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Ordinary People, Extraordinary Lives: An Informative Text about a Person Who Makes a Difference

Grade 7 English Language Arts

Learning Module

Abstract

Through this Scholar writing project, students develop their reading skills, and build their knowledge of the characteristics of someone who makes a difference. They learn about the structure and language features of informative/explanatory texts before writing a biography about an ordinary person who has led an extraordinary life.

Keywords

Informative, Explanatory, Writing, Research, Structure, Language Features.

1. Overview

For the Student

In this Scholar writing project, you are going to create an informative/explanatory text about an ordinary person who has led an extraordinary life. Through online discussion and research, you will learn about the qualities of ordinary people who have led extraordinary lives by making a positive impact on others. You will also learn about the structure and language features of informative/explanatory writing.You will then draft an informative text, give feedback to your peers, revise your own work based on that feedback, and publish.

Focus Questions

In this learning module, we will focus on the following questions:

What are the qualities of ordinary people who lead extraordinary lives?

How do I draw inferences from a text?

How do I write an informative/explanatory text about an ordinary person who has led an extraordinary life?

Comment: Drawing on your background knowledge, post the name of someone who you think is/was an ordinary person who has led an extraordinary life. It could be a famous person such as swimmer, Michael Phelps, or Civil Rights activist, Rosa Parks, or someone you know personally. Then look at the list of people suggested by your peers in their comments.

Fig.1: Mark Phelps - an extraordinary Olympian

For the Teacher

Through an online writing project, students develop their reading skills, and build their knowledge of the qualities of ordinary people who lead extraordinary lives. They learn about the structure and language features of informative/explanatory texts, and then through the writing process, they draft, provide peer feedback, revise, and submit their own work for publication.

Main CCSS Focus

W.7.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content.

2. Making a Difference

For the Student

Learning Intention: To think, discuss and write about ordinary people who are extraordinary because they have made a difference in other people's lives.

Have you ever thought about what makes an ordinary person extraordinary? Think about all the people who started off as normal people like you and made a difference in people’s lives. It could be a famous person in history, science, education, medicine, politics, etc. It could also be a friend, parent, grandparent, teacher, coach, leader, etc.

Watch  Ordinary People Doing Extraordinary Things YouTube clip.

Media embedded March 12, 2016

Then, watch the videos about CNN Heroes and read about (and perhaps vote for) the next CNN Hero. 

Here are some other links for you to exlore:

CNN 2014 Archive 

CNN 2013 Archive 

CNN 2007-2012 Archive

Comment: Write a comment about which CNN Hero you would vote for and describe what you admire most about that person. Comment on 1-3 comments by other students, building on their ideas by suggesting other admirable qualities that you observed or asking questions for them to respond to.

For the Teacher

The activity aims to:

  • Engage students in the topic by valuing their interest in different kinds of people.
  • Develop their confidence to post to the Scholar learning community, interact with others, and express their thoughts in full sentences in blog-like interactions.
  • Establish working collaboratively, using their collective intelligence in an online learning community.

While students work collaboratively and independently on completing this Community Update, the teacher can support students who require extra help to think about the topic and compose their responses. Encourage students to read other students' posts so they don't repeat comments.

Posting comments is a form of accountability, promotes reflection, and develops students’ writing skills and confidence to work in Scholar.

Updates of the CNN Heroes videoclips are available each year.

CCSS Focus

SL.7.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.7.1c: Pose questions that elicit elaboration and respond to other' questions and comments with relevant observations and ideas that bring the discussion back on topic as needed.

SL.7.1d: Acknowledge new information expressed by others and, when warranted, modify their own views.

3. Extraordinary Qualities

For the Student

Learning Intention: To read, view and share stories, and infer the qualities that make a person extraordinary.

View some of the following TED talks. Based on evidence such as what the person says and does, what qualities can you infer?

Working out what the TED Talk is about is important at both the literal level and inferential level. The literal level is what the speaker directly states. The inferential level is using evidence from the talk to work out its deeper meaning, and what is not stated directly by the speaker. With a partner, discuss the inferential meanings in the TED talk. Use evidence from the text to justify your inferences.

What the text says (evidence) What I infer
I am a volunteer firefighter Mark believes it is important to help others
Mark went inside a burning house to get a pair of shoes for the bare-footed home owner Mark knows that in an emergency like a fire, you have to follow your leader's direction even if it doesn't seem an important thing to do
The home owner mentioned the shoes in a letter of appreciation to the fire department Even the smallest things you do for people are appreciated
Inferring Chart

A life lesson from a volunteer firefighter Mark Bezos

What I saw in the war Janine di Giovanni

Janine di Giovanni’s Blog (text version of What I saw in the war)

How I built a windmill William Kamkwamba

The tribes we lead Seth Godin

Mother and daughter doctor-heroes Hawa Abdi and Deqo Mohamed

Why I'm rowing across the Pacific Roz Savage

Teach every child about food Jamie Oliver

Mallika Sarabhai: Dance to change the world Mallika Sarabhai

Comment: Find you own TED talk or CNN hero or another example of an ordinary person who has led an extraordinary life. Post a link to Community. Write a few sentences in which you describe the qualities of the person that makes them extraordinary. Comment on the posts of other students by adding more information or asking questions.

Fig. 3: Mark Bezos: TED Talk

For the Teacher

Use the TED talks to further develop students’ understanding of the concept of what makes a person extraordinary and how to practice the reading strategy of inferring. Encourage students to read/view and respond to the texts through comments in Community. If students are unable to find their own TED talks, they can refer to one in the list provided.

As students research a topic, they have the opportunity to develop their reading and research skills, focusing on reading strategies such as inferring. Inferring is difficult for many students as it may require knowledge not presented in the text.

It is important that students read and respond to the whole text so that they understand the text at the literal level. Provide an example of evidence and an inference from the text as a model for students as they complete the table.

Students may refer to their completed charts when they write their own texts. However, for accountability, students may also be required to submit them to the teacher through Submissions in Community.

CCSS Focus

RL.7.1: Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.7.2: Determine two or more central ideas in a text and provide an objective summary of the text.

4. Survey: Comprehension of Harriet Tubman Biography

For the Student

Learning Intention: To show your understanding of a text about an ordinary person who led an extraordinary life.

Read about Harriet Tubman. Then complete the following survey. Check any vocabulary that you are unsure about in an online dictionary

Fig. 4: Harriet Tubman

For the Teacher

This survey will provide baseline data on students’ reading comprehension. It also introduces a model of an informative/explanatory text and vocabulary to describe the extraordinary qualities of ordinary people. Students could consult a dictionary as they complete the survey as a way of extending rather than just testing vocabulary knowledge.

Survey Results: Go to the Survey Tool in Publisher. Then go to Find a Survey => Already Distributed Surveys => Results.

To provide extra support to students, post the following Overt Instruction Update from the Writer’s Toolkit: Strategies for Writing Informative /Explanatory Texts in the New Media to Community if they need to focus on this aspect of writing at this time. Alternatively, individualized or small group support may be provided through structured mini-lessons.

  • Vocabulary and Spelling

CCSS Focus

RL.7.1: Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.7.4: Determine the meaning of words and phrases as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings.

5. Project Information and Draft

For the Student

Learning Intention: To start my writing project and to use the Rubric to identify what is important to include.

Project Name: Ordinary People, Extraordinary Lives

Description: Write an informative/ explanatory text on an ordinary person who has lived an extraordinary life because he/she has made a positive impact on other people’s lives. Describe how their lives were ordinary and identify the personal qualities that contributed to their lives becoming extraordinary.

Check the Work Request in your Notifications. Click on this link to open the “Untitled Work” in Creator. Then, change the title, and begin a first draft. Go to About This Work => Project => Description for further project information.

For what you need to do in order to write a good informative/explanatory text, go to Feedback => Reviews => Rubric. Keep the Rubric open and refer to it as you write.

When you are ready to submit, click “Submit Draft” below the work. This is the version of your work that will be sent to others for review.

Comment: Do you have any questions about how Scholar works? Make a comment in this update. If you think you have an answer to another student's question, please answer it - be sure to name the student you are replying to in your comment by starting with @Name.

Fig. 5: Abraham Lincoln in 1863

For the Teacher

Assigning the project to the students at this stage is important to set clear expectations, and also so students understand how the activities that follow will support them.

Students may begin their writing task on the person in their Community Update, and after researching further, continue to develop it for their final informative/explanatory text. Alternatively, they may select someone else as the focus for their project. Encourage each student to choose a different person. That way, they will be reading something interesting and new when they do their peer reviews, then finally read published works.

As students will be sharing the focus of their research in Community, they will not be completely anonymous in the review process. However, in setting up the project, reviewers can still be anonymous.

As students begin to draft their work, encourage them to use the Structure tool to organize some of the key ideas they have gathered from the reading and inferring activities. The Structure tool supports students to develop an initial structure for their text, including notes based on their background knowledge. As they continue to research their focus person and collaboratively come up with the qualities that make an ordinary person extraordinary through the following activities, they add more notes, refine the elements of their text, and draft new versions, transforming their notes into well written text.

Students should also refer to the rubric as a guide as they write in Creator. If necessary, look through the rubric with students.

For first time users of Scholar, the following Overt Instruction Updates from the Writer's Toolkit: Strategies for Writing in the New Media may be useful to add to Community:

  • How to Write in Scholar
  • Using the Rubric and Checker
  • Planning Using the Structure Tool

Project Rubric

Refer to the Analytics to monitor how students are progressing with writing and their reviews.

CCSS Focus

W.7.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content.

W.7.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.

W.7.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, and link to and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others.

6. Researching and Inferring

For the Student

Learning Intention: To read, research and infer the qualities that make a person extraordinary.

Look back at the Harriet Tubman text. Many of Harriet’s extraordinary qualities can be inferred from what the text says. Inferring is a reading strategy in which you use evidence from the text to work out its deeper meaning, and what is not stated directly by the author/illustrator. With a partner, discuss other qualities you can infer about Harriet Tubman that made her an extraordinary person. Complete the chart about your focus person, using evidence from the text to justify your ideas.

Inferring Chart
What the text says (evidence) What I infer from the evidence
“Seeing her brothers safely home, she soon sets off alone for Pennsylvania.” Tubman is independent, brave, a leader and caring

Research the person who is the focus of your informative/explanatory text. You could interview the person or interview people who know the person. Conduct a web search. Look for books in the library. First, scan each text. Scanning involves reading over the text quickly and identifying key words to make sure it is relevant. Then read/view it closely or listen to it, and identify and infer the person’s qualities that have made their life extraordinary. Next, summarize the main points. Summarizing is a reading strategy in which you identify the main ideas or say what is important in a text in your own words. Record your notes in Creator in the appropriate element of your informative/explanatory text.

Comment: Share your progress on your research by writing a comment on one of the extraordinary qualities of your focus person, and the evidence that you used to infer this quality. Comment on other students’ posts, noting similarities and differences.

Fig. 6: Harriet Tubman with family and rescued slaves

For the Teacher

As students research their focus person, they continue to practice and develop their reading and research skills, focusing on inferring and summarizing. Some students may need to revise summarizing. To provide extra support to students, post the following Overt Instruction Update from the Writer’s Toolkit: Reading Strategies for Writing in the New Media to Community if you believe they need to focus on this aspect of writing at this time. Alternatively, individualized or small group support may be provided through structured mini-lessons.

  • Reading and Summarizing

The Comment in Community is an example of collaborative knowledge building as students will generate suggestions and vocabulary to describe extraordinary qualities that other students might find useful.

CCSS Focus

SL.7.1: Come to discussions prepared, having read or researched material under study; refer to evidence on the topic, to probe and reflect on ideas under discussion.

RL.7.1: Cite several pieces of textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.7.2: Determine two or more central ideas in a text and provide an objective summary of the text.

7. Internet Searches and Citing References

For the Student

Learning Intention: To understand how to search for information and to cite references correctly.

Here are some tips for researching information.

1. Decide on your search engine. Some popular search engines are Bing, Blekko, Dogpile, DuckDuckGo, Live, Google and Yahoo.

2. Use unique and terms that are specific to the topic you are searching. If you are researching Abraham Lincoln's famous speeches and you type in 'Abraham Lincoln', you will get many pages. 'Lincoln speeches' would be more specific and would narrow the search. 'Gettysburg Address' would be even more specific.

3. Leave out words such as 'the' and 'a'. Also leave out commas and periods.

4. Use quotation marks around exact words if you are looking for a particular text.

5. Use the Advanced Search button to refine your search by date, country, amount, language, or other criteria.

6. Bookmark any sites that you might need later.

Then search through the list of web pages to open the most relevant ones. if you can't find what you need, try another search engine.

As you research information about your focus person, make sure you record the references for all the sources you use. Check that the website is reliable and credible. Who wrote it and when was it written or last updated? Is the website trying to sell you something? From what you already know about the topic as well as other sites that you visit, check that the information is accurate. Is it biased?

Here is an example of how to cite references according to the MLA format.

Comment: Post any questions you have about searching for information or citing references. Post a response if you think you can answer another student’s question.

Fig. 7: Shakespeare was an extraordinary playwright from the 16th Century who is still popular today.

For the Teacher

In this activity students use internet search skills to find more information about their topic. Encourage students to check the reliability of the link they have found by finding out the author and the date it was written, and cross referencing it with other sites and their prior knowledge of the topic. Support individual students to locate and evaluate the information.

However, if this Overt Instruction Update is omitted, students could simply include the reference in the body of the text where it has been used. Source: [Title of text or website].

CCSS Focus

SL.7.1b: Pose questions and respond to others’ questions and comments.

W.7.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, and link to and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others.

W.7.8: Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources using search terms effectively; assess the credibility and accuracy of each source; and quote or paraphrase the data and conclusions of others while avoiding plagiarism and following a standard format for citation.

8. Survey: Structure and Language Features of Harriet Tubman Biography

For the Student

Learning Intention: To demonstrate your knowledge of the structure and language features of an informative/explanatory text.

Complete the survey: Structure and Language Features of Harriet Tubman Biography

Refer to the Harriet Tubman Biography again as you complete the survey.

Fig. 8: A woodcut of Tubman in her Civil War clothing.

For the Teacher

Survey Tip: This survey will provide baseline data on students’ knowledge of the structural and language features of an informative /explanatory text. It will also provide definitions of terms which students can refer to as they complete the activities that follow.

Survey Results: Go to the Survey Tool in Publisher. Then go to Find a Survey => Already Distributed Surveys => Results.

Based on the Survey results, post the following Overt Instruction Updates from the Writer’s Toolkit: Strategies for Writing Informative/Explanatory Texts to Community if you believe students need to focus on this aspect of writing at this time. Alternatively, individualized or small group support may be provided through structured mini-lessons.

  • Transition Words
  • Structure of Informative/Explanatory Texts

Alternatively, individualized or small group support may be provided through structured mini-lessons.

CCSS Focus

W.7.2a: Introduce a topic clearly, previewing what is to follow; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g. headings), graphics (e.g. charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.

W.7.2b: Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples.

W.7.2c: Use appropriate transitions to create cohesion and clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts.

W.7.2d: Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic.

W.7.2e: Establish and maintain a formal style.

W.7.2f: Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the information or explanation presented.

9. What Makes an Effective Informative/Explanatory Text?

For the Student

Learning Intention: To analyze the Harriet Tubman Biography in order to find out if it is an effective informative/explanatory text.

Look back at the Harriet Tubman Biography. Also look at the survey you just completed on structure and language features, and refer to the Rubric for this Scholar project – Go to Feedback => Reviews. These are all useful to help you learn more about how to write an effective informative/ explanatory text. Then complete the table, identifying its structure.

Analyzing Informative/Explanatory Text Structure Chart

Transition words help you to create cohesion in your writing. Cohesion means that the text is unified, has a logical sequence and there are links between and within paragraphs. Try inserting some of the examples of transition words in the online biography of Harriet Tubman. With a peer, read the paragraphs again with your insertions, and discuss if they are effective. Are they subtle or obvious transitions? Try adding some subtle transitions to your own writing to create cohesion.

Transition Words

Comment: Do you think that the author of the online biography of Harriet Tubman has written an effective informative/explanatory text? Why or why not? Post one idea you have and comment on the posts of other students, stating whether you agree or disagree with them and why.

Fig. 9: Dr Susan LaFlesche Picotte (1865 – 1915) was an Omaha Indian doctor and reformer in the late nineteenth century. She is widely acknowledged as the first female Native American physician.She campaigned for public health and for the formal, legal allotment of land to members of the Omaha tribe.

For the Teacher

In this activity, students reflect on what they have learned about definitions of grammatical features from the surveys about Harriet Tubman. They also refer to the Rubric and an information sheet on transition words in order to learn about choices they can make when they write their text in Creator.

Information about Transition Words, is posted in the Community Update so students can refer to it as they annotate the online text of Harriet Tubman’s biography. This activity supports students to revise transition words in order to create cohesion in texts. Students can insert transition words in the Tubman text, writing in their suggestions, or with a partner, rereading paragraphs with their suggested transition words.

The structure of an informative/explanatory text helps to achieve its purpose by:

  • Clearly stating an idea through the topic sentence.
  • Including elaboration supported by evidence in the form of relevant facts, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples.
  • Ensuring the writer does not go off on tangents which are not relevant to the topic.

To provide extra support to students, post the following Overt Instruction Updates from the Writer’s Toolkit to Community if they need to focus on this aspect of writing at this time. Alternatively, individualized or small group support may be provided through structured mini-lessons.

  • Paragraphs in Informative/Explanatory Texts
  • Writing Different Kinds of Informative/Explanatory Text Sentences

CCSS Focus

W.7.2c: Use appropriate transitions to create cohesion.

SL.7.1c: Pose questions that elicit elaboration and respond to others’ questions and comments with relevant observations and ideas that bring the discussion back on topic as needed.

10. Give Feedback and Revise

For the Student

Learning Intention: To give feedback on other students’ works and then revise my own.

Check your Notifications for Feedback Requests: You have received a Feedback Request. Click on this link to take you to the work you have been assigned to review. Go to Feedback => Reviews => Review Work. Rate the work on each criterion and explain why you gave the work that rating. Make in-text comments at Feedback => Annotations. Make an overall recommendation at Feedback => Recommendation.

Submit your feedback once it is finished at About This Work => Project => Status. You will not be able to submit your review until all requirements set by you teacher have been met. These may include a Review, Annotations, and/or a Publication Recommendation.

For more information, see Reviewing a Work and Submitting a Review and Annotations.

The next stage of the writing process is to revise your own work.

Check your Notifications for a Revision Request: You have received a Revision Request. Click on this link to take you to the most recent version of your work. Then go to Feedback => Reviews => Results to see the reviews and Feedback => Annotations to see in-text comments. Once you have incorporated all of the feedback (Reviews/Annotations) from your peers, click “Submit Revision” below the work.

You can also write a self-review, explaining how you have taken on board the feedback you received.

For more information, see The Revision Phase.

Comment: Do you have any more questions about Scholar at this stage? Make a comment in this update. If you think you have an answer to another student's question, please answer it - be sure to name the student you are replying to in your comment by starting with @Name.

Fig. 10: Thomas Edison, Inventor

For the Teacher

This update covers two stages of the writing process in Scholar: Review and Revision.

The following Overt Instruction Updates from the Writer's Toolkit may be useful to add to Community. They may be used with first time users or it may be appropriate to introduce them in a second writing project so students learn about the features of Scholar over time.

  • Constructive Feedback: Annotations - this guides students in how to provide specific feedback through Annotations.
  • Constructive Feedback: Reviews - this describes types of feedback such as critical, cheerleader and constructive feedback.
  • Revision Phase - this focuses on how to use the feedback students receive to improve their writing, and includes writing a self review.

Before the students submit their final work, run the Analytics. Check the percentage of text revised between one draft and the next, the number of words currently written and the grade level of the writing. You may wish to ask some students to do more work before they submit.

CCSS Focus

W.7.5: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on how well purpose and audience have been addressed.

W.7.6: Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and link to and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others.

L.7.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing.

L.7.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation and spelling when writing.

11. Publish and Reflect

For the Student

Learning Intention: To identify what is successful writing.

Check Notifications to see if your work has been published and whether works that you provided feedback on have been selected for publication. Published works may be viewed on your and any collaborators' individual profiles in Community.

Comment: Read two - three other people’s published informative/explanatory texts.Write a comment about the most interesting thing you learned from reading them. This might be ideas you hadn’t thought of or interesting evidence such as facts that you didn’t know. Also comment about one thing you have learned about writing informative/explanatory texts. Mention the creator and title of the work, and make a link to that page so the person reading your comment can jump to the page quickly.

Fig. 11: Gilbert Stuart is an artist whose best known work is the unfinished portrait of George Washington, begun in 1796 and never finished; Stuart used it to paint 130 copies which he sold for $100 each. The image of George Washington has appeared on the United States one-dollar bill and on U.S. postage stamps.

For the Teacher

Notifications of publication are provided to the creator and all reviewers.

This reflection activity promotes student metacognition about what makes quality writing by reading and reflecting on other students’ writing. Ask students to look over other people’s published works - have them read at least two or three works. Ask them to comment on something interesting they learned from reading other students’ work.

Refer to the Analytics to see how students have performed.

CCSS Focus

W.7.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, and link to and cite sources as well as to interact and collaborate with others.

12. Acknowledgements

Fig.1: Michael Phelps (Source); Fig. 2: Ordinary People Doing Extraordinary Things (Source); Fig. 3: Mark Bezos (Source); Fig 4: Harriet Tubman (Source): Fig 5: Abraham Lincoln (Source); Fig 6: Tubman with Family and Rescued Slaves (Source); Fig. 7: Shakespeare (Source); Fig. 8: Harriet Tubman (Source); Fig. 9: Susan La Flesche Picotte (Source); Fig 10: Thomas Edison (Source); Fig. 11: Gilbert Stuart (Source)