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Of Mice and Men

Grade 9 - Freshman English

Learning Module

Abstract

Students will apply their knowledge of literary elements to the study of the novella Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck. This module was designed for Freshman Students in an REI classroom. The module concludes with a peer reviewed essay.

Keywords

Characterization, Literary Analysis, Literary Terms Application

Overview

This learning module was designed to be used in a Freshman English REI classroom. For those who do not know what an REI format is, the class is co-taught with one general education teacher and one special education teacher working together to meet the needs of all students. While I have many years of teaching, this is my first time teaching this novel. All materials are newly designed to be used in a remote/hybrid classroom with 35-minute sessions.

The seven e-affordances discussed in EPSY 559 have been incorporated into this learning module. The video, featuring Dr. Bill Cope, briefly describes the basics of these e-affordances.

Media embedded December 12, 2020

Education at Illinois. (2014, March 3) What’s the Use of Technology in Learning? Introducing Seven e-Affordances [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/INC4s_kuC7g

Ubiquitous Learning: Within this module, students have the ability to work on their own time to dialogue with their peers. Constructing the module through a learning management system like Scholar or Canvas allows for the creation of a “learning community of constant mutual support, participatory responsibility and lateral learning” (Kalantzis & Cope, 2020, p. 327).

Recursive Feedback: Throughout the module, students have the ability to receive feedback from their peers through comments and updates. As well as through their peer-reviewed essay.

Multimodal Meaning: students are provided with a variety of ways to share their representation of knowledge through a multimedia format.

Active Knowledge Making: Students will be active knowledge makers, instead of answering questions with specific correct answers. They are being directed to respond to prompts that show their personal understanding or interpretation of the reading.

Collaborative Intelligence: Through the use of discussions within the learning management system students are able to easily share their knowledge. The benefit is that students will be allowed to see the different perspectives of all of their peers, not just the one or two that typically raised their hand through the traditional discussion format.

Metacognition: This module is not about the memorization of facts, it is designed to have the students think about their thinking as they progress through the novel.\

Differentiated Learning: The nature of an REI classroom sets up the space for differentiated learning. This module allows students to read independently or in smaller group settings. The peer-reviewed essay is designed to allow a choice of topic.

Intended Learning Outcomes

For the Student

Over the next six weeks, you will be studying the novel “Of Mice and Men” by John Steinbeck. During the reading of this novel, we will be putting many of the skills that you have been learning in this class into action. By the end of this study you will be able to do the following:

  • Apply literary elements to gain a better understanding of the novel.
  • Analyze how a theme develops over the course of a novel.
  • Use properly cited text evidence to support your analysis.
  • Participate in collaborative discussions across a variety of formats.
  • Use digital media to support responses.
  • Complete a peer review that helps a classmate improve their writing.
  • Produce a peer-reviewed essay.

During this learning module you will be evaluated based on completion of the following elements:

  • Annotations completed for each chapter of the book. A minimum of three per page. In addition to the usual things that you annotate like questions, predictions, and unfamiliar vocabulary, you will be provided with additional suggestions for each chapter.
  • For each section of the module post your response to the comment or respond to what your peers have posted. Whenever possible use textual evidence to support your analysis of the book.
  • Post your own update, again using textual evidence whenever possible to support your response.
  • Respond to a minimum of two peer updates for each section of the module.
  • Complete the peer-reviewed essay and review a minimum of two peers' works.

To refresh your memory on literary elements already discussed in class please complete the Literary Elements Review on Quizizz.

 

For the Teacher

This learning module is designed to meet the needs of Freshman English students in an REI classroom. Since many of the student’s IEPs require access to audiobooks as an accommodation each section will include a link to an audio version of the novel. Make sure you review all IEPs to ensure that other accommodations and modifications are made which may include extended time, oral responses, talk-to-text software, small group instruction, and graphic organizers.

This class and module incorporate the Reading Apprenticeship framework in which metacognition or “thinking about thinking” is a key component to understanding the novel. Students “dialogue” with the book through the use of their annotations, then dialogue with peers through the use of their comments and updates. Students are also provided with opportunities for the whole class and smaller group discussions to occur.

The anticipated time to complete this learning module is up to 6 weeks depending on how much reading is completed outside of the classroom and how quickly students are able to understand the concepts addressed.

This unit is based on the assumption that you have already discussed literary terms/elements and will be applying them to the reading of the novel. Check the results of the Literary Elements Review to see if there are any specific terms that need to be retaught

The learning management system used for this specific class was Canvas. All comments were posted as a discussion, which students were then prompted to comment on. Updates by students were completed in various formats including Padlet and Canvas discussions. Based on the LMS that you are using make adjustments as necessary. If using Scholar, you should be able to complete comments and updates in one location.

Materials Needed:

  • Copy of the book “Of Mice and Men” by John Steinbeck.
  • If students are unable to obtain a paperback copy, they have the ability to download a PDF version. For those using a PDF copy, it is recommended they use Kami in order to be successful with their annotations,

 

This learning module will address the following Illinois Priority Learning Standards for 2020-2021.

RI.9- 10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RI.9- 10.2 Determine a central idea of a text and analyze its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.

ELA 57 RI.9- 10.5 Analyze in detail how an author's ideas or claims are developed and refined by particular sentences, paragraphs, or larger portions of a text (e.g., a section or chapter).

RI.9- 10.6 Determine an author's point of view or purpose in a text and analyze how an author uses rhetoric to advance that point of view or purpose.

RL.9- 10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

RL.9- 10.2 Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.

W.9- 10.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.

W.9- 10.5 Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

W.9- 10.6 Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, publish, and update individual or shared writing products, taking advantage of technology's capacity to link to other information and to display information flexibly and dynamically.

W.9- 10.7 Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.

SL.9- 10.1 Initiate and participate effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grades 9—10 topics, texts, and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively.

SL.9- 10.5 Make strategic use of digital media (e.g., textual, graphical, audio, visual, and interactive elements) in presentations to enhance understanding of findings, reasoning, and evidence and to add interest.

 

Pre-Reading Activities

For the Student

Prior to reading “Of Mice and Men” by John Steinbeck complete the following pre-reading questions that relate to themes and elements that will be seen throughout the novel. Save this document, you will be completing the after-reading section at the conclusion of the novel.

Pre-Reading Questions

To better understand the time period “Of Mice and Men” review the following information about the Great Depression, migrant farmworkers, segregation, and the treatment of those with mental disabilities.

Media embedded November 23, 2020

tvlastnik. (2014, January 11). The Great Depression, Dust Bowl and California Migration_2011TV [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/kpd-7KsbIhM

National Farm Worker Ministry: Brief description of the 1930s 

Library of Congress: The Migrant Experience

Khan Academy: The Great Depression

Library of Congress: Race Relations in the 1930s and 1940s

Prezi: Mentally Handicapped in the 1930s

 

Comment: After reviewing the materials above, do you feel that authors should address social issues in their novels? What topics would be discussed if an author were writing a novel about the last five years?

Update: Find an additional source of information related to the Great Depression, migrant farmworkers, segregation or treatment of those with mental disabilities. Post this material or link to our discussion board with a brief summary of what you learned from the source.

 

 

For the Teacher

It is important to set up the novel with a brief history lesson. Students should have been introduced to the 1930s including the Great Depression, segregation, and migrant farming during their eighth-grade social studies course. The information provided should just be a quick review.

In addition, you will want to have a discussion about the treatment of those with mental or physical disabilities during the 1930s.

If you have never used the comment and update format in your class you will want to model this for your students. Don’t forget to set your specific guidelines for the expected length of the comment and updates. This may vary from class to class depending on your students. For some classes, you may want to set the expectation based on word count. For others, you may want to have them write a certain number of sentences. You will also want to model what a good peer response will look like for your students.

For this first section, students responded to the comment that was posted in Canvas. Then they posted an update of their own in Canvas discussion. Students were required to respond to one peer update. This allowed time to quickly review how students responded and provide feedback to improve future responses. A recommendation would be to pull some great, good, and poor responses to share with students. Have them identify the different aspects of each for example: “what made this response good?” or “what could be done to make this a stronger response?”

Additional Resources for pre-reading activities: Steinbeck in Schools created by San Jose State University has a number of small mini-lessons including additional articles to learn more about the background of the novel, as well as activities that can be completed while reading the novel.

 

Chapter 1

For the Student

An important part of processing while your reading is the use of annotations. A good annotation will go beyond just highlighting a line of text or phrase. It will include your thoughts, comments, reflections, connections, predictions, or questions you have at the time when you were reading.  Just remember if it is good enough to highlight it deserves a comment. Below you can see a sample of some annotations that were created while reading the first few pages of the story.

Sample of Annotations completed on a PDF version of novel using Kami

While reading through the novel in addition to annotating your thoughts you will also want to point out literary elements that Steinbeck uses in his writing including. Some elements to focus on during chapter one include:

  • Imagery - these are the words or phrases that John Steinbeck uses to create a mental picture of what he is describing in the text.
  • Characterization - How does Steinbeck reveal the characters of George and Lennie to you? Identify examples of both direct and indirect characterization.
  • Foreshadowing - Identify the hints or clues that Steinbeck provides to prepare us for things that may happen later in the novel.
  • Conflict - What are some internal and external conflicts that Steinbeck introduces in this chapter?
Media embedded November 22, 2020

Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 1 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/XIU5PH4_Yno

 

Comment: Describe the relationship between George and Lennie. What is the significance of the dream farm introduced at the end of the section? Provide an example of foreshadowing.

Update: Dreams will play a significant role in the novel. Using our class Padlet, discuss what is meant by the American dream and whether or not it is attainable. Be sure to include relevant images, videos, or articles to support your response.

 

For the Teacher

You will want to develop a plan for the actual reading of the novel. Which approach will you use? Whole class, small group, individual, or a combination. Due to the REI structure of our class in a hybrid setting, we used a combination for reading. One teacher worked with the students in the classroom while the other teacher worked with the students who were remote. As small groups, we listened to the audio version with periodic stopping to discuss what was being read.

Students in this class have been using annotations while reading short stories, as part of the transition to annotating a novel, it would be a good idea to review how to make good annotations. Included on the student side is a sample annotation that I created. As students continue through the learning module each chapter will include some tips for things to focus on when making annotations. You will want to remind them that annotations are a great way to show their thinking.

Prior to reading, you will want to discuss the use of strong language throughout the novel as this may be disturbing to some students.  This is also where the audio versions of the story are helpful since students will not have to read those words out loud.  You will know your audience and how they will best handle the language.

In section one, students are first introduced to George and Lennie. Make sure students know which character is which. 

Stress expectations for comments to discussion questions.  For our purposes, we have been focusing on the use of textual evidence to support responses. Students are to make sure that they introduce the evidence, type the text evidence and cite it correctly. All responses must use at least two sentences that explain why the quote selected enhances their response to the prompt.

Set the requirement for how many peer comments and updates to respond to. This could vary depending on your students or classes, two is a typically good number for students in an REI class to handle.

If you have never had students comment on peer’s work in an online discussion, you will want to make sure to model what this should look like.

Create a class Padlet for students to post their responses to the update. You can create one Padlet to be used for the entire book or create a new one for each chapter. If you have never used Padlet you can view a quick tutorial below.  

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Permiakov, Evgenii. (2020, March 27). Padlet Tutorial - How to Get Started Guide 2020 [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/OPkq5q8nRbM

Chapter 2

For the Student

The majority of the characters, beyond George and Lennie, are introduced during chapter two.  After reading the chapter completing your annotations, fill out this chart to help you better keep track of the characters.  As you learn more information about them in later chapters you can add more to the description.  You can also add new characters that are introduced in later chapters. Be sure to include page numbers for easy reference.

Characterization Chart

 

Media embedded November 22, 2020

Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 2 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/KSbUa4oyoT0

While reading chapter two you may want to annotate the following:

  • A passage that characterizes Candy’s dog
  • A passage of foreshadowing (page 29 is a perfect place to look)
  • Direct characterization of Slim
  • A passage about Curley's wife
  • A passage about Curley
  • A passage about Candy
  • A passage about the Boss
  • A passage about Carlson
  • A passage that develops George and Lennie’s relationship

Comment: The Boss expresses concern that George is taking advantage of Lennie, Slim mirrors this sentiment later in the chapter. What does this say about the typical migrant farmer or ranch hand at this time? Provide an example of foreshadowing based on George’s feelings about Curly.

Update: Take a moment to reflect on all of the new characters introduced during this chapter. Using our class Padlet, discuss which character you think will make a big impact on the overall plot or on George and Lennie?

 

For the Teacher

This is their first part of the book where blatant racism is shown with the use of the “N” word. It is recommended that you have a discussion with students about race and the context/time frame of when this book was written prior to the reading of this section.

Keeping track of characters can be difficult for many students with learning disabilities, the chart included in this section will help.  This will also meet the needs of students who require graphic organizers.

Another tool that students can use is Quizlet which would allow them to make flashcards of the characters to review. I have included an Of Mice and Men Character Quizlet that I created for my students. You may want to have your students create their own using their own definitions for the characters. 

If you have never used Quizlet, I recommend the following video to help you get started. It also shares how to set up and use Quizlet Live.

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Technology for Teachers and Students (2019, December 16) Quizlet Live - Formative Assessment Game. [Video] https://youtu.be/vt8BoEoZDKQ 

Chapter 3

For the Student

This is one of the longest chapters with lots of detail.  

When making your annotations you will want to note ways in which Steinbeck uses foreshadowing and how he builds tension during this chapter. As you read you will also want to pay particular attention to how the relationship between George and Lennie is further developed, we learn quite a bit more about their background.

 

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Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 3 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/ebjzwMO0OYc

While reading chapter three you may want to annotate the following:

  • A passage that talks about why George and Lennie left Weed
  • A passage that characterizes Slim, think about both direct and indirect
  • A passage that further characterizes Lennie
  • A passage about Candy’s dog
  • A passage that is an example of foreshadowing
  • A passage that describes Curley’s wife
  • Annotate a passage (or more!) about the conflict with Curley and Lennie at the end of the chapter (Really exciting!! Be sure to get to this part!)

Comment: Why is George willing to open up to Slim about his past with Lennie? What did we learn about his friendship with Lennie? Why do you think George stays on the ranch after Lennie breaks Curly’s hand since they typically moved on after Lennie did something inappropriate.

Update: In earlier chapters, the plot threads involving the dream farm, Candy's dog, and a possible conflict between Curley and Lennie are introduced. In Chapter 3, each one of these threads is deepened with greater detail. Using our class Padlet, pick one of these threads to discuss: Candy’s dog, the dream farm, or a conflict between Curley and Lennie. Explain how it deepens the story and how might the story be different if this thread were removed? Be sure to use textual evidence to support your response.

 

For the Teacher

Prior to beginning section 3, you may want to start the class with a Gimkit or Quizlet Live check-in to see if they know the characters introduced over the previous two sections.

I used a Quizlet live with the cards that I created, this link was shared during chapter two.  Quizlet Live allows you to have the students complete the game individually or as part of a team. 

This might be a good section to review annotations, or even take a moment to model how you make annotations.

The audio for this section is almost an hour in length. You will need to determine if you want to go through this entire section as a class or have the students complete some of the reading on their own.

You may want to remind the students about your expectations for using textual evidence to support responses. This is something that we have been working on for a while. In particular, we were working on how to properly introduce a piece of textual evidence during this chapter.

Chapter 4

For the Student

A great deal of this chapter will focus on Crooks, the stable buck, who was briefly mentioned in chapter two. Lennie will visit Crooks in his segregated quarters. You will see how Crooks is treated because of his race. Pay particular attention to where he lives, why is he living there, and his feelings that will be revealed as he talks with Lennie. Dreams will come up during this section, not only Lennie's idea of the dream farm, but Crooks will flashback on his dreams. Think about who is left behind on the ranch when the others go into town for a fun Saturday night.

 

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Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 4 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/EXNiP3LBlsU

While reading chapter four you may want to annotate the following:

  • A passage that illustrates loneliness.
  • A passage that shows how Crooks was treated.
  • A passage that demonstrates why the three men were left behind.
  • A passage that highlights the racism of the time.
  • A passage that defines how the wife treated the men.
  • A passage that mentions the dream farm.

Comment: How are Crooks’ loneliness and desire for friendship shown in the discussion with Lennie and Candy? Crooks, Candy, and Lennie are considered outsiders on the ranch. What does this show about the treatment of minorities, the elderly, and the disabled at this time?

Update: You previously learned that the theme is the author’s universal message. Using our class Padlet, discuss a theme that you believe best represents this chapter. In a well-developed paragraph use textual evidence from this chapter to support your choice of theme.

 

For the Teacher

Prior to starting chapter four, we had a class discussion about the ending to chapter three. We sparked a conversation by starting the class with a simple poll during our Google Meet asking about their thoughts on the killing of Candy’s dog. The rankings went from strongly agree to strongly disagree. We then opened the discussion to allow students to share their thoughts on what happened. If you are not using Google Meet you can conduct the same type of poll using Mentimeter.

You will also want to discuss the fight that occurred between Curley and Lennie, making sure that the students understand Lennie is not a mean or violent person. The only reason that he fights back against Curley is that George told him to fight.

Prior to students reading chapter four you will want to once again talk about segregation, the racism of the time, and the innocence of Lennie. There is very strong language during this chapter that students need to be made aware of prior to reading.

 

Chapter 5

For the Student

This chapter takes place in the barn on the ranch on a Sunday afternoon. The majority of the workers are participating in a horseshoe tournament while Lennie is visiting with his puppy. Curley’s wife will join Lennie in the barn and start talking about her dreams prior to marrying Curley. During this chapter, the climax of the story will be revealed. Make sure to document this in your annotations.

 

Media embedded November 22, 2020

Morris, Ryan. (2014, October 14). Of Mice and Men Chapter 5 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/NgzRkSWPXsY

While reading chapter five you may want to annotate the following:

  • A passage where Curley’s wife discusses her loneliness.
  • A passage that describes Curley’s wife’s dreams.
  • A passage where Lennie describes his dream farm and why he is crazy about rabbits.
  • A passage about conflict (both internal and external)
  • Examples of imagery used to describe the barn after the event that took place.
  • Passages that show the various reactions to the event that took place in the barn

 

Comment: Why do you think Curley’s wife remains nameless? How does the conflict between Curley and Lennie continue through this chapter? Make a prediction about what you think will happen during chapter six.

Update: On our class Padlet, discuss the role that dreams play in this novel? Are dreams helpful or hurtful in the context of everyday life? After the event that took place in the barn, what do we learn about George’s dream farm?

 

For the Teacher

If you are pressed for time chapters five and six can be combined since they are both rather short.

Before you start this lesson, you may want to review the various themes that students developed for chapter four. Particularly those that involve dreams or loneliness since those topics come up again during chapter five. This chapter will see the dreams of many characters come to an end.

Review the literary element of climax with students prior to reading since it will have been a while since they completed the literary elements review at the start of this module.

Prompt a discussion while reading of Lennie's action and how he does not understand his own strength as well as his fears of disappointing George.

Chapter 6

For the Student

This is the section that will contain the resolution to the novel.  Pay close attention to how Steinbeck ends the story.  Why do you think he concludes the novel in this manner?

 

 

Media embedded November 22, 2020

 

Morris, Ryan. (2014, October 21). Of Mice and Men Chapter 6 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/BPG9aLmrypk

While reading chapter six you may want to annotate the following:

  • Imagery that describes the setting of the final chapter.
  • A passage that describes Lennie at the pool.
  • A passage that illustrates Lennie’s internal conflict.
  • A passage about the dream farm.
  • A passage that shows the resolution of the story.

Now that we have finished reading and discussing the novel, go back to the pre-reading questions and complete the after reading column.

Comment: How is the reader shown that Lennie recognizes that he did something wrong?  What is ironic about the location where the ending of the story takes place and the event that happens there? How is the event that took place at the end of the story similar to an event that took place earlier in the novel?

Update: The story ends with a question, what do you believe is the answer to that question?

For the Teacher

Prior to the start of this lesson, discuss student predictions for this chapter.

You will want to allow the opportunity for students to dialogue and share their feelings about the ending of this story. Some students may be upset by the idea that George killed Lennie. You are in the best position to know how to handle this conversation with your students

Once students have completed reading the novel. You can be more specific about “the event” mentioned in the comment. The event is George killing Lennie by the pool where the novel begins. The irony was the pool was the safe place that Lennie was supposed to run to if he got in trouble. Students should compare this event to the killing of Candy’s dog earlier in the novel. You may want to refer them to the line on page 61 where Candy states he should have been the one to shoot the dog. This could lead to a conversation about why George decided to shoot Lennie as opposed to letting the other men find him.

This infographic from Course Hero is a great visual for students. After they finish reading you can display this for them. The only reason I did not display it sooner was that it gives away a few details to the story including Lennie accidentally killing Curley’s wife and George killing Lennie at the pool.

Have students complete the after reading section in their pre-reading document from the start of the module. After students have an opportunity to complete the questions, you will want to take some time to discuss how their viewpoints may have changed or stayed the same. You could try using a think-pair-share for this to allow more students the opportunity to be able to speak and share their opinions.

Peer-Reviewed Writing Assignment

For the Student

You will be writing a well-developed essay based on the book, Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck. You will be going through the full writing process which includes writing a rough draft, revisions, peer review, and a final copy. You will select one of the writing prompts for your essay. Your essay should use textual evidence from the story to support your claims and show your understanding of the novel.

You will choose one of the prompts to write about.

  • Choose a theme and follow how it is developed throughout the novel.
  • Write about the ending to the story, was George justified in his decision?
  • Reflect on Lennie and George’s relationship throughout the novel.
  • Pick two characters and analyze their role in the novel.
  • Discuss Steinbeck’s use of foreshadowing throughout the novel to hint at the ending.

Your essay should be written using the following format.

A) Introductory paragraph:

  • Make sure you start with a strong attention-getter, followed by transition sentences and your thesis/claim which must include the title of the book and author.

B) Body Paragraphs (minimum of 2 required): For each body paragraph you will want to include two pieces of textual evidence to support your writing. It is recommended that you use the following format for your body paragraphs.

  • Topic sentence
  • The context for the first piece of evidence
  • Introduce, write and cite the first quote
  • Use at least two sentences of explanation for your first piece of evidence.
  • Write a transition sentence
  • Provide the context for the second piece of evidence.
  • Introduce, write and cite the second quote
  • Use at least two sentences of explanation for your second piece of evidence
  • Concluding sentence
  • Include a transition between the two body paragraphs

C) Concluding Paragraph:

  • Restate thesis/claim using different words
  • Briefly summarize your main points from the body of your essay
  • End with a clincher

Prior to submitting your rough draft for review, you will want to review the rubric to ensure that you have completed all of the requirements.

Of Mice and Men Essay Rubric (created using Rubistar)

Peer Review

You will be required to review two peer’s essays. While completing your peer reviews be sure to use the rubric as your guide. You will be providing your peers tips for improving their writing, while also letting them know things that were done well. You will use coded annotations with brief explanations for your annotations.

Final Draft

After you receive feedback from your peer reviews it is time to complete your final draft. Prior to submitting your final draft, you will want to complete a self-review, using the rubric as your guide. Let us know any changes that you made based on the feedback.

 

 

For the Teacher

Since the start of the year, we have been teaching this essay writing format. We started by teaching this in smaller steps since chunking lessons is ideal with REI students. We started by writing short responses supported by textual evidence. Then we progressed to longer paragraph responses that included a topic sentence, textual evidence, and an explanation of the textual evidence. After teaching all of the components of a well-developed essay we are now putting all of the pieces together for this writing assignment.

For students with  IEPs, the following graphic organizer may be beneficial when working on their rough drafts.

Of Mice and Men Graphic Organizer for Rough Draft

With Canvas, we were able to set up the essays for peer review directly in our LMS. If you have never done that before you can find directions at this link. One feature that I particularly like is the ability for them to be done anonymously. If it has been a while since you have students use peer feedback, you will want to model what that looks like using the annotations from the rubric.

Provide students with due dates for the submission of the rough draft, completion of the peer reviews, and submission of the final draft.

References

4teachers.org. (2008). Of Mice and Men Essay Rubric. RubiStar Home. Created November 29, 2020, from http://rubistar.4teachers.org/index.php.

Course Hero. (2016, August 10). Of Mice and Men Study Guide. In Course Hero. Retrieved November 14, 2020, from https://www.coursehero.com/lit/Of-Mice-and-Men.

Education at Illinois. (2014, March 3) What’s the Use of Technology in Learning? Introducing Seven e-Affordances [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/INC4s_kuC7g

Illinois State Board of Education. (2020, August 24). Illinois Priority Learning Standards for the 2020-2021 School Year. Illinois State Board of Education. https://www.isbe.net/Documents/Illinois-Priority-Learning-Standards-2020-21.pdf.

Kalantzis, M., & Cope, B. (2020). New Learning: Elements of a science of education. Cambridge University Press.

Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 1 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/XIU5PH4_Yno

Morris, Ryan. (2013, December 5). Of Mice and Men Chapter 2 Audio read by Mr. Ryan Norris [Video]. Youtube. https://youtu.be/KSbUa4oyoT0

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