany (50 words).

Update: In 300-400 words, tell us about you. What is your story? Where do you come from? What matters to you?

Comment on Update: Comment on at least two of your classmates' updates.

Read: Read the forward and chapter one (through page 15)

For the Teacher

Rational:

Beginning a new unit always takes careful planning and instruction. In this unit, I want students to produce their own memoirs at the end, but I don't want them to focus on this quite yet. At this point and time, I want them to learn about autobiographical writing and about some of the structuring of this type of writing. 

I think it is helpful for students to get to know Bethany and her story before reading this book. Coming into it with a bit of background knowledge will give them better perspective. I also feel that it is helpful for them to try to relate to Bethany from the very beginning. So much of memoir writing is connecting with the reader, and a great way for them to learn about this concept is to demonstrate this through having them connect with her story.

To Do:

  • Pass out the books in class. 
  • Sometimes, I like to put a book preview slide up on the projector. I will ask them to flip through the book and look for certain things: how many pages, how many chapters, what character names can you find, who is the main character, what do you think the book is about etc.
  • Have students watch the video that is posted in the first update at home or in class and reflect.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.6.7
Integrate information presented in different media or formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively) as well as in words to develop a coherent understanding of a topic or issue.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.6.1
Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

Teacher Resources:

Bethany Hamilton's Website:

http://bethanyhamilton.com/

Bethany Hamilton's YouTube Channel:

https://www.youtube.com/user/TheBethanyHamilton

1b. Elements of Plot

For the Student

As we read Soul Surfer, we are also preparing to write a memoir of our own. One of the most important parts of a memoir is the plotline. In today's update, you are going to learn about plot and identify the parts of plot in a chapter of Soul Surfer

1. Go through the slideshow to learn about plot.

Plot.pptx

2. Watch the video clip below. After watching the video, fill out the plot chart; we will go over the chart together in class.

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Update: In 300-400 words, tell us a funny story about yourself where. Make sure that you story includes the elements of plot. 

Comment on Update: Comment on at least two of your classmates' updates.

Read: Read chapters two and three. 

Post-Reading: After you have read chapters two, three, and four, fill out the plot chart below for chapter three.

 

 

For the Teacher

Rational:

Understanding plot helps the reader understand the progression of a story, and with students gearing up to write their own stories, it is important that they understand what plot is and how to employ it.

To Do:

  • You can have students go over the plot PowerPoint on their own, but if you feel that your students would benefit more from going over the PowerPoint in class, that is an easy change.
  • After students have watched the short film and filled out the plot chart, go over the answers with them in class.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.3
Describe how a particular story's or drama's plot unfolds in a series of episodes as well as how the characters respond or change as the plot moves toward a resolution.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, relevant descriptive details, and well-structured event sequences.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.6.1
Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

Teacher Resources:

Plot Activities:

http://www.theprimarygal.com/2016/01/plot-structure.html

2a. Shark Study

For the Student

Today, we are going to do a mini research project. Bethany Hamilton lost her arm when she was attacked by a shark. So often, we assume that all sharks are dangerous, but this isn't actually true. Through a bit of research, we will learn much more about the many species of this feared creature. Before you begin your research, watch the short video about sharks:

Media embedded July 16, 2017

1. Select a type of shark. When your name is called, you can sign up for your shark. (only two students per type of shark)

2. Find three interesting facts about your shark. Put all three facts on a Google slide. Make sure you include at least two images.

3. Present your shark facts to the class.

Update: Are sharks dangerous? In 300 words, take a side in your update. Use videos, images, and links to support your claim.

Comment on Update: Comment on at least two of your classmates' updates.

Read: Read chapter five, six, and seven.

For the Teacher

Rational:

It is important that students make text-to-world connections, and this mini research project allows them to do this. The update for this week asks students to choose a side. This is important not only because it meets a writing standard, but it also creates a discussion amongst students.

To Do:

  • During class, there should be discussions about the book. These can be whole-class or small-group discussions.
  • I typically give students a 20 point grade for these mini research projects. Five points for each fact and five points for the slide being complete.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.1
Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.6.1
Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.7
Conduct short research projects to answer a question, drawing on several sources and refocusing the inquiry when appropriate.

2b. Qualities of Good Memoir Writing

For the Student

We have now read seven chapters of Soul Surfer, and we are about to begin writing memoirs of our own. With a partner create a list of ten qualities of a good memoir. Use Soul Surfer as an example of a good memoir. What qualities make Bethany Hamilton's book enjoyable to read? Write down all ten of your qualities in a list.

Once your list is done, put it in order of most important to least important on your own. Explain why you placed each quality where you placed it.

Comment: Comment below with what you think the most important quality of a memoir is and explain why.

Update: Give a brief description of three different stories you could use for your memoir. Each of these stories should center around a memory that you have. At the end of each story, there should be a lesson or moral.

Comment on Updates: Comment on at least three of your classmates' updates. Tell them which memoir option you like the best, and why?

Read: Read chapters eight, nine, and ten.

For the Teacher

Rational:

Having students generate qualities of memoir writing gives them ownership of their learning. My students always name qualities that are in fact on the rubric, so when they see these reappear, they really feel that they have accomplished something. 

Students are brainstorming a few different stories 

To Do:

  • Once students have put their lists in order, ask them for the qualities they believe a good memoir should have. Write the class list on the whiteboard for students to see. 
  • There is a short slideshow in the teacher resources section that might be beneficial to show students.
  • Make sure you are still discussing the book in class.
  • Once students have finished the reading assignment, give the chapter 1-10 quiz that is linked in below.
Soul_20Surfer_20Quiz.docx

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3.B
Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, and description, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.

Teacher Resources:

List of Memoir Characteristics:

https://www.slideshare.net/araeteach/characteristics-of-a-memoir

3a. Diagraming Your Memoir

For the Student

Last update, you wrote three short stories about three memories that you have. Today, you should choose one of the three stories you wrote to turn into your memoir. Once you have selected the story, you should begin filling out the plot diagram below. It is very important to make sure you have all plot elements in your story. The best way to do this is to fill out a plot diagram for your own story.

Once you have finished your plot diagram, trade with your turn and talk partner. Partners should answer the following questions on a separate piece of paper.

  1. Are there multiple characters?
  2. Are there multiple events leading up to the climax?
  3. Is there an interesting conflict? What is the conflict?
  4. Is there a climax? Is the climax the most exciting part of the story?
  5. How is the story resolved?
  6. Is there a lesson/moral at the end of the story?

After partners are done, trade back. When you get your plot diagram back, look over the notes. Do you need to add anything to your story? If you don't, begin writing your first draft. If you do need to make changes, make the changes first and then begin writing your first draft.

Update: Write a reflection on what you have read so far in Soul Surfer. How does this book relate to your life, to other stories, and/or to the world.

Read: Read chapters eleven, twelve, and thirteen.

Writing: Write your first draft of your memoir in Google Do.

For the Teacher

Rational:

Students are drafting the first version of their memoirs, and I have found that the best way to begin doing this is to have them fill in a plot chart for their stories. It can be extremely frustrating when a student realizes that he or she does not have a major part of plot in his or her story once it has been written. Doing this step first helps prevent those frustrating moments.

To Do:

  • You should monitor the partner work that is going on.
  • You should also attempt to read over each plot chart. Peer review can be very helpful, but there is only so much a 6th-grade student can do.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3.B
Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, and description, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.5
With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1-3 up to and including grade 6 here.)

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, relevant descriptive details, and well-structured event sequences.

3b. Peer Review

For the Student

Today we are going to do peer review. Reviewers should review all sections of the rubric, and there should be comments in each section as well. Make sure your reviews are honest and helpful.

Memoir_20Rubric.docx

After you have received your review, begin editing your paper and making the necessary changes to it in order to submit a final draft. 

Reading: Finish the Novel

Writing: Complete and submit your final draft.

For the Teacher

Rational:

Peer review and revision are both extremely important parts of the writing process. These processes help writers to strengthen their writing and hone their skills.

To Do:

  • During the drafting stage I always make myself available to conference with students, and I often require that they conference with me.
  • Students are finishing up the book, so make sure that you are having good conversation.
  • Once students have finished the book, give the test.
Soul_20Surfer_20Final_20Test_202015-2016.docx

 

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3.B
Use narrative techniques, such as dialogue, pacing, and description, to develop experiences, events, and/or characters.

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.5
With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1-3 up to and including grade 6 here.)

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.3
Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, relevant descriptive details, and well-structured event sequences.

4a. Compare and Contrast

For the Student

You have finshed the book, the test, and the memoir, and now you deserve a little bit of a break. Today, we are going to watch the film adaptation of Soul Surfer and sample a bit of Hawaiian cuisine: Spam and pineapple. Your only job today is to fill out a Venn Diagram. What similarities and differences are there between the movie and the book? Pretty easy right?

Draw a Venn Diagram like the one shown below in your notebook. Come up with at least ten items for each of the three sections, and enjoy the movie.

 

For the Teacher

Rational:

I personally believe that there is a lot of benefit in showing students the film version of a book we read together. The first benefit is that students typically see that the book is better than the movie, and that encourages them to read more. The second benefit is that students get to see first hand how differently a book can be interpreted. To one person it might mean one thing, and to another, it might be completely different.

To Do:

  • You will have to rent or buy the film to show students.
  • During this time, you can grade memoirs or just enjoy the film with your students.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RL.6.7
Compare and contrast the experience of reading a story, drama, or poem to listening to or viewing an audio, video, or live version of the text, including contrasting what they "see" and "hear" when reading the text to what they perceive when they listen or watch.

4b. Reflection

For the Student

Today, you are going to reflect on what you have learned and accomplished this unit. You read a book, did a mini research project, analyzed what it takes to write a good memoir, and wrote a memoir yourself. In your reflective update, answer at least two of the following questions about how you have grown and learned in and from this unit.

  1. What did you learn from Bethany Hamilton's story? How can you relate to her experiences?
  2. What difficulties did you come across in this unit? How did you overcome them?
  3. What came easily to you in this unit? Why?
  4. What was your favorite part of the unit? Why?
  5. What accomplishment are you most proud of? Why?
  6. What part of this unit was most surprising?
  7. Did you enjoy this unit? Why?

For the Teacher

Rational:

This part of the unit might seem silly, but I have really been trying to have my students do more reflective writing. So often I find myself rushing to get through a unit, but I don't always stop to see how my students felt about the unit. This type of reflective piece forces both me and my students to slow down and think about what we have done. I think it is important for them to see how much they are growing during the school year.

To Do:

  • I think it is helpful to actually talk this assignment through with them.
  • Make sure you read their reflections. It is important that you know if your students are feeling successful.
  • Make sure you release the survey for students.

Standard:

CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.6.10
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.

Resources

"All About Sharks for Children: Animal Videos for Kids - FreeSchool." YouTube. N.p., 21 Jan. 2016. Web. 17 July 2017.

Araeteach Follow. "Characteristics of a Memoir." LinkedIn SlideShare. N.p., 14 May 2013. Web. 17 July 2017.

Hamilton, Bethany. "Bethany Hamilton Short Documentary by - This Iz My Story." YouTube. YouTube, 26 Mar. 2011. Web. 16 July 2017.

Simulador79. "For the Birds." YouTube. YouTube, 18 Oct. 2008. Web. 16 July 2017.