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Weaving a Narrative into an Information Text in Wolves by Emily Gravett

Learning Module

Abstract

This is a literacy based learning element with a focus on the visuals and language features of narrative and information texts. Students study "Wolves" by Emily Gravett to understand how narratives and information texts work, and then create their own multimodal texts.

Keywords

Narrative, Information Text, Visual Literacy, Language. Analysis, Multimodal.

1. Words about Wolves and Rabbits?

For the Student

Focus Questions

In this learning module, you will study Wolves, a picture book by Emily Gravett. The focus questions are:

How do narratives and information texts work together to make meaning?

How do I analyze the language features of a text?

How do I analyze the visual features of a text?

How do I write an informative/explanatory text to complement a narrative text?

Learning Intention: To share your prior knowledge of wolves and rabbits.

Let's start by sharing words you already know about wolves and rabbits. Think about words/phrases that are opinions and facts. For example:

  • Opinion: A wolf has a spine-tingling howl
  • Fact: A wolf is a hunter and is hunted

Comment: When directed by your teacher, start adding the words and phrases that come to mind about wolves and rabbits. The goal is to make a class word list with as many words/phrases as possible. Keep adding words until you can't think of any others. Look at what other students have written as this might make you think of other words too. You might also look up an online dictionary. Then, when you have run out of words, look at the list to see whether the class has added more factual words or more opinion words. For example: "Scary" is an opinion about wolves, but "Sharp Claws" is a fact. Write a comment in which you choose one word/phrase from the list that you think is an opinion about wolves and/or rabbits, and one word/phrase that reflects a fact.

Fig 1: Long-Eared Rabbit

For the Teacher

This learning module was designed using the Learning by Design framework (Kalantzis and Cope) which is based on Multiliteracies theory.

Updates 1 and 2 focus on valuing the prior knowledge of students, build their background knowledge of the text, and expand their vocabulary as they explore the topic. An example of a fact and an opinion about wolves is provided as a model for students. As the teacher, you can also add comments in the discussion in Community to provide more modelling, and to support, challenge, and extend individual students.

Identifying facts and opinions is important so that when analyzing the focus text, "Wolves" by Emily Gravett, students will understand how factual texts can include opinions, attitudes and imaginative ideas through the images.

Main CCSS Focus

W.6.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content.

CCSS Focus

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.6.1c: Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion.

L.6.6: Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases; gather vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression.

2. What Else do You Know about Wolves and Rabbits?

For the Student

Learning Intention: To share and extend prior knowledge by researching wolves and/or rabbits.

First of all, work with a partner and sketch a rabbit and a wolf. What colours would you choose? How big is each animal in each sketch? Look at the sketches of other students and discuss similarities and differences. Alternatively, you could create your own Update in Community and attach a scan of your drawing. You can look at other students' drawings and discuss how they are the same and different.

To create an Update, go to Community => Open the pull down menu of your specific Community => Select Updates => Add an Update. Then add the scan of your image. Invite other students to comment on it, especially how it is the same and different from their images.

Comment: Think about all the ways that you could find out more information about wolves and rabbits if you wanted to. Would you go to a library and borrow a book? After researching some information about wolves and/or rabbits, add a comment that includes some information as well as its source. For example, add a fact about wolves and/or rabbits and a link to the source of the information.

Fig. 2: Playful Wolves

Watch a short video about Playful Wolves.

For the Teacher

Drawing the images are important as they also can be compared later to the drawings in the picture book and the sorts of stereotypes there are of these animals. Creating an Update in Community enables the students to add an image to their post and share them with their peers. If it is difficult for students to scan and post their images, they could be displayed around the room instead; students could then walk around and discuss them with a partner, identifying similarities and differences.

Encourage students to use a variety of sources to align with the suggestions in the story of borrowing from a library. Suggesting different sources of information about wolves and rabbits links to the library book idea which they will discover in the next Update; certainly libraries may not be as typical in the life worlds of students as online searches for information. Point out how different it was to borrow a book before libraries had electronic borrowing (or burrowing) systems. You could also show students the library card in the front of the book.

Check the Community Settings. So that students can create their own Updates, the "Content" should be unrestricted. The "Member" should be "Closed" or preferably "Private" for minors.

Screenshot 1: Community Settings

CCSS Focus

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

W.6.8: Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources.

3. Reading "Wolves" by Emily Gravett

For the Student

Learning Intention: To read and respond to "Wolves" by Emily Gravett.

Look at the cover of "Wolves" by Emily Gravett. What is the animal on the front? Do you know other books by this author?

What do you think often happens in picture books like this? Predict what you think the story will be about. Share your predictions with a partner.

Look at the inside cover and back covers. You'll notice a library card. How do you borrow books from the library? What else can you borrow from the library besides books? For homework, ask your parents and grandparents how they borrowed books from the library? Find out if it is the same or different as "Wolves".

Now listen to the story being read to you and follow along, looking at the images too. At the first stop point, With your partner, discuss whether your prediction is still okay. Revise it if you like. Do this again at the second stop point.

Then with a partner, create a plot diagram in which you include the most important events in "Wolves".

Comment: After you have heard the story and created your plot diagram, write a comment in which you describe your favourite parts and give reasons why. Also comment on why you think your teacher has chosen to study this book when it seems like a book for young children.

Fig. 3: Wolves by Emily Gravett

For the Teacher

In this "Experiencing the new" activity, students read and respond to the text. This input is designed to broaden their experiences and knowledge. The "Wolves" text is multimodal, with both visual and language modes, so it taps into life world interests by presenting varied information, and also by presenting it in different modes – multimodally. Exciting and engaging input at the "Experiencing the new" stage can really make a difference to the success of the whole learning module.

The prediction activity is important to engage students in reading the text. Stop at least twice in the story. Early in the story, e.g. "They can survive almost anywhere: from the Arctic Circle...." and just before the resolution - "They also enjoy smaller mammals like beavers, voles and .... rabbits."

Using open-ended questions to respond to the text such as what are your favorite parts, enables students to bring their own knowledge and experiences to the text. This values diverse responses before you move into the explicit teaching of the text that follows in "Conceptualizing by Naming" and "Theorizing". You could also ask students to find out information from their parents and grandparents; this values their cultural knowledge.

It is important to include ways of describing/ retelling/sharing aspects of the text in "Experiencing the new" so that students use their own language/versions of English. Lisa Delpit in "Other People’s Children" (1995) stresses the need for students to have access to the language of power, but still have their own ways of speaking and thinking, including identity, valued in non-deficit ways.

The "Plot Diagram can be completed electronically. It supports students to reflect as well as being an engaging way of identifying important events in the text, and making inferences about the text. The Comment also prompts students to provide reasons for their opinions. In doing so, students may also provide evidence from the text.

Resources

Gravett, E. (2006). Wolves. London: Macmillan. This is available on Amazon in both paper and digital versions.

CCSS Focus

RL.6.1 and RI.6.1: Cite textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

RL.6.10: By the end of the year, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 6-8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range.

4. Words and Pictures Working Separately

For the Student

Learning Intention: To understand how the words and the pictures in "Wolves" work together.

Form a group of four. Two of you can choose to look at the words only (Group 1); the other two can choose to look at the pictures only (Group 2).

Group 1: You are looking at an information text. What is it about? Describe some of its features. What facts are included? What opinions are included?

An information text uses facts to explain something, gives details about a topic and does not contain a personal view. It includes a general opening statement, paragraphs ordered logically and a general concluding statement. Does the text of "Wolves" follow this structure?

Record your discussion on one side of a Venn Diagram (electronic) or a Compare and Contrast Diagram.

Attachment 1: Words in Wolves

Group 2: You are looking at the narrative through the pictures. What is it about? Describe some of its features. What facts are included? What imaginative ideas are included? What opinions are included?

A narrative generally has an orientation, complication, resolution and evaluation. Do the images in "Wolves" follow this structure?

Record your discussion on the other side of a Venn Diagram (electronic)or a Compare and Contrast Diagram.

Then Groups 1 and 2 combine to record what the narrative and information text have in common.This can be recorded in the crossover of the Venn Diagram or in the "Similar Characteristics" column of the Compare and Contrast Diagram

Comment: What did you enjoy most - reading the words or looking at the images? Why? Also share some of the findings of your discussion about how the narrative and the information text are the same and different, and how they work together to add deeper meanings. Comment on the comments of other students, building on their ideas, and summarizing how you agree and disagree.

Fig 4: Gray Wolf

For the Teacher

In "Conceptualising by naming", the students work in groups to identify the features of either the narrative or information text. Working in groups, promotes speaking and listening as well as shifting the balance of agency from teachers to students. It also provides a metalanguage for students so they can participate in the learning, hence addressing diversity.

To ensure students have some scaffolding as well as accountability, they record ideas on a Venn Diagram or a Compare and Contrast Diagram, and then share their work with another group. Using cooperative learning and thinking tools ensure students do the thinking, rather than depending on the teacher to do the thinking for them, so more shifting of the balance of agency.

Type up the words of the "Wolves" text so Group 2 can focus without being distracted by the images. Allow each group to choose whether they will record on a Venn Diagram or a Compare and Contrast Diagram. Choice is also good to provide student agency.

Students are more likely to record points about the ideas in the text and how it is structured so scaffolding is important here.

Link the discussion back to the initial frontloading activity when students sorted their ideas into facts and opinions. They may also include some language features, but this will be covered in depth in a later activity.

CCSS Focus

RL.6.7: Compare and contrast the experience of reading a story, drama, or poem to listening to or viewing an audio, video, or live version of the text, including what they "see" and "hear" when reading the text to what they perceive when they listen or watch.

RI.6.7: Integrate information presented in different media or formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively) as well as in words to develop a coherent understanding of a topic or issue.

RL.6.9: Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres (e.g., stories and poems, historical novels and fantasy stories) in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics.

RL.6.10: By the end of the year, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 6-8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.6.1c: Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion.

5. Words and Pictures Working Together

For the Student

Learning Intention: To evaluate the effects of using words and images in a text.

What happens when a narrative and an information text combine?

In your group of four, use a Plus,Minus,Interesting (PMI) to explore this.

Comment: Add pluses (P), minuses (M) and interesting (I) points from your discussion. Make sure you write whether it is a P, M or I. Keep adding ideas from your discussion until you run out of ideas. As you read other ideas, you might think of more to add. Then write a comment on whether you think "Wolves is a good book and why/why not.

Fig.5: Rabbit

For the Teacher

After naming the features in Activity 4, students now evaluate the effects of when the two texts combine. This activity is scaffolded using a PMI (Plus, Minus, Interesting) chart and students then share their discussion through comments in Community.

A good learning design incorporates all knowledge processes, especially so that students move from having knowledge to developing understanding of the topic. For example "Conceptualising by naming" is about gaining deep knowledge while "Conceptualising by theorising" moves this knowledge to understanding. It also moves knowledge from short term memory to long term memory as students have a connection for recalling the knowledge they have gained.

This activity will enable the students to think more deeply about how the text works and why it is effective.

CCSS Focus

RL.6.7: Compare and contrast the experience of reading a story, drama, or poem to listening to or viewing an audio, video, or live version of the text, including what they "see" and "hear" when reading the text to what they perceive when they listen or watch.

RI.6.7: Integrate information presented in different media or formats (e.g., visually, quantitatively) as well as in words to develop a coherent understanding of a topic or issue.

RL.6.9: Compare and contrast texts in different forms or genres (e.g., stories and poems, historical novels and fantasy stories) in terms of their approaches to similar themes and topics.

RL.6.10: By the end of the year, read and comprehend literature, including stories, dramas, and poems, in the grades 6-8 text complexity band proficiently, with scaffolding as needed at the high end of the range.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.6.1c: Pose and respond to specific questions with elaboration and detail by making comments that contribute to the topic, text, or issue under discussion.

6. The Grammar of Visual and Linguistic Texts

For the Student

Learning Intention: To analyze the visual and language elements of the text.

Complete the following two tables by finding examples from the text. You may find more than one example and you can also add more effects too.

Visual Elements
Visual Mode Examples Effects
Color Makes wolf fearsome
Shot Type - Close Up Creates fear
Framing Wolf is contained and less fearsome
Intertextuality Makes the wolf threatening
Gaze Humor
Intertextuality Links to reading, books and libraries
Comedic elements Defuses tension
Sketched images (not photos) Not threatening and suited to a children's story
Language Elements
Language Mode Examples Effects
Short sentences/Single clauses Focuses the reader's attention on facts and details
Third person Impersonal and factual
Precise adjectives Factual
Present Tense It's happening now - makes it scarier
Technical language Adds credibility
New ending Twist - engaging and humorous
Attachment 1: Visual and Language Elements in Wolves

Submit your completed chart to Submissions in your Community.

Comment: After analysing the effects of the visual and language features of "Wolves", identify your favorite features and explain the effects. Comment on the comments of other students, identifying points of agreement and disagreement.

Fig. 6: A close up makes the wolf look more ferocious.

For the Teacher

"Analysing functionally" is where we focus on the visual and linguistic grammar to explore the text at the word and sentence level. We have already explored the structure of texts in the "Conceptualising by naming" activity so we don’t need to explore that again even though it could be included in this knowledge process too.

Basically this activity looks at the visual and language modes, using examples from the text, and then looks at their effects. Use a retrieval chart to model the language features of the text. You can model 2 or 3 examples and then ask students to work cooperatively to complete as much of the retrieval chart as possible. Then complete it as a whole class activity. This will enable you to explicitly teach grammatical features.

The last column requires the students to think about the effects of these techniques. This involves evaluating the text to understand how it impacts on an audience, especially how it might position an audience or make them respond with feelings such as empathy, suspense, fear, judgement and humour.

This activity makes the students look closely at the text to describe what they see and gives them a language to talk about the ‘grammar’ of the text. It also supports them when making language and visual choices in the creation of their own texts. To reinforce the elements of the mode, they could identify them in other texts or practice using them, where applicable in writing, e.g changing a text from present to past tense and vice versa or identifying technical terms for a topic and creating sentences.

For accountability, students may also be required to submit completed charts to the teacher through Submissions in Community.

Visual Elements
Visual Mode Examples Effects
Color Grey colours Makes wolf fearsome
Shot Type - Close Up Wolf's legs and claws Creates fear
Framing Wolf in frame of book Wolf is contained and less fearsome
Intertextuality Wolf dressed as Grandma in Little Red Riding Hood Makes the wolf threatening
Gaze The rabbit is unaware of the wolf (has head in book) Humor
Intertextuality Postcards, library cards, artifacts Links to reading, books and libraries
Comedic elements Wolf and rabbit having a meal Defuses tension
Sketched images (not photos) Drawing of wolf Not threatening and suited to a children's story
Language Elements
Language Mode Examples Effects
Short sentences/Single clauses Wolves eat mainly meat. Focuses the reader's attention on facts and details
Third person They/its/an adult wolf Impersonal and factual
Precise adjectives Bushy, sharp Factual
Present Tense An adult wolf has 42 teeth. It's happening now - makes it scarier
Technical language prey, woodlands, survival Adds credibility
New ending The wolf was a vegetarian Twist - engaging and humorous

CCSS Focus

RL.6.4: Determine the meaning of words and phrases (and visual features) as they are used in a text, including figurative and connotative meanings; analyze the impact of a specific word (and visual) choice on meaning and tone.

RI.6.5: Analyze how a particular sentence, paragraph, chapter, or section (or visual) fits into the overall structure of a text and contributes to the development of ideas.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.6.1c: Pose questions that elicit elaboration and respond to other' questions and comments with relevant observations and ideas that bring the discussion back on topic as needed.

7. Other Perspectives

For the Student

Learning Intention: To understand other perspectives to "Wolves" by Emily Gravett.

Choose one or more of the following to describe how different people/characters might respond to "Wolves" by Emily Gravett. You can do some online research such as Wolf Web or Defenders of Wildlife or The Gray Wolf to find out more. You could also find out more about Emily Gravett as an author and illustrator.

One of the perspectives has been completed for you as a model.

Exploring Perspectives through Pros, Cons and Questions
Perspective Pros (advantages, benefits, strengths) Cons (negatives, opposing ideas, disadvantages) Questions (probes, what ifs)
Wolf Hunter Humans will not feel threatened by wolves. Wolves are carnivores so if they become vegetarian, the populations of animals such as voles, elk, deer, moose and caribou, beaver and rabbits will not be kept in check. Will I be able to find other work if I can no longer hunt wolves?
Animal Lover
Environmentalist
Wolf
Rabbit
Farmer
Librarian
Child
Parent
Author
Illustrator
Indigenous Person, e.g.Eskimo
Other

Comment: Share one perspective, including at least one pro, one con and one question. After considering many perspectives, what do you think Emily Gravett's purpose was in writing "Wolves"? what do you think the author/illustrator's purpose was? Provide a reason for your opinion. Did she have more than one purpose? Comment on the comments of other students, building on and extending their ideas wherever possible.

Fig. 7: Wolves were re-introduced to Yellowstone National Park to control the elk and protect the eco-system

For the Teacher

Providing a knowledge of the grammar of texts in "Analysing functionally" supports students so they can create their own texts in "Applying". It also enables them to understand the choices authors make to position readers in particular ways in "Analysing critically". So by presenting the wolf as fearsome through the shot type, colour and adjectives, the author is able to build tension and then present an engaging twist in the new ending of the story in which the wolf is a vegetarian. This also presents other perspectives, rather than a stereotype of a wolf. These perspectives are pursued in more detail in the "Analysing critically" activity in which students investigate a range of perspectives from hunters to animal lovers and even Indigenous people. They can then value a variety of cultural knowledges and perspectives.

Emphasise that students have a high level of accountability as they may be the only student representing a particular point of view. Students could also add other points of view to consider. They should also do some online research in order to investigate issues such as the impact of rabbits on environmental biodiversity and provide evidence for their responses.

CCSS Focus

RI.6.6: Determine an author's point of view or purpose in a text and explain how it is conveyed in the text.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 7 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

SL.6.1c: Pose questions that elicit elaboration and respond to other' questions and comments with relevant observations and ideas that bring the discussion back on topic as needed.

8. Project Information and Draft: A Multimodal Text

For the Student

Fig. 8: Wolf Love

Learning Intention: To start my writing project and to use the rubric to identify what is important to include.

Project Name: Weaving an Information Text into a Picture Book

Description: Find a narrative/picture book. Perhaps it could be a favorite one from when you were younger. You could also go to the library and find one. Think about the main topic that it covers and research information that could accompany it. Then write an information text to align with the images in the picture book.

This where you start your writing project by checking your Notifications and clicking on the "Work Request". The link will take you to Creator where you can start writing. Clicking on the "Work Request" is very important so that the work that you create is connected to the project that your teacher has set up.

You should look in the "About This Work" to find out more information about the project, change its title, create an outline for your work using the "Structure" tool, and check the timeline. You can even have a dialogue with your teacher.

For what you need to do in order to write a good informative/explanatory text, go to "Feedback". In "Reviews", open the "Rubric". Keep the rubric open and refer to it as you write.

When you are ready to submit, click “Submit Draft” below the work. This is the version of your work that will be sent to others for feedback.

Comment: Do you have any questions about how Scholar works? Make a comment in this update. If you think you have an answer to another student's question, please answer it - be sure to name the student you are replying to in your comment by starting with @Name.

For the Teacher

When we ask students to apply their knowledge through a report, essay, PPT or multimedia presentation, or in the case of this writing project, to create an information text, they have to be able to move beyond responding, to creating and becoming knowledge producers. "Analysing functionally" and "Analysing critically" provides them with the tools to do this.

Negotiate the task with students as they may have some original ideas on how they could innovate on the text. Support students to research their topics by providing access to electronic and print based resources. Story boards might also provide another scaffold.

As students begin to draft their work, encourage them to use the Structure Tool to organize and outline their texts. The images in the picture book should help them to create an outline. The Structure Tool supports students to develop an initial structure for their text, including notes based on their background knowledge. As they continue to research, they add more notes, refine the elements of their text, and draft new versions, transforming their notes into well written text.

Students should also refer to the rubric as a guide as they write in Creator. If necessary, look through the rubric with students.

For first time users of Scholar, the following Overt Instruction Updates from The Writer's Toolkit: Strategies for Writing in the New Media may be useful to post to Community:

  • How to Write in Scholar
  • Using the Rubric and Checker
  • Planning Using the Structure Tool
Screenshot 2: Rubric

CCSS Focus

W.6.2: Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content.

W.6.4: Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose and audience.

W.6.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, as well as interact and collaborate with others.

9. Give Feedback and Revise

For the Student

Learning Intention: To give feedback on other students’ works and then revise my own.

Check your Notifications for Feedback Requests: You have received a Feedback Request. Click on this link to take you to the work you have been assigned to review. Go to Feedback => Reviews => Review Work. Rate the work on each criterion and explain why you gave the work that rating. Make in-text comments at Feedback => Annotations. Make an overall recommendation at Feedback => Recommendation.

Submit your feedback once it is finished at About This Work => Project => Status. You will not be able to submit your review until all requirements set by you teacher have been met. These may include a Review, Annotations, and/or a Publication Recommendation.

For more information, see Reviewing a Work and Submitting a Review and Annotations.

The next stage of the writing process is to revise your own work.

Check your Notifications for a Revision Request: You have received a Revision Request. Click on this link to take you to the most recent version of your work. Then go to Feedback => Reviews => Results to see the reviews and Feedback => Annotations to see in-text comments. Once you have incorporated all of the feedback (Reviews/Annotations) from your peers, click “Submit Revision” below the work.

You can also write a self-review, explaining how you have taken on board the feedback you received.

For more information, see The Revision Phase.

Comment: Do you have any more questions about Scholar at this stage? Make a comment in this update. If you think you have an answer to another student's question, please answer it - be sure to name the student you are replying to in your comment by starting with @Name.

Fig 9: Desert Cottontail

For the Teacher

This update covers two stages of the writing process in Scholar: Review and Revision.

The following Overt Instruction Updates from The Writer's Toolkit: Strategies for Writing in the New Media may be useful to add to Community. They may be used with first time users or it may be appropriate to introduce them in a second writing project so students learn about the features of Scholar over time.

  • Constructive Feedback: Annotations - this guides students in how to provide specific feedback through Annotations.
  • Constructive Feedback: Reviews - this describes types of feedback such as critical, cheerleader and constructive feedback.
  • Revision Phase - this focuses on how to use the feedback students receive to improve their writing, and includes writing a self review. Many students go through the peer review process and then do not revise their work. Writing a self review in which they explain how they have/have not used their feedback is important to develop students' metacognition further.

Refer to Analytics to monitor how students are progressing with their writing and reviews.

CCSS Focus

W.6.5: With some guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.

W.6.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, as well as interact and collaborate with others.

L.6.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing.

L.6.2: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation and spelling when writing.

10. Publish and Reflect

For the Student

Learning Intention: To identify what is successful writing.

Check Notifications to see if your work has been published and whether works that you provided feedback on have been selected for publication. Published works may be viewed on your and any collaborators' individual profiles in Community.

Comment: Read two - three other people’s published informative/explanatory texts. Write a comment about the most interesting thing you learned from reading them. This might be ideas you hadn’t thought of or interesting evidence such as facts that you didn’t know. Also comment about one thing you have learned about writing informative/explanatory texts. Mention the creator and title of the work, and make a link to that page so the person reading your comment can jump to the page quickly.

Fig. 10: Wolf Pack in Yellowstone National Park

For the Teacher

This Update focuses on the publication and reflection phases of a writing project.

Notifications of publication are provided to the creator and all reviewers.

This reflection activity promotes student metacognition about what makes quality writing by reading and reflecting on other students’ writing. Ask students to look over other people’s published works - have them read at least two or three works. Ask them to comment on something interesting they learned from reading other students’ work. 

CCSS Focus

W.6.6: Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing, as well as interact and collaborate with others.

SL.6.1: Engage effectively in a range of collaborative discussions (one-on-one, in groups, and teacher-led) with diverse partners on grade 6 topics, texts and issues, building on others' ideas and expressing their own clearly.

11. Acknowledgements

Title: Gray Wolf (Source); Fig. 1: (Source); Fig. 2: (Source); Fig. 3: Amazon (Source); Fig. 4: (Source); Fig. 5: (Source); Fig. 6: (Source); Fig. 7: (Source); Fig. 8: (Source); Fig. 9: (Source); Fig. 10: (Source).