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Giving to our Source of Living

A Science and English Module on Sustainability

Learning Module

Abstract

This learning module develops students' understanding of the role they play in maintaining the quality of their drinking water. Through an excursion, water testing, and flora and fauna investigations, students learn about the impact their actions have living things and explore ways of giving back to their water source.The scientific concepts identify and explore the adaptations of plants and animals that enable them to survive in a range of environments. Finally, through drain stencilling and presentations, students share their knowledge with the wider community.

Keywords

Sustainability, Water, Giving, Science, English, Information Reports, Animal Adaptations, Evolution

Knowledge Objectives

As a result of completing this module, students will be able to:

EXPERIENTIAL OBJECTIVES

English: Literacy - Interacting With Others

(ACELY1699) Clarify understanding of content as it unfolds in formal and informal situations, connecting ideas to students' own experiences and present and justify a point of view.

Science: Science Understanding - Biological Sciences

Year 5

Living things have structural features and adaptations that help them to survive in their environment(ACSSU043)

Year 6

The growth and survival of living things are affected by the physical conditions of their environment(ACSSU094)

CONCEPTUAL OBJECTIVES

Science: Science Understanding - Biological Sciences

Year 5

Living things have structural features and adaptations that help them to survive in their environment(ACSSU043)

Year 6

The growth and survival of living things are affected by the physical conditions of their environment(ACSSU094)

English: Language - Interpreting, analysing, evaluating

Year 5 (ACELY1702) Navigate and read texts for specific purposes applying appropriate text processing strategies

Year 6 (ACELY1712) Select, navigate and read texts for a range of purposes, applying appropriate text processing strategies and interpreting structural features

English: Language - Expressing and developing ideas

Year 5 (ACELA1513) Understand how to use banks of known words, as well as word origins, prefixes and suffixes, to learn and spell new words

Year 6 (ACELA1526) Understand how to use banks of known words, word origins, base words, suffixes and prefixes, morphemes, spelling patterns and generalisations to learn and spell new words, for example technical words and words adopted from other languages

ANALYTICAL OBJECTIVES

Science: Science Understanding - Biological Sciences

Year 5

Living things have structural features and adaptations that help them to survive in their environment(ACSSU043)

Year 6

The growth and survival of living things are affected by the physical conditions of their environment(ACSSU094)

English: Language - Expressing and developing ideas

Year 5 (ACELA1508) How noun groups/phrases and adjective groups/phrases can be expanded to provide a fuller description of the person, place, thing or idea

Year 6 (ACELA1523) How ideas can be expanded and sharpened through careful choice of verbs and a range of adverb groups/phrase

English: Language - Text Structure and organisation

Year 5

(ACELA1504) Understand how texts vary in purpose, structure and topic as well as the degree of formality

Year 6

(ACELA1518) Understand how authors often innovate on text structures and play with language features to achieve particular aesthetic, humorous and persuasive purposes and effects

English: Language - Language for Interaction Year 5

(ACELA1502) Understand how to move beyond making bare assertions and take account of differing perspectives and points of view

Year 6

(ACELA1517) Understand the uses of objective and subjective language and bias

English: Language - Expressing and developing ideas

Year 5 (ACELA1512) Use of vocabulary to express precision of meaning, and that words have different meanings in different contexts

Year 6 (ACELA1524) How analytical images like figures, tables, diagrams and graphs contribute to understanding of verbal information in factual texts

English: Language - Interpreting, analysing, evaluating

Year 5 (ACELY1703) Use comprehension strategies to analyse information, integrating and linking ideas from a variety of sources

Year 6 (ACELY1713) Use comprehension strategies to interpret and analyse information, comparing content from a variety of sources

English: Language - Interpreting, analysing, evaluating

Year 5 (ACELY1701) Identify and explain characteristic text structures and language features used in informative texts to meet the purpose of the text

Year 6 (ACELY1711) Analyse how text structures and language features work together to meet the purpose of a text

APPLIED OBJECTIVES

English: Literacy - Creating Texts

Year 5 (ACELY1704) Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive print and multimodal texts, choosing text structures, language features, images and sound appropriate to purpose and audience

Year 6 (ACELY1714) Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive texts, choosing and experimenting with text structures, language features, images and digital resources appropriate to purpose and audience

English: Literacy - creating texts

Year 5 (ACELY1705) Edit own/others’ work using agreed criteria for text structure and language features

Year 6 (ACELY1715) Edit own/others’ work using agreed criteria, explaining editing choices

Science: Science Understanding - Biological sciences

Year 5

Living things have structural features and adaptations that help them to survive in their environment(ACSSU043)

Year 6

The growth and survival of living things are affected by the physical conditions of their environment(ACSSU094)

English: Language - Text Structure and organisation

Year 5

(ACELA1504) Understand how texts vary in purpose, structure and topic as well as the degree of formality

Year 6

(ACELA1518) Understand how authors often innovate on text structures and play with language features to achieve particular aesthetic, humorous and persuasive purposes and effects

1. What I think of water...

For the Student

At the end of this unit, you will have uncovered the answers to:

Where does our water come from?

Where does the water we use go?

What things impact the quality of the water we drink?

How do I impact the quality of the water we drink?

How can my family and I improve the quality of the water we drink? Changes at home or at school.

How can we test water quality?

What organisms denote water quality?

How can we teach others and share what we know?

Learning INtention: To understand water systems.

Complete the 'Clouds of wonder' activity, answering:

clouds_of_wonder.pptx

1: Where does our drinking water come from?

2: Where does our water go after it goes down the drain?

3: What makes healthy or unhealthy water?

Attitudinal survey - Complete the online giving survey regarding your level of happiness. Also, finish these sentence starters:

1: Taking care of our water is...

2: Litter around Lake Tuggeranong is... because...

3: Clean drinking water is...

4: Using chemicals on my garden is...

5: A time I saved water was...

Writing sample - Individually write an information report about something you know about (e.g about an animal, country etc.). Include any information you think an information report would have.

Fig. 1: A Local Pond

For the Teacher

Focus question for student learning:

"Are students' attitudes towards water sustainability affected by explicit teaching of their connections to their water source and through having opportunities to give back to it?"

This module addresses five of the general capabilities of the Australian Curriculum:

Base line data

Purpose

This learning activity aims to gauge student's prior knowledge of the water cycle and determine their understanding of the role they play in maintaining a healthy water source. The online giving survey is intended to measure students' general satisfaction levels before they engage in structured giving activities, as it is hoped that through giving their inner well being will be enhanced.

The writing sample will determine the students' writing abilities in relation to the text type (Information Reports) and provide an indication of a starting point when instruction begins.

All base line data tasks will be completed pre and post teaching of the learning element in order to assess student growth.

Resources

Clouds of Wonder activity:

Contact the authors for Smart Notebook file for use on your Smart Board. 

Teaching tips

As these activities are designed to provide an indication of students' prior knowledge, little or no help should be given when they are completing the tasks.

2. Following the Water Cycle

For the Student

Today we are going on an excursion where we will follow the water for a day. While we are on our excursion we will see where our drinking water comes from and what happens to it after it goes down the drain. You will have the opportunity to compare different sources of water and see how they turn drain water into drinking water.

Think-Pair-Share – What do you predict you will see on our excursion today? Think about what type of place would treat our water for drinking? What would they use to clean it? What kind of building or structure would it be in? How do you think they test water? Let’s record our ideas in a brainstorm.

Fig. 2: Aerial View of Corin Dam, Canberra, Australia

For the Teacher

Excursion - Following the water cycle

This whole day excursion was organised through ACTEWAGL (Australian Capital Territory's, Electricity Water and Gas provider). It begins up at the Corin Dam and moves from there to the Stromlo Water Treatment Plant.

As well as providing students with the opportunity to see the water treatment process, they will participate in a seminar "Source to Sewer" which analyses water qualities and compares water samples form a range of water sources.

Purpose

To engage students in actively participating in and experiencing the water cycle of their local water source. This lesson is intended to hook students' interest and provide them with a real life experience to link to their knowledge which will be developed throughout the unit.

3. Excursion Reflection - What did we Do?

For the Student

Today you are going to represent your learning from the excursion as a mind map. A mind map is a useful tool for representing ideas. You start with a central concept and branch off into different ideas about the topic. Each different section can be colour coded to help someone viewing your mind map see which ideas are related to each other. Mind maps can contain text or images.

If you choose to use images please try and have a small caption to fully explain what your diagram. Each time you take an idea branch and expand it as far as you can.

For the Teacher

Excursion reflection - showing our learning

Purpose

Students construct a mind map to represent their learning from the excursion. There can be four elements/branches to the mind map. These are:

  1. Water treatment - students write about or visually represent how the water is treated and the process it goes through while at the treatment plant
  2. Water testing – students identify types of water they tested and elements they were testing for (e.g. Ph., turbidity)
  3. Corin dam – testing of water from the dam and water from the local water source (lake Tuggeranong)
  4. The catchment – environmental factors that impact upon the catchment, how humans impact, living things found in the local water catchment

Using a mind map student shave to ability to extend themselves as far as they can through the explicit information they include, the detail they present and how far they unpack ideas.

Ideas to extend the higher learners:

  • have them represent the water cycle and unpack the terms learnt about in the presentation
  • identify the target levels of PH in the water samples
  • discuss the process of testing and what each test was for
  • compare the water from the dam to the lake and discuss the environmental impact for living things within the lake

Resources

Examples of mind maps can be search through Google Images to provide students with ideas about what they can look like.

4. Word Wall

For the Student

Let's create a word wall of subject specific words. Look at the meaning of the words, their origin and find synonyms for them. What other words do you expect will be important as we study water and living things?

For the Teacher

Etymology

Introduce students to some of the key language they will need throughout the unit. As a class, construct a word wall which will continue to be developed throughout the unit.

Purpose

Build Etymological Awareness and understanding of where specific words relating to sustainability and giving mean and come from.

Teaching tips

Important words to include:

  • giving
  • collaborate
  • sustainability
  • ecosystems
  • water
  • health
  • community

5. Unpacking the Water Cycle

For the Student

Complete Mix-Pair-Share activity and discuss:"What is the urban water cycle?"

Water moves in cycles. This is constant. When water comes to us in the form of rain, or when you put water down the sink, it is all collected by the water catchment. From there it needs to be cleaned so it can become drinking water again.

As we learn more about this cycle and the processes involved, we will also aim to answer the questions: "What does the water cycle process involve?" "Where does the water from our drains go?" 'Where does our drinking water come from?" "What is involved in cleaning water so it's ready to drink again?"

Today you will work with a partner to use the Determining Importance reading strategy to research the urban water cycle. This reading strategy means you use subheadings and key words to locate the most important part of a text and record the main ideas. You do not rewrite the text word for word. Using the ACTEWAGL webpage and Determining Importance, you need to locate each of the terms associated with the water cycle and record their meaning and role in the process. You can work with a partner to discuss which parts of the text are most important and record these on your own water cycle sheet.

Now that you have all your information, square your partnership with another and share your findings, take any notes that you feel may be important that your pair may have missed. As a class let’s make a class display to show what we have learnt about the urban water cycle and each of the parts. Each pair will be responsible for designing, drawing and explaining one of the terms and processes within the cycle, then we’ll put it together to make a full display.

For the Teacher

Students answer the question: What is the urban water cycle? They use computers to access the ACTEWAGL website's resource and record the meanings of words in the cycle and the process the water goes through as it moves through our homes. Students work individually or with a partner to use the Determining Importance reading strategy to locate and record information using key words and subheadings. Partners should square at the end of the activity and share their notes and findings.

From there, each partner will design and explain one of the processes within the cycle to combine into a whole class display.

Purpose

To explicitly teach and name the processes involved in the water cycle. This learning activity aims to develop students' metalanguage of the cycle and to enable them to identify their local water source.

In addition to understanding the water cycle, students should also identify the processes involved in treating water once it has been consumed and found its way into a drain. Their role in controlling what they put down the drain and how this impacts their water quality should be clearly identified at this time.

Resources

A print off of the urban water cycle from the website for students to record their findings around.

Webpage : http://kids.actewagl.com.au/education/_lib/Flash/Water_cycle/water.swf

Smart Notebook File entitled "Giving to the source of our living".

Giving_To_Our_Source_Of_Living.notebook

Examine questions from Notebook file and record.

6. Impacts on the Water Cycle

For the Student

Now that we understand where our water comes from, we are going to investigate what happens when something goes wrong with our water supply. I is important that we understand this as healthy water is essential for maintaining life. So, how do we know when the water is healthy? What things are we looking for?

The people responsible for collecting data on water quality and taking care of our local waterways are the ACT Catchment Authority. They measure the pH, turbidity, salinity, electrical conductivity and a whole range of things related to the health of our waterways. We have been lucky enough to get some water testing equipment and access to a storm water drain to do our own testing. What we contribute as a group will work to give the Catchment Group and better understanding of water in the ACT and will be an important part of their data. Each week we will go out, test and report on our findings for our local water source.

For the Teacher

Martin Lind from the local water catchment authority will be setting up water access points for Gordon Primary School and Bonython Primary School. Through these access points students can conduct weekly water testing and report back their findings and data. This data is then used by the Catchment Authority to monitor water quality.

Contributing to the database in this way links back into the giving component of the learning element as it provides students with the opportunity to give back to the local community by taking on a caretaker role of their local water source.

Information is delivered through four separate water impact articles. Spread the articles around desks for students to complete a group cafe sharing activity.

Students respond individually by completing the 66 words summarising and paraphrasing activity. (See Resources section for details).

Purpose

To actively engage students in using water testing kits to conduct ongoing weekly analysis of a local water source.

As only a small number of students can perform the testing at one time, small groups will be rotated through in the hope that all students will throughout the element get the opportunity to test for a range of elements (e.g. ph, acidity, muddiness, salinity etc.).

As well as equipping students with an understanding of elements which affect water health and how a local water source can be contaminated, students will hypothesise about the impacts unhealthy watwer could have on their local community.

Resources

Complete the summarising and paraphrasing activity "66 words" from the First Steps Reading Resource Book, page 168.

Water testing 'recording sheet'

Blue_kit_wsheet.doc

7. My Water Comes from...

For the Student

When the water you have in your house comes out the tap, did you know it hasn't really come from far away at all? Our local water source is much closer than you think.

Where are the local water sources around our area? In groups brainstorm and record where your suburb gets its drinking water from and where it goes once its gone down the drain. Draw in all the local ponds, dams and lakes that you are aware of.

For the Teacher

Identifying our local water source

Students use computers and examine the local storm water drainage system.

Purpose

To identify and plot the water sources of the Lanyon area. If students live in other suburbs not covered, they can look up where their local catchment is to understand that out of sight (down the tap/drain), does not mean out of mind as the local area still plays a vital role in water quality.

Resources

Beat the buzzer quiz

Page 161 First Steps Reading Resource Book (FSRRB)

See Notebook file for diagram.

8. Is our Water Source up to Scratch?

For the Student

Watch this video clip. Have you seen it before? What do you think the impacts of these chemicals and products in our water system is? Have you seen this kind of rubbish in your local pond?

Today we are going to investigate the health of our local water source by completing a habitat survey. There are a number of things we will have to record including visible litter, animal life, plant life etc.

As you go through pay close attention to what you see, as the final score when we get back will let us know whether the site where our local water is stored looks happy and healthy.

For the Teacher

How is our water source looking?

Purpose

To conduct a habitat survey to determine the healthy of the local water source. Students walk around the designated area recording observations on their survey sheet. The total number of items recorded will translate into a score to predict the quality and health of the area.

Resources

Complete habitat survey data collection sheet from Martin Lind.

Sheet 1

Health_check.pdf

Sheet 2

Health_check2.pdf

9. Understanding the Testing Sheet

For the Student

When we test water there are specific things we are testing for:

  • PH: this determines whether a liquid is an acid or a base. A neutral pH is 7, but a reading of 6 or 9 is ok. You dip the testing strip in the water and then compare the colour to the markings on the bottle to get your reading.
  • Turbidity: this is the clarity of the water. Pour the water into the tube until you can no longer see the lines at the bottom. The desired reading for this is less than 10.
  • EC levels: this is the electrical conductivity of the water. Dip the EC reader in the water and wait until the screen shows a reading.
  • Nitrates and nitrites: use the strips in the water and compare to the markings on the bottle.
  • Temperature: make sure you measure the temperature of the water in the middle of the water source, not from the shallow edges.

For the Teacher

Naming the testing terms

Purpose

To identify and name the element’s used to test water. Students should be able to identify the elements they are testing for and have an understanding of how to use testing equipment correctly and safely.

10. Testing our Local Water

For the Student

Today we are going to see what's in our local water, to ensure it's healthy water. We will be testing for a whole range of elements such as pH, salinity, clarity etc.

As we are going near water the expectations are that you collect a water sample and complete your testing away from the water's edge. We are also going to be using borrowed equipment, so it is important you use all equipment sensibly, with safety in mind.

For the Teacher

Are the right things in our water source?

Martin Lind has whole class sets of water testing equipment which can be borrowed by arrangement. The tests vary in complexity depending on the level of investigation desired by the teacher and on the ability levels of the students. Teachers can be trained in their use, or, Martin can accompany you when completing the water testing.

Purpose

To engage students in hypothesising and testing the quality of their local water source.

Students should also meet the curriculum requirement that all materials and equipment be used safely when conducting the testing.

Resources

Water testing 'recording sheet'

Blue_kit_wsheet.doc

Video clip: the drain is just for rain:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JGE08nHrdQ4

11. Group Information Report

For the Student

Using your information and findings from your habitat survey, construct a group information report detailing your local waterway. Include information about the health of the waterway and information collected from the habitat survey. The subheadings on the survey sheet can act as ideas for subheadings for your observations. Remember to use objective language to describe the waterways' health.

For the Teacher

Provide scaffolding for students where necessary.

12. How does our Water Look? Habitat Reflection

For the Student

Today we are going to use circle time to reflect on the things we saw when we visited the pond. You will need to use data collected from your water testing and habitat surveys to inform the decisions you make.

As a class and group you need to decide whether you were happy with the state of our local water course, remembering that Isabella pond is part of our drinking water catchment. you may have been happy with some elements, but you may identify some areas for improvement. Once you have identified areas that need to be rectified, do a round robin to contribute ideas about possible solutions. They may involve a clean up day, an ad campaign, a visit to Isabella Primary to spread the word about how to keep our water healthy, ways to help and change at your home and in your garden.

Share your responses with the class. Let's decide as a whole group what action/s we are going to take to give back to our drinking water to help keep ours and the community's drinking water safe and healthy.

For the Teacher

Reflecting to make a difference

Purpose

To use circle time to promote positive change in attitudes and awareness of the local waterway.

Circle time agenda:

  • Rules of circle time
  • Check in: my name is and I think drinking water from the pond is... because...
  • Mixer: Stand up and change places if you thought you saw too much rubbish... Stand up and change places if you saw wildlife around... etc....
  • Main activity: Book - the giving tree. Students respond to the text. How is the tree in the text like or unlike our drinking water? Is it something we take for granted? show clips of drinking water in African communities. Are we caring for our water like we should?
  • Group work - students work in groups of three of four to discuss observations from the pond. Identify areas of concern and ways to address this by raising awareness to give back to the water source.
  • Energiser: thunderstorm activity (create human thunderstorm starting by rubbing fingers, moving to clicking etc.)
  • Reflection: Groups share their ideas for giving back to source
  • Check out: My name is... after today I will.

As an addition to todays lesson students take home a survey to encourage them to think about how they use water, pesticides and clean their cars at home.

Resources

Text: The giving tree

13. Giving is Winning

For the Student

Think back to the story The Giving Tree from the circle time. In the text who was the real winner in the end? The Boy who took everything, gave nothing in return and still remained unhappy? Or the Tree who gave and gave and all she wanted in return was some company and time?

Now, think back to our trip to the pond and the things that you saw there. Who are we in that situation and what is the pond? Are we like the selfish Boy? Do we mistreat our local water course that gives to us by forming part of our catchment? If that water forms part of the water we drink, the water we brush our teeth with, the water we use in our home and gardens, who wins and who loses if that water ends up dirty, contaminated and full or rubbish? Who wins if we can improve this water quality? What can we do as a group to give back?

For the Teacher

Purpose

For students to make links between their actions and the local drinking source and to identify how they lose out if they continue to mistreat their local environment.

14. Giving: Water Quality

For the Student

Watch this videoclip. How do you look after your water at home? Do you make sure you don't put harmful chemicals and oils down the sink? Do you use environmentally friendly methods to care for your garden?

The things we do at home impact upon the water we drink. Your task is to go home and interview your family members about their water habits. Where you notice areas for improvement, you need to help your family by teaching them about their impacts on the water system and how they can improve the way they care for our local water.

Report back your findings to your teacher/class. Have your families' attitudes changed? Were you able to make improvements in your home?

For the Teacher

In this learning activity students take home what they have learnt and apply their learning through making a positive change. Students will interview their families on their prior knowledge and understanding of the local water source and use this information to effect change around the home.

Purpose

To encourage students to begin giving back to the community by increasing awareness of how their actions impact upon the local water source.

Resources

Students watch clip ACTEWAGL save 10 litres as prompt for water conservation in the home:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uxW8oRuimdM

The drain is just for rain clip - shows impacts on water from home usage:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&feature=endscreen&v=OYtFnyqvEoE

15. Beyond Water

For the Student

Other than the composition of elements in the water, there are other signs which can indicate whether water is healthy. The amount of plant and insect/animal life also give us an indication of whether the water is good for sustaining and maintaining life. Some plant life indicates all is well with the water, whereas other forms of plant life e.g. The presence of Blue Green Algae in the water means not only that you should not swim, but that the water is potentially harmful.

Today you need to research the effects of plant life in the water system. Once you have completed your research, transfer your information into a report with PEC paragraphs about

  • What is blue-green algae?
  • When/where is blue-green algae found and what does it mean if it is found?
  • How do you eradicate it from a water source?

For the Teacher

Looking at the health of water sources and the impacts of this on the day-to-day life of students and others.

Purpose

To write to inform about the significance of plants in a water source and how their presence reflects the health and quality of the water.

Students will combine researching, with the first steps reading and writing strategy of determining importance to locate and present their information.

Resources

Fact sheet on Blue Green Algae and risk levels:

Activity_12_info.pdf

'Graphic organisers' to report on blu- green algae

algae_determining_importance.pptx

16. Do we have Flora and Fauna?

For the Student

There are many things that can indicate the heath of a water way. Living things rely on water to survive and can often provide us with a picture on how healthy our water is.

Let's go back to our water source and see what living things are in our water source. We can use the data from this testing to see if our water is as healthy as our initial tests revealed.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To identify how living things present in a water source can provide an indication of the water health.

Resources

Bug collection equipment:

  • scoops/nets
  • trays
  • classification sheet
  • recording sheet

Teaching tips

This activity should be completed at warmer times of the year when there will be more bug life present in the water.

17. The Right Flora and Fauna

For the Student

While on the excursion, record all insects seen using your bug classification chart and use the data on bugs to determine the health of the water. Identify which bugs indicate that a water source is healthy and which are linked to poor water quality.

What did your results show?

Do we live near a healthy water system?

For the Teacher

Purpose

To analyse the presence of living things in a water system to identify the health of the water.

Resources

Bug classification chart and recording sheets.

18. Drain Stenciling - Doing

For the Student

Have you ever seen these before? Do you know what they mean? These are drain stencils which help spread the message of water conservation to members of the community.

Some members of the class who have participated enthusiastically in the water program so far will have the opportunity to go out into the community and paint these stencils onto drains to help remind people that only water should enter our water systems, not chemicals or litter.

For the Teacher

Drain Stenciling - spreading a message

Students giving back to the community through increasing awareness of impacts on local water.

Student representatives from each class go out and stencil drains to spread the message about impacts of drains on water quality.

Martin Lind has the stencils, equipment and know how!

19. Drain Stencilling - Designing

For the Student

Now we have learnt about water and how we can impact upon our water system, your next task is going to be to design a stencil to be placed on drains to remind people to be careful about the kinds of things they put down their drains. You may like to focus on a particular area such as chemicals on the garden, or in the home. Alternatively you may like to focus on the need to conserve water or not to littler. Whatever you choose, your message needs to be plain and simple so people get a clear message when they look at it.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To design a drain stencil to spread the message of water conservation to the wider community.

Resources

A range of ads/slogans for students to view.

Materials to make stencils e.g. printing boards, cardboard, paint, scissors etc.

Teaching tips

Before designing their stencil, students could view a range of logos with similar messages and unpack what makes an effective stencil e.g. catchy slogan, clear, simple design and colour choice.

Students who were not selected to stencil drains in the wider community could be responsible for placing their stencils around the school to spread the message to the school community and could discuss what the stencils mean to the younger classes so they are also informed.

20. Evolution and us

For the Student

LI - identify how poeple have changed from prehistoric cavemen to today

What do you know about the evolution of people? Can you draw how you think people have changed over time. Think back to the times of cavemen and draw a series of four pictures which show how we have come to look as we look today.

Share your pictures with a partner. Are there any similarities or differences. Share your most interesting observation with the class/your table group.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To gain an insight into students' understanding of how the human race has evolved over time.

Resources

Resources for adaptations:

  • PowerPoint - adaptations and a range of activities for future lessons
Animal_adaptations.ppt

21. Evolution - Survival of the Fittest

For the Student

Over time all living things have grown and changed.

Charles Darwin was a man who first saw how some mutations in the growth of animals (e.g. hooked beak, longer neck/legs) enabled them to better survive in their environment so they were carried on in further generations. Whereas other mutations were detrimental to their health and so animals with those adaptations did not survive.

Write a paragraph describing how you think plants and animals have changed over time.

For the Teacher

Introduce the concept of Darwinism.

Purpose

Big idea – living things have adaptions that help them to survive in their environment.

To identify how certain adaptations in animals allowed them to thrive and survive in their environment, whereas other adaptions did not.

To introduce Charles Darwin's theory of evolution and Natural Selection as a possible explanation of how some adaptations allow plants and animals to survive in extreme conditions.

Resources

Link for evolution site:  videos info games etc.

Interactive website to explain the Theory of Natural Selection:

22. Evolution, Darwinism and Natural Selection

For the Student

Word Study - Evolution: is any process of growth, change or development. The word stems from the Latin evolutio meaning "unfolding"

Over time plants, animals and humans have all evolved to better suit their environments and living conditions. Evolution has taken place over millions of years and is responsible for all the living things on Earth today. There are different views and theories about the origin of life and the evolutionary process.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To define the term evolution. To add the word and meaning to the class word wall of terms related to the unit.

Resources

Interactive website to explain the Theory of Natural Selection:

23. Survival Traits - Animals

For the Student

Look at the pictures of the following animals. As a group write down the different features of each animals that enables it to survive in its environment.

Compare your list to the features of another group. Which features were the same/different?

Let's make a list of animal traits that ensure their survival in different conditions.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To identify known features that enable animals to survive in their environment.

Resources

Pictures of animals e.g. tiger, owl, shark, fox, snake, polar bear are found on the 'PowerPoint'

Animal_adaptations.ppt

24. Explaining Animal Adaptations

For the Student

Before and after Darwin, many people have thought and tried to explain why certain animals are the way they are. In Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander culture they used Dream Time stories to explain the features of animals around them. One author who thought deeply about the adaptions of animals was Rudyard Kipling. His Just So stories integrated fact and fiction to describe the features and adaptations of animals.

When you read the stories use the Text Investigator role to distinguish facts about animal adaptions from fiction. Think about why the author may have chosen to include some elements of fantasy.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To consider how and why animals have certain adaptions.

Resources

Collection of Rudyard Kipling's Just So stories

25. Survival of the Fittest - Categorising Adaptations

For the Student

Today animals have many interesting characteristics and habits which enable them to survive in a range of locations around the world. Even in the deepest darkest depths of the ocean there are animals living with amazing adaptions that help them to survive.

When animals adapt to their environments they can do so in three different ways:

  1. Anatomical - Structures of the body.
  2. Behavioural - The manner in which animals move and act.
  3. Physiological - The functioning of the animal at levels from biochemical, to cellular, tissue, organ and whole organism levels.

Look at the different types of adaptions animals can have for their environment. Can you categorise them as anatomical, behavioural or physiological?

For the Teacher

Purpose

To name the types of adaptations animals can have which enable their survival in different environments.

To categorise different adaptions as anatomical, physiological or behavioural.

Resources

Website to research adaptations:

www.bbc.co.uk/nature/adaptations

'Fishbone diagram' for categorising adaptations

fishbone_adaptations.docx

Powerpoints on animal adaptions that may be useful:

Camouflage and mimicry

Physical_adaptions_Camouflage_and_mimicry.ppt

Lists of different adaptations for students to categorise

26. Survival of the Fittest - Animals in Different Environments

For the Student

While all animals have evolved over time. There are certain adaptations that are only useful in certain environments. How would the adaptations of animals living in a desert need to be different to animals living in Antarctic conditions. Mix pair share with a partner and see how many differences or similarities you can come up with.

For the Teacher

Survival of the fittest - animals in different environments

27. Explaining Environments - What and Where?

For the Student

All around the world and even within Australia, there are places with different environments and climate conditions. Each location has particular conditions such as aridity, temperature, soil types and elevation. Depending on the climate and location different plants and animals can survive. Understanding how these environments are composed is essential to understanding how different life forms can survive there.

Can you match the different climate conditions to their descriptions? With a partner discuss elements of the descriptions that helped you figure out what climate they were describing.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To define an environment and identify the features of a range of climate conditions.

Resources

Climate conditions and their descriptions for students to sort e.g.

desert - sandy soil, hot days, cold nights, scorching temperatures, low rain fall

tropical - wet season, high humidity, high constant temperatures, close to the Equator

etc.

28. Amazing Adaptations - Plants and Extreme Conditions

For the Student

Just the same as animals in different conditions need different adaptations for their survival, so too do plants. Can you think of plants that live in desert conditions? How are they different to plants from a rainforest? Can plants even survive in extreme cold?

LI - to research the types of adaptations enable plants to live in different environments

From the website provided pick four different environments where plants can survive. Record all the main adaptations plants in each environment have and how these allow the plants to survive. You may work independently or with a partner to conduct your research.

For the Teacher

Resources

Website for researching plant adaptations

Pdf files for 'plant adaptations'

Desertplants.pdf

29. The Need for Flora and Fauna

For the Student

Imagine that in the Earth's history no plants or animals had adapted to their environments and so huge areas of the planet such as deserts and cold climate areas were uninhabited by life. What would this mean for life forms as we know them? Or, what if animals had adapted but not plants or vice versa? Does one life form depend on the other?

What would this mean to people living in those areas if not plants or animals could live? How would this affect our food source?

Let's think about this a little closer to home. If our local catchment water flows on down the river to the next area for treatment and its all full of litter, rubbish and chemicals and that river flows through areas of nature, what does that mean for the plant and animal life down the river?

Why may it be important to consider our impact in our local environment, as well as the impact on bad water sources on life forms in faraway places? Does anyone really benefit from dirty water and litter? Who benefits from clean water?

For the Teacher

Purpose

To identify the interrelated needs of living things regardless of their location within the world. Students should be able to describe how their impact on the water effects the wider ecosystem and the benefits of maintaining a clean water source.

30. Adaptations - Mind Mapping

For the Student

Using your research and understanding of the particular adaptations of different plants and animals, create a mind map to show how these relate to different environments.

Pick four environments and in each quarter of your page, represent your learning through written information, diagrams and captioned illustrations. If you required more information discuss your research with a partner or consult an authority (e.g. book, internet, teacher)

For the Teacher

Purpose

Students get a large sheet of A2 paper and fold it into quarters. Over a series of four lessons they use a mind map to record in each quarter the adaptations of plants and animals from four different climate conditions. They can expand and their ideas as much as possible through diagrams, written explanations and labelled illustrations.

31. Evolution - Design a Plant/Animal

For the Student

LI - to design to optimal animal for a particular environment

Today you need to think about all the things you have learnt about adaptations that enable plants or animals to survive in different environments. Using your knowledge design an animal or plant that would have the optimal traits to survive in either the depths of the ocean, freezing conditions, or arid deserts. You must give your animal a name, draw your animal's features and label each feature and why it is required to help your plant/animal survive. Include as much detail as possible.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To assess students' understanding of which adaptions help plants or animals survive in particular environments.

Students design an animal or plant to live in a specified location. They include labelled captions about certain adaptations their animal/plant has that enables it to survive and gives it an edge in its environment.

Teaching tips

Extension/fast finishers - students could write their own Just So story to explain how their animal came to be.

32. Information Texts - Purpose and Structure

For the Student

In your group I want you to look at the piece of text I am about to give you. Your task is to answer the following questions:

  1. What is its purpose?
  2. Who is it written for?
  3. How is the text arranged?
  4. What language features can you see?

For the Teacher

Purpose

To analyse a range of information reports to identify their purpose and describe their language features.

Resources

Examples of the text type can be found on the Jenny Eather website (writing fun). Membership to this website does involve a small cost however; it provides examples at all levels and a means for students to make comparisons between a range of texts.

Teaching tips

Students work in mixed ability partners/groups. Designate roles of reader, recorder and reporter and explicitly state that all group members must contribute their ideas.

Kagan Cooperative learning strategy: Round Robin... each group member takes turns going in rounds to contribute to each question. Keep going around the circle until all ideas are exhausted.

Each group could have a different example OR, to encourage further collaboration and communication, two of each text sample could be used (2 groups get the same text) so that the groups can come together and compare their interpretations of the text.

33. Information Texts – How they’re Arranged

For the Student

Each text type has specific features that set them apart from one another. Today we are going to define the parts that make up an explanation text. I’m going to start at the top. It says... what might this part be named? What might its role be in the text? Can you find the labels to match? Let’s continue through until we have labelled all the parts and we know their roles.

For the Teacher

Information texts – structural features

Purpose

To define the structural features of an information report and use a graphic overlay to record how they can be arranged.

Resources

Labels with part name and role on separate labels and if possible different colours:

  • Heading statement – this provides some details of the subject, what the report is about
  • Sequence of how and reasons why – can be under headings and subheadings, set out in PEC paragraph structure
  • Supporting pictures and diagrams
  • Summary – state further information related to main point

Graphic overlay activity First Steps reading Resource book p.g 159

'Fishbone organiser' to complete as an ongoing reflection of the text type

fishbone_info_reports.docx

Teaching tips

Read a model text to the students. After reading the text, model labelling the structural features of the text type. Specifically focus on:

  • Heading statement – this provides some details of the subject, what the report is about
  • Sequence of how and reasons why – can be under headings and subheadings, set out in PEC paragraph structure
  • Supporting pictures and diagrams
  • Summary – state further information related to main points

Have a set of labels made up for students to stick on the text. They need to match each part and its purpose. The text should model the self talk they can use when considering each sections purpose and then have students come out to contribute.

Once modelled, students complete a graphic overlay for the text type and stick on their own labels to name the structural features and their role in the text.

34. Information Texts - Catching the Reader's Attention

For the Student

Just as an author chooses their words carefully for their audience, they also carefully select the layout of their writing so that it will not only appeal to the eye, but so their text with be accessible to the reader. In an information text this is done through a title, headings/subheadings, dot points, pictures and careful colour selection. Have a look at these text and rank them according to how likely you be to want to read them if you were researching for information.

Once you have ranked them from most to least likely to read pick out the features that drew you to a text and ones that turned you off. Record them with your group. Let’s use a Venn diagram to record the features that make you want to read a text, that make you not want to read a text and ones that don’t really influence your decision.

For the Teacher

Information texts - appealing to the reader

Purpose

To identify and define the text features that draw a reader to a text.

Teaching tips

Use four texts about the same topic that have different layouts, text sizes, text content, colour etc. Have students work in mixed ability groups to rate them and encourage communication and the justifications of responses to each of the texts. Be explicit that every group member should be heard and contribute.

Devise a class list of desirable attributes of text layout, this can be added to throughout the unit.

35. Information Texts - Grouping Information

For the Student

When we read an information text, we use the reading strategy of determining importance to determine the key information in a text. When we are reading for a particular purpose, headings and subheadings can help us locate key information, by identifying the topic of each section of text. This means we can find the information we need, without reading the whole text.

Have a look at these paragraphs of an information text. I want you to read each paragraph carefully, and then decide on a heading which tells the reader what each paragraph is about. Compare your answers with your shoulder partner, discuss any similarities or differences, then share with another partnership. Were all answers the same? Why/why not?

For the Teacher

Information texts - headings and subheadings

Purpose

To identify the theme of a paragraph and determine an appropriate heading for the topic.

Teaching tips

Students are given some paragraphs for an information text. They read through each paragraph, identify the topic and determine an appropriate heading title for each section of text.

Students use pair-share-square to share and compare their answers with a partner, then as a foursome. Encourage discussion and highlight similarities or differences between student’s responses.

36. Information Texts - Grouping Similar Information

For the Student

What happens if the parts of an explanation text aren’t well sequenced or arranged in similar topics? If we were to confuse the information within the sequence of how and why, would the information still make sense and would it be as informative?

Let’s read these paragraphs through together. Do they make sense and follow a logical PEC structure? If I use different colour highlighters to group similar information, I can see that two or three different topics are located in each paragraph and they don’t quite make sense. However, if I rewrite these paragraphs and regroup the information, they are much more cohesive.

Now you’re going to have a go at locating sentences with common information about a water way and regrouping it into a paragraph. Make your paragraph as informative as possible. Remember it must follow the PEC format. Once you're done, give each paragraph a heading to tell the reader what it is about.

Mix pair share – read your paragraphs to a partner. Did you group the information under the same headings? Did you prioritise the information in the same order? Discuss how and why this might be.

Pair square – share similarities and differences with another partnership. Did they find the same thing? How different were the paragraphs. As a group decide which paragraph grouped the information most cohesively and share this with the class.

For the Teacher

Information texts - forming PEC paragraphs

Purpose

To identify that paragraphs must contain related information to present information logically.

To group related information about a topic and write it as a paragraph.

Pre-required

Students name and identify the features of a PEC paragraph

P - Point of the paragraph, introduces topic, usually 1 sentence

E - Elaborations, Examples, Explanations etc. usually 3-5 sentences

C - Conclusion, 1 sentence that brings all the ideas together

Teaching tips

Read a set of paragraphs which do not contain cohesive information. Identify using a highlighter how not all information within the paragraphs is related and how to discern information about one topic from another. Model rewriting this information into PEC paragraphs which group similar information together under subheading in the format of an explanation text.

Once students have seen how to locate and group information, provide a sheet of dot points to students. They colour code information they think belongs in related paragraphs, give that information a subheading and use summarising to rewrite the information in their own words, in PEC paragraph structure.

Students engage in discussion to analyse how different authors can perceive different links in information and present it differently based on their perspective. While this may be true, there should be a joint understanding that information in a paragraph should be linked to similar information, based around one topic.

37. Information Texts - Writing without Opinion

For the Student

I’m going to read you a piece of text and I want you to think about whether or not it is an information report. How informative is it? Would you find it in an information text? Why/why not? This writing does not specifically meet the criteria of an information text as it gives the author's perspective.

When presenting information as part of an informaiton text, it is important that you are objective. This means you are not putting across your point of view like you would in a persuasive text or recount, instead you are just presenting the facts.

Can you sort these sentences as objective (fact, not opinion)and subjective (a person’s point of view)? Highlight the objective/factual words blue and subjective feeling/emotion words in yellow.

For the Teacher

Information texts - writing objectively

Purpose

To sort objective and subjective sentences and identify key language associated with each language type.

Resources

Sorting sheet - objective and subjective

sort_objective_and_subjective.ppt

Teaching tips

Prepare a piece of writing which contains a substantial amount of information in a non objective manner. Read this to the students and highlight the subjective language.

Provide students with a set of subjective and objective sentences. They sort these into relevant categories and highlight language specific to each sentence type.

38. Information Texts - False, Fact or Opinion?

For the Student

I’m going to read this piece of text to you. I want you to listen carefully and think about the kind of language used in an information text and what makes language objective, as after reading I will have some statements for you to sort.

Look at each of these statements. Thinking about what was just read to you, can you sort each one into a category of either false (contradicts information within the report), fact (supports information within the text objectively) or opinion (gives a biased opinion based on the author/reader’s beliefs)?

Now you’re going to have your own go at devising a set of statements that fit into each of these categories. Read this text and then think of at least three statements for each (false, opinion & fact). Swap your statements with a partner’s and see if you can sort them correctly. Discuss how you knew where each fit and if you got any wrong, highlight any information that misled you. Share this with the class. Let’s devise a set of rules and a definition for subjective and objective language features.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To sort factual information from opinionated writing and to define language choices that fit within these categories.

Teaching tips

The teacher models reading aloud by reading an information text to the class. Once reading is completed, present a range of written statements to the class and as a group sort into categories: False, Fact and Opinion. Discuss as a class how to determine where the statements fit by looking at the language within each or by comparing to information within the text.

Once completed as a whole class group, students break off into pairs with a new text. They read through the text and then devise a series of statements for their partner to sort. Alternatively, for greater support students may devise their statements in pairs, then swap with another partnership and complete the task cooperatively. Lower students may need support from the teacher to distinguish between each category and for ideas for statements.

Once any tricks to breaking down objective and subjective language are identified, devise a class definition of the terms and how to remember to use subjective writing for information texts (e.g. use words like... avoid words such as...).

39. Information Texts - Distinguishing Fact from Opinion

For the Student

Remember that this writing was not persuasive as it contained emotive language and contained the author’s point of view instead of focusing on facts. Despite this, this writing does contain a lot of factual information, so let’s edit it to report what we found out in an objective manner e.g. we can change “I like Golden Retrievers because they have long fur and big, cute, floppy ears” to “Golden Retrievers are have long coats and large soft ears”. What other information could we take and present objectively?

Now work with a partner to have a go at taking this piece of emotive writing and presenting it in a PEC paragraph which provides the reader with objective information. Compare your work with another group. Did you present the same facts?

For the Teacher

Information texts - from opinionated to factual

Purpose

To edit text with subjective language to make it objective.

Teaching tips

Reread the emotive writing sample from the previous learning activity. Model using the reading/writing strategy of determining importance by locating and highlighting factual information in the piece of writing and then presenting/rewriting the facts from the original text in an objective manner. Group students in mixed ability pairs and explicitly state that both partners must contribute equally.

40. Information Texts - How and Why

For the Student

Ask students: How can I make my writing more interesting and give more detail in my factual explanations without giving my opinion? Discuss as a class.

When writing information, an author usually has to explain not just about the topic, but to give reasons why a particular thing is the way it is. For example instead of writing ‘Tigers are striped’, an author may show the effect their colouring has by writing ‘Tigers are striped and this helps them blend into the jungle around them’. When you are an author, you can make your writing more interesting by linking the facts with interesting information that supports the facts.

Have a look at these sets of sentences. Can you sort them as cause and effect and link them together to make the writing more detailed and interesting?

Can you think of your own effect clauses the add to these sentences to make them more detailed and informative?

For the Teacher

Information texts - cause and effect

Purpose

To link cause and effect to add greater detail and interest to factual writing.

Resources

Notebook file: cause and effect

cause_and_effect.notebook

Teaching tips

Provide students with a series of related sentences about the water cycle which are broken up into cause and effect statements. Students have to rearrange the sentences and put them back together. They analyse how sentences with cause and effect provide detail and greater interest to the text.

Students create their own sentences with cause and effect to explain aspects of water health/plant life etc. related to unit content.

41. Information Texts - Adding Relevant Description

For the Student

When composing an information text you need to include relevant and specific words to describe the things you are writing about. This will increase the detail of your writing, as well as make it more informative and interesting. While an information text doesn’t contain unnecessary adjectives, there are occasions where the noun and adjectives are closely linked and therefore relevant to the subject e.g.

  • the plants around the edge of the water
  • the water from the bottom of the pond

Can you edit this information text to add specific and relevant adjectival groups to further describe the noun?

For the Teacher

Information texts - nouns and adjectives

Purpose

To add adjectival groups to nouns to enhance detail in information.

Resources

'Teaching tool' for adjectival and adverbial phrases

Adj_and_Adverbs.ppt

Teaching tips

While factual writing is objective, detail can be used to enhance the information presented through adjectival groups to describe specific nouns. Students need to identify when adjectives can be used in their report writing to make it more informative. In this lesson they add adjectival groups to facts to augment the detail and description of the content.

42. Information Texts - Verbs and Adverbs

For the Student

When writing information texts, a variety of language choices can still be used objectively to add greater interest to your writing e.g. instead of writing the water goes down the river, you could write:

  • The water flows down the river.
  • The water winds down the river.

Aside from choosing your verb carefully, you can also add adverbial clauses or adverbial groups to your verb to give more information. These groups will give more information eight about the manner (how), time (when), location (where), accompaniment (who), or reason (why) e.g.

  • Manner – easily, quickly, with caution
  • Location – inside, outside, away from
  • Time – yesterday, at night, just before dawn
  • Reason – for safety, to protect themselves
  • Accompaniment – alone, together

So now can we make the first sentence even more interesting by adding an adverbial clause? e.g. Each day the water flows quickly down the river away from the water treatment plant.

Now add an adverbial clause to the sentence, focusing on one group (e.g. manner etc.) at a time. Share your sentences with a partner.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To use adverbial groups to describe manner, location, time, reason and accompaniment of actions.

Teaching tips

Students are encouraged to use interesting word choices in their writing by considering appropriate verb choices to describe an action e.g. for water: goes, ebbs, flows, runs, winds etc.

From this point they consider how to add adjectival phrases to their writing, so more detail is included in their text. Elements of adjectival groups, their categories and how they can be added to writing should be explicitly modelled and taught before students attempt to add their own. A list of different words, brainstormed before beginning the activity may support some students.

43. Information Texts - Planning Content

For the Student

In this activity, you will be assigned your writing project in Scholar.

First, plan to write an information text by using text mapping. In the centre of your map is the title of the information text and each line from the central box indicates a paragraph topic. Identify headings for each paragraph. Record these headings using the Structure tool in Scholar.

Then reread the text and use determining importance and summarising to take notes of the information using your own words under each section in the Structure tool. Remember note taking can be key words instead of whole sentences.

Now you need to use all you have learnt about information texts to write your own report. You will inform a reader about a component of water conservation and sustainability. Consider the pictures and multimedia you include. Remember that your choices as an author will affect the way the reader views you text, so you will need to be able to justify the choices you make for your report. Think about how you can get a clear message across, which informs people about your topic and is appealing/eye-catching.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To plan for writing an information text by identifying subjects for paragraphs (headings) and grouping relevant information from a text in your own words. Also, to position a reader through informed choices about presentation and word choice.

Teaching tips

For the culminating writing activity, students use visual literacy to project the information about the environment in a positive manner to an audience.

Students will write an information report about one of the following topics:

  • Water conservation at home - how the things you do at home impact your drinking water and the water of others
  • Desirable and undesirable plant life in our water systems
  • Healthy water and it's components
  • How to maintain a healthy habitat to conserve our water systems
  • Or another topic of their choice, approved by the teacher

Teaching tips

The teacher can model how to determine heading/paragraph titles and note taking using summarising to record key information in their own words.

Students apply their learning about the text type to: give their report a title, form PEC paragraphs under relevant headings/subheadings, use bold and enlarged text to emphasise particular points, write objectively, using technical language acquired throughout the unit, use pictures to support information, colour to catch the eye of the reader and support theme (e.g. green for environment).


Project Rubric

44. Information Texts - Planning Paragraphs

For the Student

Now that you have your key information for each paragragh, you need to plan how you will write your PEC paragraphs in your text.

Save a new version of the text. In Version 2, for each of your headings you need to now determine the Point sentence, what information will form the Elaborate sentences and how you will Conclude each paragraph with a summarising sentence. Check that your plans make sense with a partner and make changes as you need.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To plan the Point, Elaboration and Concluding sentences for each paragraph.

Teaching tips

Reinforce the structure of a PEC paragraph and how to transfer this knowledge into their own writing.

Ask students to provide a clear but general point sentence, which identifies the topic of the paragraph. Elaborations should provide more detail and specific examples, while the

Concluding sentence is another more general statement related to the topic.

Have students check their plans with a partner and give each other constructive feedback about how they have planned their paragraphs.

45. Information Texts - Giving Feedback

For the Student

Today we are going to use Author's Chair to proofread, check and improve each other's information texts from last lesson.

First, let's have a go at editing a piece of work together on the board. First let's read it through and find some things we like about the writing. Who can tell me what they've found?

Now we give to give some constructive feedback, which means we make some suggestions about how they could improve the layout or wording of their writing to better meet the success criteria. We'll look and see whether the author has used the correct structural features, language features, technical words etc.

Now you're going to have a go at using Author's Chair to proofread and suggest improvements for a friends work. remember all the things we just looked at, you need to include things they've done well and ideas they can use to make their writing even better.

Now go into Scholar, check your Notifications for Review Requests. Give feedback to your peers.

For the Teacher

Purpose

To edit a peer's work and offer suggestions for improvements.

Teaching tips

This activity can be used to scaffold giving feedback in Scholar.

As part of Author's Chair it is essential that students first acknowledge things their partner has done well in their writing, rather than just focusing on negatives.

Students should be explicitly taught how to provide specific, constructive feedback that a person can use to improve their work.

A clear list of expectations for work samples and different areas where students can look to make enhancements should be provided, especially to lower students.

46. Acknowledgements

Title: (Source); Fig. 1: Photograph taken by Bonython PS Teachers; Fig. 2 (Source).