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Hiroshima - An Empathetic Look

Literacy and Japanese History

Learning Module

Abstract

This is a unit of work where year 5-6 students will take an in depth look at the Japanese involvement in WWII and the effects of the atomic bomb on the Japanese people. Students will be required to study images, pieces of writing, video and audio to gain an empathic understanding of the Hiroshima bombing. In literacy they will also study "Photographs in the Mud", exploring the visual and linguistic features of this multimodal text.

Keywords

Literacy, Visuals, Multimodality, Japan, History

Knowledge Objectives

Every Chance To Learn: ACT Curriculum Framework

As a result of completing this Learning Module students will be able to:

EXPERIENTIAL OBJECTIVES

ELA 5: The student contributes to group effectiveness

5.LC.2: Participate in a range of groups to complete specified tasks within a given timeframe.

5.LC.3: Take on a range of roles within a group and participate in group decisions and tasks.

ELA 9: The student reads effectively

9.LC.8: Read and interpret imaginative texts that contain characters, settings and plots developed in some detail, and topics and issues that may extend beyond the immediate plot.

ELA 15: The student communicates with intercultural understanding

15.LC.1: Understand diverse cultural practices and lifestyles and how they compare with their own.

ELA 23 : The student understands world issues and events

23.LC.1: Understand significant world events and how they affect people's lives in different places.

23.LC.9: Locate places and geographic features on world maps.

CONCEPTUAL OBJECTIVES

ELA 9: The student reads effectively

9.LC.12: Apply a range of strategies to problem-solve difficult parts of texts and construct meaning (eg infer meanings of and decode unknown words).

ELA 15: The student communicates with intercultural understanding

15.EA.3: Understand empathy as a way of developing explanations and gaining insights into other people and their cultures.

15.EA.8: Analyse cultural references in texts.

ELA 23 : The student understands world issues and events

23.LC.1: Understand significant world events and how they affect people's lives in different places.

23.LC.10: Ask historical questions.

ANALYTICAL OBJECTIVES

ELA 11: The student critically interprets and creates texts

11.LC.1: Identify the modes and purposes of different types of appropriate texts.

11.LC.2: Understand how texts can be produced for different audiences.

11.LC.8: Understand how writers and creators of texts can influence others' opinions and portray people, characters and events.

ELA 15: The student communicates with intercultural understanding

15.LC.7: Identify factors that have shaped other cultures and make simple cause and effect statements.

 

APPLIED OBJECTIVES

ELA 10: The student writes effectively

10.LC.1: Understand the generic structures of different types of texts to organise and structure ideas and information.

10.LC.5:Write texts in handwritten and electronic mediums to entertain, inform and persuade known audiences drawing on their own experiences and some unfamiliar information by research topics

10.LC.11: Use adjectives and verbs to present people, places, events and things in a chosen way.

ELA 23 : The student understands world issues and events

23.LC.1: Understand significant world events and how they affect people's lives in different places.

1. What do You Already Know about Japan?

For the Student

The big questions we will focus on are:

How were people affected by the bombing of Hiroshima in World War 11?

What does that mean to individual students in 2010?

How can students use visuals and linguistic text to improve their comprehension skills?

Use Hot Potato strategy and work in a group of 6 to gather all the information you already know about Japan.

Choose one person to be the scribe for the first topic. The Hot Potato topics could include: food, clothes, language, people, books, comics and films, including anime films, sports and leisure, and history.

In a round robin activity take turns to suggest something you already know about each topic.

The scribe will write down all the different ideas. Your group may also like to add illustrations to your poster.

Repeat for each topic in the class rotation, remembering to only add new information to each topic.

When your first topic comes back to you, as a group, look through the information that has been added by the other groups.

Now as a group present the poster to the class.

Fig. 1: Japanese Scene

For the Teacher

Gaining prior knowledge on Japan

Using the Hot Potato strategy will draw out students' prior knowledge of Japan. The Hot Potato topics could include: food, clothes, language, people, books, comic and films, including anime films, sports and leisure, and history. As Japanese is the language students have been studying, they will have some prior knowledge of these topics. If not prompt some knowledge by supporting groups during the activity.

The students then present the gathered information. Continue to ask questions to further assess students' prior knowledge.

Encourage students to share their knowledge to build up a spirit of co-operation, giving and thoughtfulness as this is an important theme that is pursued later in the learning element.

RESOURCES Prepare the Hot Potato sheets prior to lesson. Alternatively you could come up with the Hot Potato topics with the students.

Teaching tips

To help pre-assess students you can complete the attached worksheets which assess knowledge and attitude about learning Japanese. This can be used to form an action research.

2. Take a Look into Hiroshima in 2010

For the Student

During this activity you will be learning about modern day Hiroshima.

Your teacher will place you into your 'home'. This is the group that you will come back to at the end of the day's activity.

Once you have received your piece of Jigsaw, when instructed, find the other members of your new group by finding other students who having a matching piece of your jigsaw.

In your new group assign the following roles.

Facilitator:- The student who makes sure things are running smoothly and that everybody is getting a turn.

Reader:- A student who is a strong reader to read out all the text.

Timer:- A student to keep an eye on the time and to make sure that each person gets the same amount of time to talk.

Scribe:- The person to write down all the brainstorming ideas.

The 'reader' in your group will then read out the text (information about the topics: geography, the city, food, school, sport, historical buildngs) provided by the teacher.

Then taking turns, discuss information (out of the text) that you think is the most important. It is necessary that you all take notes so that you are prepared to present this information back to your home group.

Once you are back with your 'home' group, each member of the group will take turns to present the information you have gathered about your topic.

Japanese_jigsaw.doc

For the Teacher

Introducing Hiroshima 2010

During this activity students will take an in depth look into present day Hiroshima. Students will participate in a Jigsaw activity to gain new insight into modern day Hiroshima.

Students are first placed into 'home' groups. In this home group each child will be given a coloured card, to help them remember their 'home' group. Eg Home group 1 = yellow. Each student in the 'home' group will receive a different piece of jigsaw from six different pictures. (See attached in resources below). Students are then asked to move into their expert groups by finding others who have a matching piece of Jigsaw.

In their 'expert' groups students are then asked to assign roles, including facilitator, scribe, timer and reader. Assigning roles will assist student accountability.

In their new groups students' then read through the information provided (by teacher - see below) and then discuss the ideas which they believe are the MOST important. All students will have to take their own notes to help them present their topic to their 'home' group. Students then regather into their 'home' groups and present the topic from their 'expert' group.

RESOURCES

'Hiroshima 2010 jigsaw pictures'

Hiroshima Facts - Jigsaw Information.

Teaching tips

Using the Jigsaw strategy is an excellent way to assure that all students have accountability, and are therefore more likely to engage in the lesson. For students who need extra support, it may helpful to pair them up with another student. In this case there would be five people in a group to help support each other.

3. What is Respect?

For the Student

You are being asked to define respect. You will have the opportunity to describe what respect looks, sounds and feels like.

On sticky notes, silently write your thoughts about what respect is. On each note write what it looks, sounds and feels like. Place your notes on the provided posters.

As a class, sort through your ideas, along with your peers, to complete the 'y' chart.

For the Teacher

Defining respect

The purpose of this activity is to explicitly teach respect. It will provide the opportunity for students to define respect. Students will be asked to describe what respect looks, sounds and feels like.

Students will complete a class 'Y' chart on respect.

Explain to students that as they delve into learning more about the nuclear bomb in Hiroshima, they will need to show respect to the devastating event.

Provide students with three sticky notes. In silence students write what they think respect looks, sound and feels like.

Students then place their sticky notes on three posters labelled; looks, sounds, feels. As a class gather the information and fill out the 'Y' chart from the students' ideas.

4. How to Act Respectfully

For the Student

After creating the 'y' chart on respect, answer the following questions.

Why is respect needed?

When is respect needed?

Who should we respect?

Why is respect important?

For the Teacher

Decoding respect

Purpose

The purpose of this activity is to deepen students' understanding of respect.

Ensure students collaboratively discuss the questions first so they can respectfully build on each other's ideas. It will also prepare them for the activity that follows.

5. The Day Hiroshima Exploded

For the Student

This lesson you will be entering the classroom, which is covered in confronting images, texts and DVD clips about the atomic bomb hitting Hiroshima and Nagasaki.

Before you enter the room, discuss as a class ways that you can be respectful while looking at the various texts and pictures.

Enter the room in silence and take a walk around the room taking in all the images. Think about how you feel about these images and what facts you can learn by looking at the images and texts.

Watch the DVD clips about Hiroshima.

Think to yourself about how you feel or what you think about these clips. Share with a partner and decide what comment you will share in the circle time.

During a circle time activity share one thought or comment about what you have just seen. Remember to listen to your peers when it is not your turn.

japanese_images.doc

For the Teacher

Hiroshima - Atomic bomb

The purpose of this activity is to evoke students' emotions and to provide opportunity for students to discuss the feelings that arise by looking at the images and text.

The teacher pre prepares the classroom by blacking out the windows, displaying the provided images, texts and DVD clips throughout the room. To help set the sombre mood the teacher may like to play soft music.

Gather students outside the classroom and look at the Y-chart that was created in the previous activities. Discuss with students that you will be expecting to see the things written on the Y chart.

It might be beneficial to brainstorm ways students can be respectful during the activity. You might also like to discuss the fact that students might see images that disturb them and to just move on to the next part of the room.

Students enter room in silence. Give the students enough time to wander around the room and take in all the various texts in different mediums provided. Gather students on the floor and watch the DVD clips provided. Students complete a Think-Pair-Share activity about how they feel, or a comment the students would like to make.

In a circle time activity, ask students to share one feeling, thought or comment about what they have just seen. Thank each student for their contributions - WITHOUT comment. As a class, then discuss the atomic bomb, answering any questions the students might have.

RESOURCES

Hiroshima Images

Hiroshima Clip 1

Hiroshima Clip 2

6. A Hiroshima Timeline

For the Student

In this activity you will learn the timeline of the events leading up to the dropping of the nuclear bomb on Hiroshima.

In pairs, read your timeline card and discuss what you already know about this event.

Handup/Pairup/Shareup:- With your partner you will pair up with other groups and share your timeline card. Make sure you thank them for sharing their information with you.

With your teacher's assistance, place your timeline card in order alongside your peer's cards.

For the Teacher

Timeline of events before and after Hiroshima.

The purpose of this activity is for students to understand the series of events leading up to the dropping of the nuclear bomb in Hiroshima and the order in which these events occurred.

Place students into pairs. Provide students with a timeline card of an event leading up to Hiroshima. Allow students time to read their card and discuss in their pair what they might already know about this event.

During and Handup/ Pairup/ Shareup activity, pairs will join other pairs to read each other's timeline card. Remind students to thank each group after they have finished.

Students sit in a circle and ask them which event do they think occurred first. Place events in order that the students describe to you. Re-read order. Ask students if they would like to make any changes.

Make appropriate changes so that the order is correct.

Teaching tips

Placing students in groups will help you assist those students who are in extra need of support.

7. USA Involvement

For the Student

During this activity you will gain insight into why the USA felt they had grounds to attack the Japanese.

Cut and paste the timeline into your books in order.

Colour in all events that involve the United States.

Discuss your thoughts/feelings about the USA involvement with your shoulder buddy and write these reflections into your books.

For the Teacher

The purpose of this activity is for students to understand why the USA felt they had grounds to attack the Japanese.

Provide students with a copy of their own timeline of events. Students will cut and paste the timeline in order. Ask students to colour in all the events that included the USA involvement.

To scaffold students' reflections/thoughts on the United States involvement, ask students to discuss their feelings with their shoulder buddy.

Ask students to write these reflections individually into their books.

8. Was the Bombing Justified?

For the Student

During this activity you will be provided with an opportunity to discuss if this attack was justified and look at the positives and negatives of the attack.

Write a positive and a negative aspect of the attack on stick notes. Place sticky notes on the 't' chart.

Discuss with your class, your thoughts on this significant event. You may like to use the following questions to help with the discussion?

Was the USA right to attack Japan?Why/Why not?

Should the USA have attacked with a Nuclear bomb? Why/Why not?

For the Teacher

USA involvement Part 2

The purpose of this activity is for students to discuss if this attack was justified and the positives and negatives of this attack.

Following students' reflections in the previous activity, ask students to write a positive and negative aspect of the dropping of the bomb. For example: POSITIVE - The war was ended. NEGATIVE - The deaths of innocent people.

Students will place their sticky notes on a T-chart poster. Read out students' thoughts to the class and discuss these thoughts with students.

9. A Survivor's Story

For the Student

You're going to be placed into groups of four to read a copy of an interview. This is the transcript of a survivor from the atomic bombing of Hiroshima.

When you have finished reading, you will be given one of the following reading roles:

Illustrator - you will draw some images, some things that you could picture or imagine while reading this interview. At the end you will share and explain it to your group.

Codebreaker - you will make a list of unusual words. These could be words you haven't seen before, or words you just weren't too sure of. These will be discussed at the end.

Investigator - you'll pretend you are going to interview Mitsuo Tomosawa and make a list of interesting questions to ask him. Remember not to repeat anything already asked.

Discussion Manager - you'll get your group talking about the interview you just read by asking them some interesting questions about Mitsuo Tomosawa and what they may think about some of the things he experienced.

For the Teacher

Transcript of an interview

Students form groups of four. Each student is given a copy of an interview transcript of Mitsuo Tomosawa - a survivor of of the atomic bombing of Hiroshima. After reading the transcript, students are assigned Cooperative Reading roles:

Illustrator - will draw what they visualised as they read the transcript. This should be their personal interpretation.

Codebreaker - will analyse the text, listing words which were unusual or eye catching and why they thought they were.

Investigator - will compose a list of questions they could ask Mitsuo Tomosawa on top of the questions already asked. They could also come up with possible reasons as to why the interviewers asked the questions they asked during the interview.

Discussion manager - will compose a list of questions to ask their group. The questions are related to the events that happened to the speaker in the transcript.

After completing these tasks independently, all individuals are given the opportunity within their group of four to share their work, and for discussion with group members.

Purpose

These roles scaffold students' responses to the text and enable them to comprehend and think deeply about its content.

Pre-required

Students would need prior knowledge of how a Cooperative Reading session runs and operates in order to make this learning activity more successful.

Resources

http://teacher.scholastic.com/activities/wwii/interview/trans.htm

http://www.myread.org/guide_cooperative.htm

10. Build a Mini Version of Hiroshima before WWII

For the Student

For this activity you are going to work with members of a few different classes in the hall.

Watch a video about Hiroshima, showing you what life is like in this exciting Japanese city.

After looking at maps, in smaller teams work together to build a part of the city using different materials including boxes, straws and tape. When you have finished, join with different groups to make a complete mini-model of Hiroshima before taking a well-deserved break.

For the Teacher

Hiroshima construction

This is a special activity where a number of classes come together to help apply their knowledge of Hiroshima. A good place to do this activity would be the school hall, as the learning activity requires more space for a larger group of students.

In a large group, students are shown a short movie about life in Hiroshima today. Students will also look at Hiroshima's geography and layout, as well as significant landmarks, buildings and structures. Students are also given maps of the layout of the city.

After viewing the short video, students will work in 12 separate teams to construct allocated parts of the city using recycled materials. NB. Students will be required to collect materials (such as boxes / containers) and bring them to school before this activity.

At the end of each group's construction, all the groups will come together to place all the constructed areas / districts of Hiroshima together.

11. What a Mess!

For the Student

Walk back into the hall and look around. Take some time to think and reflect without making a sound. Think about what has happened. How does it make you feel? Why do you feel that way? In groups make a mind-map of your thoughts.

Your teachers are going to show you some images of the aftermath of the atomic blast on Hiroshima. What does it look like? What do you think it would have felt like? What sounds would have you heard? Once again, create a mind-map with your group with as many thoughts as you can.

For the Teacher

The destruction of a city

Whilst the students are on a break from activity 6 (away from the area so they are not aware of what is happening) the teachers will cover the constructed city with material so as to give the effect that the city has been destroyed.

Before re-entering the building, students are not told what has happened, but are directed to come in silently and have time to think. After a few moments students are instructed to form into groups to discuss their emotions relating to what has happened. Students brainstorm their thoughts on butcher's paper within their groups.

After this students are shown a few projected images of some of the aftermaths of the nuclear destruction. Students are instructed to once again brainstorm on butcher's paper what they think people living in Hiroshima would have felt at the time.

12. Empathising with Others

For the Student

Create a Venn Diagram. This means you will compare your first mind-map on what you felt when your city got destroyed to what you think others felt during the WWII attack on Hiroshima. Make note of the differences and similarities when completing the Venn Diagram.

Individually reflect on this activity in your books.

For the Teacher

Analyzing the destruction of Hiroshima

The purpose of analyzing this activity is to provide students the opportunity to empathise critically with those affected by the dropping of the nuclear bomb.

After students have created their first brainstorm, students are shown a few projected images of some of the aftermaths of the nuclear destruction. Students are instructed to once again brainstorm on butcher's paper what they think people living in Hiroshima would have felt at the time.

Provide students to individually reflect on this activity and their thoughts in their books.

13. What If?

For the Student

Think about this question:

What would it have been like if Canberra was attacked? What would it be like if it was attacked now?

Share your answers with hand up, pair up, share. Now think about this:

What would have happened if Japan retaliated?

If Japan planned a payback, where, when and what would they do?

Forming small groups, give your answers in a round robin. Think about this:

Should this have happened to Japan?

What would it be like if this never happened to Hiroshima? Would something worse had taken place? What?

Now sit down with a group and answer the questions using the rally table structure by taking it in turns to write down answers on a large piece of paper.

What has happened to protect people from radiation effects?

For the Teacher

A thought for some different scenarios

The purpose of this activity is to provide an opportunity for students to 'analyse critically' the devastating event, and to draw out thinking about the individual and national consequences of being attacked.

Students are shown a brief video of some images to remind them of the devastation caused by the bombings during WWII. This will get them thinking and place them back in empathetic state of minds.

After being reminded of the horrible and dramatic impact this made, students are posed with some 'what if scenarios', including questioning the students on their predictions and thoughts had there been different outcomes/events.

Students work together in a variety of Kagan cooperative learning activities to engage each other and share.

At the conclusion of these students independently write a personal reflection responding to these what if scenarios.

14. How to Write a Letter

For the Student

Look at a sample letter.

Read the letter individually, and then, in pairs discuss the structural and language features of this letter.

Cut up the letter into the different sections of Orientation, Body, and Farewell and label its features.

Complete the retrieval chart with your class and copy it into your books.

Language Features Examples Effects
Personal Endearments
Questions
Pronouns
Empathetic words

For the Teacher

Examining features of a letter

This activity provides knowledge about how to write an empathetic letter, and supports the students writing their own letters in the 'Applying' activity. It also allows an opportunity to identify the quality criteria with students for the assessment activity.

Students study a letter to identify structural and language features. See:

Steps Professional Development.(2005). First Steps Writing Resource Book. Melbourne: Rigby Heinemann.

Complete the table as a class, asking the students to discuss their ideas in pairs and then share ideas with the whole class. This will scaffold the activity for students. Independently students could find other examples to add to the chart.

15. Write a Letter to a Hiroshima Survivor.

For the Student

You will be writing a letter to a survivor of the Hiroshima Atomic Bomb.

Read an account from a Hiroshima survivor.

Discuss with your class, quality criteria that you must include in your letter. You may like to think about letter format, including facts about Hiroshima, being empathetic, editing and publishing your work.

Complete the provided 'Fishbone' worksheet to help you plan your work.

Write your letter, edit and publish it.

survivor_account.doc
Fishbone.doc

For the Teacher

An empathetic letter

This activity is one of two culminating activities to finish the unit of work. This activity will also provide an opportunity to assess the students' knowledge of Hiroshima and observe how students do/do not empathise with the survivors.

Read an account from a Hiroshima survivor (see attached).

Tell students they are going to be writing a letter to the survivor who wrote the above account.

As a class discuss criteria for the letter and make a CQ rubric together.

To help students plan their letter ask students to complete a Fishbone(see attached) which is linked to the CQ rubric.

Students write a draft letter. After they have edited their own work and a teacher has checked it, students can write their published copy. This piece of work can be used as a portfolio piece, including the Fishbone and CQ rubric.

Teacher Tip

As this activity is asking for personal feelings, it is best for students to complete this activity individually.

Pre-required

Students will need some prior knowledge of the structure and purpose of a letter.

Resources

'Hiroshima survivor account'

'Fish Bone worksheet'

16. Cowra Japanese Gardens

For the Student

Travel to Cowra to experience the Japanese Gardens, the Prisoner of War camp and the Japanese War cemetery.

Here you will be able to learn some Japanese customs and learn about how WWII affected Japan and Australia.

For the Teacher

All students who participated in this unit of work will travel to Cowra. Here they will visit the Cowra Japanese Gardens, the Prisoner of War camp and the Japanese War cemetery.

Through this activity students will not only gain an insight into Japanese customs but will also have an opportunity to gain an insight into the Japanese and Australian involvement in WWII.

17. Inner-Outer Circles

For the Student

Silently line up in order of your birthdays or in order of your house numbers. Don't speak - just use sign language. Decide on the halfway mark and form two circles - an inner and outer circle. Face your partner , introduce yourself and talk about the best book you have ever read or the best movie you have ever seen. You only have one minute each so think first and plan what is most important to share. The inner circle person speaks first and then the outer circle person speaks.

Now people in the inner circle move three steps to the right. Talk about any wars you know about. This is much harder! Think about films, documentaries, books, images and visits to the Australian War Memorial. You have one minute each.

Now the person in the outer circle moves five steps to the right. Share the discussion you had with the person before. You only have 45 seconds each.

Now the person in the inner circle moves one pace to the right. You should be with a completely different person! Discuss the statement: At school students should learn about war. Plan what you will say first. This time you have one minute each.

The outer circle is on the move again. Make sure you speak to different people. This time, discuss: There are no winners in war. Do you agree? Why? This will be harder as people in the outer circle must agree while people in the inner circle must disagree. Move again and share what you discussed about this topic with your new partner.

Repeat this process for one more statement. Possible statements are:

- War is a necessary way of solving problems between countries.

- Peace can only be achieved through war.

- In war individuals are not important.

- War can bring people together through their humanity.

Thank the person you spoke to in the last rotation and sit in a circle to share some of the things you discussed. Write a reflection on the activity. What new things did you learn? Did you like the activity?

For the Teacher

Introduction to Photographs in the Mud

To complement the study of Hiroshima in their Japanese lessons, students also study a picture book, Photographs in the Mud in literacy. There is useful background information available on the author's inspiration and the Kokoda Trail. The following activities can be taught in parallel with the Hiroshima study. The initial activity will enable students to express their opinions about war. They may have personal connections because of family members who have gone to war. They will also have formed some opinions based on what they are learning about Hiroshima.

Use the inner - outer circle strategy for students to explore different points of view. Keep strict time limits so students are thinking, talking and sharing. If you find that students end up speaking to the same person, just ask them to take another step again. The aim is to speak to as many different people in the class as possible to develop speaking and listening skills and build positive relationships.

It is important to include the reflection so students can articulate what was important in their discussion and to be respectful during the reading of the text in the next activity. The reflection can also provide some data on students' attitudes and knowledge. Use a Circle Time as a tool to facilitate this.

Resources

Wolfer, D. & Harrison-Lever, B. (2005). Photographs in the Mud. Fremantle: Fremantle Arts Centre Press.

18. Let's Read Photographs in the Mud

For the Student

Text Prediction

Look at the front cover of the book - the illustration and the title.

What do you think the story might be about?

What are the key words in the title?

Who might the photos be of?

How did they get in the mud?

Record your thoughts about these questions in your section of a placemat.

Now look at the sepia coloured end pages In your groups discuss what this information tells you about the story. What can you tell about the historical time of this war, where it took place and the countries involved?

Share your ideas in your group and then record a key idea that all members of the group feel is important. Share this with the whole class.

Now look at the images and listen to a reading of the text.

Use a Think-Pair-Share to discuss the following questions with a partner:

How did you feel about the story?

What did it remind you of?

Did you like it?

Share your ideas with another pair.

For the Teacher

Reading and responding to Photographs in the Mud

In the text prediction, be explicit that predicting is what good readers do.

Scan the front cover so students can refer to it in their group work.

Ensure that students respond to the text through open-ended questions which value the knowledge they bring and their personal responses to the story.

A placemat strategy ensures individual participation and group accountability.

19. Understanding the Story

For the Student

1. Codebreaker role: Re-read the text and then record new/interesting words on post-it notes. Using the context clues, work with a partner to to define the words. Then check your definitions by looking up a dictionary, checking with other groups or asking your teacher.

2. Discussion Manager role using the Connecting text to self reading strategy. Complete some character profiles on the two main characters, Jack and Hoshi. Infer the information from the words and the pictures.

Jack Hoshi You
Nationality
Age (approx)
Family
Uniform
Special photos
Personality
Attitude to war
Other

Now think about these questions:

How are people the same and different?

Does nationality matter?

Does age matter?

Add your ideas to your placemat and discuss in your groups.

3. Text Investigator using the inferring reading strategy.

What you see What you infer - the deeper meaning
Image of Jack saying goodbye to his pregnant wife. Sepia photo frame within the picture. They are sad to leave each other. The photo is the way they will remember each other.
Image of Hoshi saying goodbye to his wife and daughter. Sepia image within the picture.
Film strip of photos of family members across the top of two pages

For the Teacher

Cooperative Reading roles

Work through all the Cooperative Reading activities collaboratively, modelling for the students and providing opportunities for group discussion.

In the codebreaker work, be explicit and tell students that this is what good readers do to make meaning of parts of the text. For an Interesting Words chart see First Steps Reading Resource Book, p.162.

Instead of the retrieval chart in the Discussion Manager activity, you could use a Character Self-Portrait strategy from the First Steps Reading Resource Book p 144. Another option is for students to record what they know about each soldier and themselves around an image from the text and/or drawn by the students.

The discussion questions draw together the theme of that people are more alike than they are different.

Text Investigator involves the inferring strategy. Revise its definition, refer to a wall chart, or if this is new, students can record the following definition in their books:

When you infer you use your own knowledge and understanding to interpret or infer meaning from the written and/or visual text. You think about the deeper meaning of the text and what is not directly stated by the author or illustrator.

Then students can complete the retrieval chart in their groups. The third column is left blank intentionally as it is part of the 'conceptualising by theorising' activity. As you model, continue to emphasise that inferring is what good readers do. You can extend this activity by asking students to make inferences about other images in the text.

Resources

Steps Professional Development. (2008). First Steps Reading Resource Book. Melbourne: Rigby Heinemann.

20. Asking Text Investigator Questions

For the Student

Complete the third column of the retrieval chart to develop Text Investigator questions about the text.

What you see What you infer - the deeper meaning Questions
Image of Jack saying goodbye to his pregnant wife. Sepia photo within the illustration. They are sad to leave each other. The photo is the way they will remember each other. Why did the author/ illustrator include sepia pictures and frames within the pictures of the soldiers leaving their families?
Image of Hoshi saying goodbye to his wife and daughter. Sepia photo within the illustration. Why did the author/ illustrator make the pictures of the soldiers leaving their families so similar?
The film strip of photos of family members across the top of two pages.

Discuss whether your questions are fat or thin questions. Change them if they are not fat questions.

Think about these questions. Discuss them. Are they fat or thin questions? Why?

Why do people carry photos with them?

What is the significance of the two photos stuck together?

What does Jack mean when he says, "War is a mug's game hey?"

Who was the soldier who survived? Why do you think this?

For the Teacher

Cooperative Reading questioning

This activity makes direct links to the questions typically asked by Text Investigators. Role sheets with examples of these questions are available on the MyRead site.

Skinny questions only require one or two word answers and do not generate much discussion.

Fat questions are open questions that require more than a short recall of facts or a single word answer. They require the reader to think about the text, to make inferences, and to call on their own experiences.

In discussing the questions, again emphasise the importance of inferring to help students make meaning of the text. The answers to the questions are not explicitly stated in the text; students must infer them.

Working in groups will support all students to discuss the questions. Ensure accountability by asking students to record responses.

21. How the Text Communicates through Visuals and Linguistic Texts

For the Student

Juxtaposition

Juxtaposition is when two things are placed side by side for the reader to infer similarities and differences.

Look at the use of juxtaposition in the text - the Australian soldier is mainly on the left hand page and the Japanese soldier is mainly on the right hand page.

How is juxtaposition used in:

- the pages of the families of the two soldiers

- the soldiers preparing for battle.

Find other pages. Describe them and then write down what you can infer. Do as many as possible in the allocated time.

Visual Grammar

Use Think-Pair-Shares to explore the elements of the visual mode that are important in the text. Record these on a retrieval chart in your books.

Mode Example Effect
Gaze
Colour
Layout
Framing

Complete your retrieval chart as much as you can. Then go around the room on a gallery walk and look at the work of other students. Use a sticky note to write a positive comment as feedback for other students in your class. Make sure you support each other. Then return to your chart and add some of the ideas you gained from your gallery walk.

Linguistic Grammar

Now look at the words and sentences of the text. In your group, select words and sort them.

Jack Hoshi
Verbs
Noun groups(articles (a, the), nouns & adjectives)

Which character is the most aggressive? Have the authors done this deliberately?

Why?

For the Teacher

Visual and linguistic grammar

In Photographs in the Mud, the two images are juxtaposed to reflect the same event for two different characters. This enables the reader to make connections through inferences.

Model the effects of juxtapostion for two double pages from the text. Then ask students to infer from the juxtaposition of other pages. Look at pages where Jack and Hoshi are juxtaposed - landing in Papua New Guinea, scene with wife/child, battle with family photos in film strip, reflecting in the jungle, lying wounded, and sharing photographs.

These images will also be very useful for completing the retrieval chart on the visual grammar.

In completing the tables on the visual and linguistic grammar, model for the students initially and then ask them to work in their groups. Encourage discussion as talk is a scaffold to thinking and understanding. The chart will also scaffold the discussion in the 'Analysing critically' activities.

Students will easily draw out the choice of colour, especially the soft pastel colours and the change in mood once the soldiers are injured. There are frames within frames to emphasise the importance of photographs for memories and for survival. Note also how the framing changes in the text. It shows how the characters have become closer and how their differences disappear. The layout includes the placement of photographs within an image or the film strip across the top.

In the linguistic text, note how the words used to describe the actions of the Japanese soldiers are very aggressive while the verbs to describe the actions of the Australian soldiers are not. The cumulative effects of these choices by the authors subtlety position the audience to be more positive towards the Australian soldiers.

Throughout all of these activities, emphasise the importance of inferring to help students understand the text and also that this is what good readers do.

22. So What is Photographs in the Mud Really about?

For the Student

Look at the impact of war by completing the retrieval chart.

Families Towns/cities/communities
Industry/jobs Natural environment

Draw or find two pictures - one of an Australian person and one of a Japanese person. Glue each one into you book and around them write the thoughts of that person as they were reading this book. How are they the same and different? Why?

In your group, complete the table and then rank the themes in order of importance.

Theme Example from the text
Photos connect you to people, places and things
Photos of family and the people you love help you to survive
There are no winners in war
War can bring people together through their humanity
People from different cultures are more alike than they are different

Now write a reflection in your journal about your thoughts about war. Use the discussion and the activities to help you write your thoughts and feelings. Do you feel empathetic towards people who have experienced war?

For the Teacher

Inferring the deeper meaning of the text

The retrieval chart is very open-ended so students can used their background knowledge as well as what they have learned about Hiroshima.

Use an Open Mind Portrait (First Steps Reading Resource Book, p 153) to explore the different perspectives of people who would read the text.

Ranking the themes is a way of thinking more deeply about them and also helps the group decide which theme to report to the whole class.

Ensure extensive collaboration and discussion as a scaffold for the final journal reflection. As an extension, students may write this as a persuasive text (see First Steps Writing Resource Book pp.103 - 106).

The structure of a persuasive texts includes:

Thesis - a statement

Arguments/Assertions - supporting evidence

Conclusion - a request for action

Language features include technical terms, timeless present tense, frequent use of passives, verbs changed into nouns (nominalisation), signal words, formal objective style nd nouns and pronouns that refer to generalised participants.

Resources

Steps Professional Development. (2008). First Steps Reading Resource Book. Melbourne: Rigby Heinemann.

Steps Professional Development. (2005). First Steps Writing Resource Book. Melbourne: Rigby Heinemann.

23. Creating Empathy through Words and Pictures

For the Student

Create a double page image of the experiences of the Japanese people at Hiroshima. It may be symbolic or realistic. In your drawing include the use of techniques such as juxtaposition, gaze, colour, layout and framing.

Write an explanation of your image. Choose verbs and noun phrases which add to the meaning of your image.

For the Teacher

Using visual and linguistic grammar to position an audience

In this activity students draw upon the visual and linguistic grammar they have learned about in the 'Analysing functionally' activity. Their purpose is to make choices which position the audience in a positive way and create empathy for the Japanese people.

Interview students so they can explain the choices they have made.

24. Your Choice

For the Student

Find out more about other wars and present your research to your class. You could focus on any other war or all wars.

Think about the themes you have already explored about peace, forgiveness and humanity, and the values of empathy and respect.

You can choose how you present your research. Consider:

  • PowerPoint
  • comic strip
  • storyboard
  • drawings (even anime)
  • photographs
  • multimedia presentation
  • website
  • Glogster
  • poetry
  • newsletter

You can include images which are symbolic or realistic. Think about visual features such as colour, framing and gaze.

For the Teacher

Independent research

Use this final activity to extend students and allow them to pursue an area that interests them.

Choice provides agency for the learner but some scaffolding will be still required if all students are to be successful. Suggest possible focus areas and where to locate information.

25. Acknowledgements

The original version of this learning module was written by Emma Ross, Les Longford, Rita van Haren, Robyn Kiddy, and Shane Carpenter.

Title: (Source); Fig. 1: (Source); Photographs by Shane Carpenter and Emma Ross.