This is a learning module for a 5th grade biography writing unit, but could easily be modified for younger learners as well as older ones as it is very personalized. This is based off of the curriculum *Schoolwide, with many supplemental pieces to make it a multi-literacy approach to writing.
Duration: The unit as a whole should take approximately 5-6 weeks to complete.
Although this module covers many standards, including speaking and listening ones, the main Common Core writing standards addressed are:
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.2
Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas and information clearly.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.4
Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.5
With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.7
Conduct short research projects that use several sources to build knowledge through investigation of different aspects of a topic.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.8
Recall relevant information from experiences or gather relevant information from print and digital sources; summarize or paraphrase information in notes and finished work, and provide a list of sources.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.9
Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.
CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.5.10
Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences.
This module requires students to each have their own Writer's Notebooks. Also, the use of various online tools, including Epic! and Seesaw for blogging (requires subscription).
*Schoolwide is a reading and writing curriculum that is set up as a workshop approach. Each of the writing units follow the same steps through the writing process: Immersion, Generating Ideas, Selecting, Collecting, Drafting, Revising, Editing, and Publishing. If following the curriculum units, this will not be their first writing piece, and students should be familiar with the writing process steps.
Before we start our writing unit, please complete the pre-survey on your writing impressions.
Objective: Understand the features of the biography genre
Now that you have seen and heard a biography from the read aloud of River Boy, look back over your list of biography features in your Writer's Notebook. Can you add any additional features?
Log into your Epic! account and read the book A Picture Book of Harry Houdini and take the quiz
Add any additional features that you noticed while reading the book to the page in your Writer's Notebooks.
Now that you've looked at a couple of biographies, watch the video which summarizes the elements that are found in this genre.
Assignment: Log on to our Writing class on Seesaw and post your response to, "What do you think are the two most important features of a biography, why?"
Respond to at least two of your classmates, offering thoughts on their views.
Remeber what a good response entails:
Background: It is important for students to have a clear grasp of the genre before writing themselves. Have students brainstorm what they already know about biography, to determine where students depth of knowledge is. Build on this knowledge, to ensure students know the components of a biography, so they can write one themselves.
Duration: The immersion process should take one to two days. With the teacher lesson on one day, and the student module the second
Preparation:
Epic! account, with A Picture Book of Harry Houdini by David and Michael Adler put in the biography collection for students.
Lesson:
Before the Read
During and After the Read
Extension Possibilites
Objective: Students will be able to generate a list of possible biography subjects that they are passionate about.
Lesson 1, Role Models:
Role models are people that we look up to, and we want to emulate (be like). You have just listened to the book Celia Cruz, Queen of Salsa, she was a role model to the author, Veronica Chambers. Open your writer's notebook to a new page and label it, "What is a Role Model?"
Watch the video, while listening write down descriptive words and phrases that are used that you believe make up a good role model.
Assignment:
Lesson 2, Subjects from History:
Assignment:
Lesson 3, Inspirational Subjects We Know Well:
Assignment: Add to your T Chart. Come up with at least five (5) people in your life, that you know well, that are role models to you.
Once complete, go back and choose one. Write a one to three paragraph quick write about what you look up to them about, in your writer's notebook.
Background: Biographers write about role models. It is important for students to choose a subject that is meaningful to them, so they are invested in their research for the biography they will write.
Duration: Generating should take three class days, with a lesson each day.
Preparation:
Lesson 1, Role Models:
Read Celia Cruz, Queen of Salsa as a read aloud. Pause to point out the text features that are a part of biographies, be sure to point out the introduction and conclusions.
After the read, hold a discussion about why Veronica Chambers selected Celia Cruz as her subject. Guide the discussion to talk about role models and what they are. Turn to the author's note, read and discuss Cruz's insights.
Next, have students pull out their writer's notebooks and turn to a new page. Additionally, have them start their module to follow along.
Lesson 2, Subjects from History:
Students will read the book George Washington: A Life of Self-Discipline by Anne Todd on their Epic! accounts. This is a lower level book (630L) purposefully because students are using this to gather ideas of possible subjects, with this being one example.
Direct students to their accounts as well as their learning module, and tell them to have their writer's notebooks opened to a new page.
Troubleshooting: If students know of a person, but not really much about them, you could allow them to complete quick research on their iPad, to find out their biggest achievements.
Lesson 3, Inspirational Subjects We Know Well:
Start by showing the read aloud book, Salt in His Shoes and elict students to share what they know about Michael Jordan.
Point out the authors, Michael's mother and sister. What could they tell us about Michael, that other writers could not? Hold a discussion.
Read the book. After the read ask the class what they learned from Michael Jordan's mom and sister, that only they could have told us.
On chart paper label it, "People our Class Knows Well." Label one side "Who We Know," and label the other side "Why We Write About Them." Chart a few ideas to get students going. (Example, I could write about my grandfather. He is no longer in my life, but I could share memories of how he modeled strength and determination.)
Troubleshooting: Guiding questions for students struggling to think of names:
Direct students to the learning module, have them keep their writer's notebooks out.
Objective: Students will be able to choose their biography subject. This should be a person who they will commit to reseraching and developing a writing piece around them.
Step 1: Look back through your writer's notebook, reading over all of your potential subjects that you have thought about so far. Put a star next to three names that stand out to you, people you are passionate about, want to learn more about and are willing to research a lot about.
Step 2: Run a quick search on the Internet to see how much information you can easily find about your three candidates.
For people in the news and historical figures, visit Yahoo.com.
For celebrities and people of note, visit Biography.com.
For general searches, visit Infoplease.com.
If you're thinking of using a family member or friend, ask yourself, will you have time to interview them, as well as other people who know them outside of class, to accumulate your research?
Step 3: Answer the following questions for each of your three candidates (yes or no).
Is the person's life worth writing about?
Do you feel strongly about the person?
Has the person made a difference in the world?
Does the person fascinate you?
Does the person's life make a good story?
Step 4: Which person's life stands out as the best story? That's your subject! Add it to our Sheets Document, next to your number.
Step 5: Choose your audience. Watch the video below to help with this. Add this to the Sheets Document, as well.
Audience Options:
Assignment: Complete a blog post on Seesaw:
Complete a quick write: state your subject, why you chose them, and what you already know about them.
Comment on at least two classmate's posts. Offer at least two wonderings you have about their subjects, to help them start their research process.
Background: When students select their biography subject, it should be someone they are passionate about, and commited to. They do not need to already be an expert on the person, rather, it could be better for them to not think they already know everything there is to know so they can get the most of the next phase of writing, collecting.
Students should choose someone that they had previously brainstormed in their writer's notebooks.
Duration: One class period
Extensions: Students can choose the type of biography they would like to complete.
Troubleshooting: If students are struggling with who to choose, have them complete the "Selecting a Subject for my Biography" and guide them in the process.
Objective: Students will conduct thorough research, to be able to write a well-rounded biography that includes both primary and secondary resoures.
Lesson, 1 Interesting Questions:
One of the most important parts of biography writing is collecting research on your subject. In order to be an effective researcher, you have to also take great notes. Before starting your research, watch the videos.
If you are more visual, you may want to record your research notes in a sketch note form. Watch the video below:
Now that you have some background on good note-taking, refer to the appendix of questions. Start to research your subject! Refer to the websites below for this research, as they will give you the most information (if you're researching a friend or family member, jump to next section). Record all research in your spirals, be sure to write down the sites that you use!
If you are researching a friend or family member, you will need to interview your subject, as well as other people who knew them. Spend your time today coming up with additional questions that you will ask these people. These can be recorded either in Notes on your iPad, or in your research spiral, wherever you want to record during your interviews.
First, watch the videos on how to interview.
Next, look at this doc and write down questions you will use (in addition to the reference) during your interview.
Assignment: Post on your blog something you learned about your subject that you found interesting. If you still need to interview, post about what you are most interested in learning about your chosen person.
Then, comment on two classmate's blogs, asking at least two further questions you are interested in on their subject, to help them further research.
Lesson 2, Primary and Secondary Sources:
First look over the examples of primary and secondary sources. Put a star next to at least TWO primary sources and TWO secondary sources you think you could use for your biography subject.
Next, look at the research you have already collected and identify in your writer's notebook what each one would fall under, label this in the margins.
Then begin to gather more research, trying to find other types of sources. *You must have BOTH primary and secondary sources in your final piece.*
Watch the video for help on how to find digital primary sources.
Assignment: Post on your blog one thing you learned from a secondary source and one thing you learned from a primary source about your biography subject.
Then, comment on two classmate's blogs, asking at least two further questions you are interested in on their subject, to help them further research.
Lesson 3, Making a Timeline:
Biographies are ordered chronologically, in order of time. You are going to create a timeline of the research that you have gathered so far, using Readwritethink. Watch the tutorial video first.
Assignments:
Background: Biographies are more than just a compilation of facts about a person. A good biographer must also weave a story around their subject to make it interesting and enganging, this requires much research.
Duration: The collecting phase should take about a week, with each lesson taking one to two days, depending on student readiness.
Preparation:
Lesson, 1 Interesting Questions:
Troubleshooting: You may want to pull a small group, as needed, to help students organize their notes, as this is a very difficult task for some.
Lesson 2, Primary and Secondary Sources:
Lesson 3, Making a Timeline:
Objective: Students will be able to use their research and timelines to complete a graphic organizer on their subject which will then allow them to write a rough draft.
Now that you have had your organizer check, you should have on your desk:
Before you begin drafting, follow the steps below:
Using a one column strategy, as you can see, will make it a lot easier when we get to the revising stage because you'll have space to do this. Also, do NOT write on the backs of the paper, so that we can lay your whole biography out. Yes, it uses a lot of paper for this stage, but it will be far easier to see your thinking and make changes, if needed.
Background: In order for a writing piece to be successful, it needs to be organized in a coherent manner, with related information grouped together. Students will look at different structures they can use to organize their biographies.
Duration: The drafting phase should take about 2-3 days. One full day (after the modeling is complete) should be dedicated for students to draft their own peices, with additional time in class if you do not want it to be finished as homework.
Preparation:
*Note: For Abe Lincoln, read the author's note, as this is the formal essay structure that would align with the organizer
Objective: Students will be able to revise their rough drafts, paying attention to both idea development and organization.
Lesson 1, Idea Development:
Refer to the graphic for the proper revising cues on your draft.
For these activities, remember you are revising, which means you're making your writing sound better. Refer to the picture below to help you clarify between the two.
Activity 1
Find a partner and work through the revising strategy
Activity 2
Find a NEW partner, complete the next revising strategy
Assignment: Post on your blog, what did you learn about yourself as a writer from revising this way?
Background: Revising is one of the most important parts of the writing process. It is also one of the most challenging for students, as they want to be done and not go back into their work. This is the stage where they focus on their structure, word choice and their purpose.
Duration: The revising stage should take about 2-3 days to complete.
Preparation:
Students will be working in partners. They will need to work where they are able to read, markup and not disturb others.
Extensions: Have students meet with additional partners for each of the revising strategies (the more the better).
Objective: Students will be able to peer edit to provide important feedback on the conventions of their writing.
Step 1:
You have just gone through each of the five skills, sign up for your top two comfort skills here.
Step 2:
You have now been assigned to one that you feel comfortable with. Scroll through the corresponding videos and images, and find the one that applies to you. Once done, read over the expecations of the Classroom of Editors.
Spelling
End Punctuation and Paragraphing
Grammar and Verb Tense
Commas and Apostrophes
Capitalization and Dialogue Punctuation
Step 3:
Assignment: Blog post about what you did the best on, with your conventions, and what you need to work on the most. What can you do in the future to help yourself master these skills?
Background: Editing is where writers make their writing look better. During this stage, they are looking at their spelling, grammar and conventions.
Duration: Two class periods, one to explain and group, the second day for students to edit.
Preparation:
Step 1:
Step 2:
Objective: Students will be able to create an Author's Note which explains their point of view, and reasons for choosing their biography subject.
Start by looking at the images on what subjectivity is
As opposed to objective point of view
Now, take a look at these additional Author's Notes. If you log into your Epic! account, you can see these and others in our biography collection.
Now it is time to create your own Author's Note, you may use this template if you'd like.
Assignment: Take a screen shot of your Author's Note and post it to your Seesaw blog. Comment on two peers, what do you think they did well, offer one thing they could add to show more insight into themselves.
Background: It is important for young writer's to share their writing, especially after having worked on it in length. Student writers also should take ownership of their writing, and an author's note is a way for the writer to put their stamp on their piece.
Duration: Two class periods, one for the lesson and one to write their author's note
Preparation:
Lesson:
"My sister and I had the same fourth grade teacher. Her name was Mrs. Curran. My sister disliked Mrs. Curran tremendously. I liked her though. If we each wrote a biography about Mrs. Curran, do you think they would be the same? Why? Why not?"
Discuss how a lot of the facts would be the same, but the angle, tone, and interpretaions of the facts would be different.
Biographies are subjective - meaning the way they are written and presented is affected by the author's point of view, experiences, and background. This is why many biographies have an Author's Note, so the reader can understand the author's take on the subject.
Objective: Students will be able to put all their steps of the writing process together, creating a final piece that can then be reviewed by peers and themselves.
Lesson 1: Final Drafts
Type your final draft, using Docs. Be sure to look through all of the edits and revisions that were suggested.
Next, add in at least two features of a biography:
Lesson 2: Review:
You will be in peer review groups of three. Use the following rubric to rate your peers, follow the instructions below, after you have read through the rubric.
Travel to your review groups. You will exchange biographies. Using your first color, you should read over their biography and score them on the rubric.
Next, for all of the sections (EXCEPT conventions) write on a post-it why you think your peer deserves this score. Place the post-it on their rubric.
Exchange biographies again and repeat the review with a DIFFERENT colored marking pen than your last peer used.
Once you get your writing back, read over the comments. Then, score yourself. On a post-it, write what you will change to make your piece better. Place these post-its ON your draft, where you will revise.
Assessment: Make your revisions the turn in your final draft, with all of your versions, rubrics, post-its, and changes. This way the teacher can see your thinking throughout your writing process.
Background: It is important for students to review not only their work, but their peers. Students will use a student friendly rubric to rate their peer's writing, then they will review themselves.
Duration: Three class periods, one class to type their final drafts, then two additional days for the review process.
Preparation:
Lesson 1: Final Drafts:
Students will type their final drats in Google Docs, so that they can make it multi-modal. They will need to include text features (they have a list provided in their module).
Remind students to cite their new media by including the website they obtained it from.
While students are typing, group them into threes for the next review lesson.
Troubleshooting:
Lesson 2: Review
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